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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Hey. So I haven't written in a while but this idea popped into my head and I just had to write it down.

Hope you guys like it!!


This scene is from when Ruhi and Shravan are heading to college in another city.

Bhalla House

Raman comes home early today to spend some time with his precious daughter. He just can't believe that his little baby is going away so far. If it wasn't for college he would never let her go. He tried stopping her but he was outnumbered by the mother-daughter duo. As he enters the house he notices that it's just his mother in the living room.

Raman: Maa sab kidhar hai?

Mrs Bhalla: Arre puttar tu agaya? Ruhi aur Ishita Ruhi ke kamre mein hai aur...

Raman beelines it out of there before she can finish. He got all the information he needed. He is about to walk into the room but stops by the door shocked at what he is hearing.

Ruhi: Ishima main aur Shravan chahte hai ki aap bhi hamare saath chalo.

Shravan: Haan Chitti, please aap bhi chalo na.

Ishita: Lekin beta main kyun chalo, aap log toh wahan padne jaa rahe hai. Main yahin rahoongi.

Ruhi: Ishima main jaanti hoon ki aap ne papa se shaadi sirf mere liye. Aap papa se pyaar karti ho lekin papa abhi bhi Shagun mama ko love karte hain. Main aur aap hamesha se Adi bhaiya aur Shagun mama ke baad ate hain. Papa toh apse kabhi I love you bhi nahin bola hai. Main nahin chahti ki aap ko aur chot pauche. Isliye please aap mere saath chalo. Papa ko sambhalne ke liye yahan sab hai.

Shravan: Haan chitti, Ruhi sahi keh rahi hai. Aap ko humare saath chalna chahiye, we need a responsible adult in a new city.

Ishita: Tum dono kitne bade ho gaye ho. Roo mera bacha, maine aap ko kabhi naa kahan toh abhi kahe sakta hai.

Ruhi/Shravan: Yaay. We love you!

Ishita: I love you two. Acha main chalti hoon, Mihika ayi hai Amma ke yahan.

Raman hides as Ishita leaves the room but instead of leaving he decides to stick around to listen to what Ruhi and Shravan are up to.

Shravan: It's good that Chitti agreed to come along. And did you see all the hot girls during orientation ;).

Ruhi: Shravu, tera yeh one track mind se bahar ao.

Shravan: Kya yaar Ruhi, tuh hamesha mere piche padi rehti hai. Acha theek hai is baar tuh meri gf choose kar lena. Aur main teri aur chitti ke liye bf choose karoonga.

Raman (muttering): Is Tingu ko main nahin choodunga. Meri choti si beti ke liye bf choose karega aur Ishita ke liye. Bala ko dekho aur isse dekho.

Ruhi: Deal. Lets shake on it.

Raman: Ruhi pehli beti hogi jo apne baap ke lovestory mein villain ban gayi.

Just then Shreya comes to see her Anna and Ruhi Akka.

Shreya: Hello.

Ruhi/Shravan: Hey Shreya bear.

Shreya: I am going to miss you guys this much she said spreading her arms.

Ruhi: Aww Shreya , we are going to miss you dher se.

Shreya: Sachi?

Shravan: Muchi he said hugging her.

Shreya: Akka aap worry mat karna, mein Chitti ko visit karti rahoongi so woh aap ko zyaada miss nahin karegi.

Ruhi: you are a sweetheart Shreya. Lekin Ishima toh humare saath aa rahi hai.

Shreya: ooh. Raman Chittappa bhi jaa rahe hai?

Ruhi: Nahin papa yahin par rahega.

Shreya: Woh aap log ko kitna miss karega. Aap log usse bhi saath le jao.

Raman: Thank you Shreya atleast tumne mere bare mein socha. Aaj se tum meri favourite ho.

Shravan: Raman chittappa ka business yahan hai toh who yahin rahega.

Shreya: Okay. Main chalti hoon, main Misha ke saath khelne jaa rahi hoon. Mihika Chitti aagayi hogi. Bye bye.

Raman leaves before Shreya leaves. While he's walking he bumps into Romi.

Romi: Bhai kis khayal mein khoye huye ho?

Raman: Yeh Tingu ab family bhi todne laga hai.

Romi: Kya baath kar raha hai bhai? Shravan ab shaadi wali ladkiyon pe bhi line marne laga hai? Oye hoye kya player hai.

Raman: Arre tu chup kar. Woh Bala ka beta hai, itna bhi tharki nahin hai.

Romi: Theek hai main chalta hoon.

Raman: Haan jaa kisi aur ka dimaag kha. Mujhe bahot kaam hai.

Next Day

Ruhi, Shravan and Ishita are all packed up and ready to leave. Both the Iyer family and Bhalla family are all in the Bhalla house.

Bala: Ab hume chalna chahiye, warna late hojayega.

Raman: Wait, mujhe kuch kehna hai. Ishita main nahin chahta ki tum yahan se jao. I know ki humne Ruhi ke liye shaadi ki thi lekin we are more than that. Tum meri biwi ho and I love you. Please mujhe chod ke mat jao.

The whole family is shocked to hear this except for three people. The family never expected that Raman will ever confess his love that too infront of them. Ishita was blushing bright red. And Ruhi and Shravan high-fived.

Ruhi: Finally papa. Mujhe toh laga tha aap aur time lenge apne dil ke baath kehne ke liye. Thank god for Shravu, usne yeh sab possible kiya.

Raman/Ishita: Yeh sab ek natak tha.

Shravan: Of course Chitti. Chittappa was taking too much time. We just helped speed things up.

Ruhi: Main jane se pehle sab theek karke jana chahti thi.

The whole family had a good time teasing Raman and Ishita and praised Ruhi and Shravan.

The End..

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-Shaayne.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS...Hope they will not take this much time to confess in the serial.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: malaxmi

Nice OS...Hope they will not take this much time to confess in the serial.😃


At this rate, im a bit lost but hopefully it is faster in the serial..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice raman confession tab hi kare ge
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Loved it, especially the following part 😊

Shravan: Kya yaar Ruhi, tuh hamesha mere piche padi rehti hai. Acha theek hai is baar tuh meri gf choose kar lena. Aur main teri aur chitti ke liye bf choose karoonga.

Raman (muttering): Is Tingu ko main nahin choodunga. Meri choti si beti ke liye bf choose karega aur Ishita ke liye. Bala ko dekho aur isse dekho.

Ruhi: Deal. Lets shake on it.

Raman: Ruhi pehli beti hogi jo apne baap ke lovestory mein villain ban gayi

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