Raman Ramblings: Rain and Realisation

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

The last two lines are my favorite, I'm not a big fan of narration but the way you have depicted the rain memories it was stupendous.I enjoyed reading it.

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: aaminah123
The last two lines are my favorite, I'm not a big fan of narration but the way you have depicted the rain memories it was stupendous.I enjoyed reading it.

Thank you Aaminah 😊

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: RisingAsh
Awww... Tht was lovelyy...!! Liked the way u linked up all the rains in which they were together... Symbolizing different stages of their lives... How in every rain things have been changed...
Awsomely written...!😊

Thanks Ash 😊

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Isma

@Isma_A

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Res. Will read and comment on this first and then Ishita's. 😃

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Beautifully written, Lucky! I loved how you described Raman's thought process and encounters in the rain with Ishita: two strangers, unwilling participants, walking the same path to the same destination; how the rain brings out the best in her and the worst in him, but still always reflects some aspect of their current dynamic. Beautiful use of rain as a metaphor! 👏

Loved this! wonderful read! 😊

Edited by Isma_A - 11 years ago

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Paru

@paru_rox

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

It was a beautiful read Lucky ... Raman's thoughts from all the encounters that he has had with Ishita in the rains ... very well written 👏

On a side note, your OS made me realize that Ishra always have a lot of drama going on whenever it rains or is it the other way around 😛

Sorry for the late reply, opened this yesterday also but couldn't get around to reading it

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Mohini Singh Narayan

@MSN_Vanny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Edited on page one. 😳

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afsanaanjum

@afsanaanjum

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Lucky, I have always said you're excellent when you let the emotions do the talking!👏🤗

I'm eagerly waiting for Ishita's point of view

I loved it buddy.🤗

I realized after reading this now that rains have an implicit connection to the new turns which they take in their relation which is non-quintessential, uncanny, mature, realistic yet adorable!😊

Lastly, your quotes! I guess ill never stop admiring them!😆

Sorry for the late and short reply. Running out of time. Do forgive me!😛

Edited by afsanaanjum - 11 years ago