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Posted: 11 years ago
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As I read this Aani, I felt like I was traversing through his head. Do I need to say how detailed and fine this piece is!!!

His scene with Ruhi, and Ruhi's angelic behaviour has inspired us so much. Just like your title, the scene was a silver lining for us fans in this dreadful phase

Raman has woken up to the fact that his daughter is his strength, and a big part of his support system. I want the show to address this too. Not just focus on Ishita - Ruhi , Ishita - Raman, but also Raman and Ruhi. Although the scene was more than perfect, I'd like Raman to visibly show that he's realised the difference between his 2 kids, and how much he regrets the indifference he showed to his daughter till Ishita entered their lives.


It is interesting, that exactly when he's 'lost' his relationship with Ishita, he remembers the things he had. The things that didn't make a lot of meaning, the ones that didn't seem important are suddenly reminding him of her so much. I was reminded of this song "Na Jaane kyon hota hai yeh zindagi ke saath, achaanak yeh man kisi ke jaane ke baad, kare phir uski yaad, chhoti chhotisi baat"

Here goes a quote for how he realises he misses those little things with her:

"I wonder how much of the day I spend just callin' after you." - Harper Lee, To Kill a Mockingbird

and one for him and Ruhi:

"The soul is healed by being with children." - Fyodor Dostoyevsky

Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aani i think this has to be one of my favourite pieces from you😳
I loved the way you chartered Raman and Ruhi's journey through his thoughts, and what struck me was that she was right by his side as his mind processes all that has happened in the past.

I had a lump in my throat reading this, thats how strongly you are able to evoke emotion through your writing.

The Raman you wrote is the Raman I have always seen and felt whilst watching the show and its so nice to see him in your work too.

Absolutely beautiful hun 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful! Loved it :) The inner turmoil and helplessness of RKB is perfectly described by you.
You're a fabulous writer, I just love reading your OS! It automatically rejuvenates your mood. :) Thanks! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Anni, very beautiful OS . it was very emotional scene and i literally cried with him 😭
i cannot describe how much i loved your details to show his turmoil he is passing through. once again master piece after beneath the surface !! its always treat to read your write up give me always fresh air and clean some clouds too !!


i am not really having enough reading this so many times this is power of writer i must say!!

how much controversy. the daughter he always overlooked just because of mole, had become strongest support system for him.he never could show his love for his daughter for certain reasons,same child is giving him alleviation. what to say ?
and the son he was craving from 6 years is just giving him pain and pain . i just wonder when this man ll realize difference between his own children
one becomes ointment for him and other just never leaves chance to curse him.

what ever the circumstances are shown on show am not still able to hate him, of course he deserves punishment for breaking marriage promises i too disliked it am too upset with him but i can't have extreme dislike can i say this kid is making me to love him ?

how much we all are hoping complete ST by ishu after this track is over !! i really want to see him literally finding excuses and reasons to talk to her but she ignores all and he becomes impatient and finally sits upon knees "talk to me,i want to hear your voice"

it s possible for cvs still after patch up is done that ishita only made ruhi to take care of him that could be acknowledged by him in front of ishita just like he did in hospital that why she was crying when he was having pain


my one of fav lyrics for your OS:

Kal koi tha yahin Ab koi bhi nahin
Banke naagin jaise hai saanson mein laheraayi
Tanhaai palkon pe kitne aansu hai laayi

on lighter note: by-products of accident crappy track are very much more interesting than incidents running right now on the show 😆 please write more 😳
Edited by ZenerDiode - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What timing!!! Yesterday in episode when they showed Raman in thinking mood while Ruhi was reading to him and bg music going on. I was like why there is music. Why cannot they show inner thoughts of Raman. And since that moment I am like hope you write an OS on it. Wish got fulfilled :)
Beautifully written OS. If only half of what you write CVs will show Raman thinking in the show. So good it will be. Am sure now while watching the show I will be thinking of this OS and Raman's thoughts in here if ever they show Raman contemplating again. Love it!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Silver Lining, indeed!
Hope we can see that in the show. After yesterday's episode it does seem possible. When Ruhi got involved in an issue, she has always managed to bring Ishita and Raman together.
Just when you think Ruhi and Raman couldn't get any cuter, the writers whip out an amazing scene. It was so beautiful to see Raman actually enjoy the much needed warmth and comfort his daughter was providing.
Ishita's silent treatment hurts him the most. I am sure he was hoping she would shout at him. This is probably the best way to get to him.
That little girl certainly deserves the name they call her with lots of love, Ru. She truly is the Ru and once the soul enters, you find happiness.
Last but not at all the least, great OS. As usual!
Cheers!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh and forgot to write earlier that when he was shown contemplating on the bed, wish they had shown he thinking how come Ruhi came to him and it must be Ishita who must have send her to him. This one dialogue too would have been enough there. But alas it was not. And you wrote same thing in your OS. So glad. Thats makes me think he truly did :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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m not much in this show... barely watch few episodes..
but this os is just fabulous..
superbly penned..
tfs...
edit..
overall the feelings he is enduring and living with is just too emotional.. i guess you write so well that i have no words to write here
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Posted: 11 years ago
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5th OS on same track... not bad Aani
u should thank CV's for dragging ti so long🤣

superb OS...
i loved yesterday Ruhi-Raman scene...
and now ur OS and Raman's thoughts superb...
how Ruhi changed his world and how her presence make him forget all his pain for some time... very beautifully written ...
loved the part where he is missing Ishita and he knows Ishita has done all this and sent Ruhi to him so that he don't feel alone...
i must say u always do all the work, which i always want CV's to do in show...
as usual its amazing Aani...loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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breathtaking update! at the moment feeling badd for raman!!
keep continuing.. awesum update!!

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