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On their way to a hotel,

Raman: Ishita... Mujhe iss south indian kaane se allergy hai. Tumhe nahi... Phir mere saath...

Ishita: Baat toh sahi hai lekin agar aap iss shehar mein ghum ho gaye toh... Matlab, Tamil toh aata nahi hai... Mujhe dhoondna padega na... Mummyji ke Raman puttar ko...

Raman: Jhoot bolna hai toh teek hai. Lekin, itna lame reason... Mere phone mein google maps hai. Kisi Mathangi Vishwanathan Iyer ki zaroorat nahi hai mujhe...

Ishita: Phir wahi naam... My name is Ishita Vish... (Making faces) Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla... Samji? Waise, google maps ka cover up toh teek hai... Lekin, usse bhi destination batani hai... Kalyan mandap kalyan mandap karke tum poore Chennai mein dhoondh toh nahi sakte ho... Maan jao... Yahan tumhe meri zaroorat hai...

Raman: Whatever... Lekin, tum mujhe paidal poore shehar ghumane wali ho kya? Hotel kahan hai...

Ishita: Bas... Do minute...

Raman: Waise, voh pyaar aur obsession ka lecture... Mere liye tha na? Adi... Ishita, I have done a big mistake... Lekin, Adi... Adi mera kamzori hai... I can't see him suffering...

Ishita: Iska matlab usse bigadne dena toh nahi hai... He's getting spoilt... Sahi aur galat ka pehchan nahi hai... Jitna resources ek bache ke haath honi chahiye uske kahi guna jyada mil raha hai usse... Shagun unifrom kharidne ke liye 30000 deti hai... Toh, nateeja yehi hoga na... Shagun ke hisaab se pyaar ka matlab kuch aur hai... Lekin Raman, aap... Aap bhi uske saath milkar Adi ka future kharab kiya... Usse apni galti ka ehsaas nahi hone diya...

Raman: Ishita... I couldn't prevent myself from doing that...

Ishita: You must control your emotions if its showing you the wrong way... Yeh incident sirf shuruwaad hai... Aur bahut kuch hona baaki hai. If no one is going to stop Adi, he'll never realise his mistake...

Raman: What should I do?

Ishita: Ab kya kar sakte hain? Yeh maamla khatam ho gaya... Lekin, mark my words, this is not going to end here. Bahut badi galti kiya Adi ko protect karke...

Raman: Ishita...ab kya? Please... Help me...

Ishita: Main Bala jiju se kahoongi ki woh Adi ko sambhale...On your part, be a strict father and show him the right path Raman... Apne kamzori ka saza Adi ko mat dena...

Raman: Main akele yeh sab nahi kar paonga... I want you to become Adi's mother and bring him back on track... Will you?

Ishita was moved by Raman's request... Tears started welling up in her eyes...

Ishita: Yeh kaise sawal hai? Adi is my son... I'm with you... (Breaking their eye lock) Hotel...

Raman: Dhabba express... Non-veg...

Ishita: Haan... Iss area mein famous hai yeh hotel... Itne dino se ghas poos kaa rahe ho... toh yahan lekar aaya tumhe...

Raman: (Imitating Ishita) That's so thoughtful of you...

Ishita: Bas bas... Hotel ka naam dekhkar bhookh mit gayi kya? Andar chale?

Raman: Chalo... Dhyan se. Phir se Gobi ke jagah Chicken mat kaana...

Ishita: Hadd hai... Kabhi bore nahi hote ho kya mujhe chidate hue...

Raman: Bilkul nahi... Baito...

After completing he dinner...

Raman: Aisa lag raha hai ki bahut dino ke baad aaj mera pet bar gaya... Yeh idlli aur dosa mera jeena haram karke rakh liya...

Ishita: Mujhe ice cream chahiye...

Raman: Uss din bade bade dialogues bol rahi thi ki tera gala kharab ho jayega...

Ishita: Kaha tha na... Pehle din tha... Ab koi tension nahi... Anna...Kulfi... (Ishita looked at Raman)

Raman: No no...I'm full...

After coming out of the hotel,

Raman: Ek walk ho jaye? Tera weight pe shyad asar pad saktha hai...

Ishita: Bhawan se yehi prarthna karti hoon ki iss jaman mein na toh sahi agli janam me tumhe gunga bana de ya phir mujhe behri...

Raman: Agli janam mein tumhare saath put up karna hai mujhe? Isse behtar agli janam me patni ko hi badal de... (Seeing Ishita's frowns) Tum mujhe takkar nahi de sakthi... Iss road mein chalte hain na... Silent hai...

Ishita: Raman... Kulfi...

Raman: Toh...

Ishita: Mujhe chahiye...

Raman: Abhi abhi hotel mein kaayi...

Ishita: Woh cup mein diya unn logon ne... Maza hi nahi aaya... Yeh toh stick mein hai... Asli wali kulfi...

Raman: Ishita... Bahut cheap lagega... I mean, road mein... Aise...

Ishita: Ayyo amma... Wahan dekho... Uncles aur aunties kharid rahe hain... Sirf aapko har cheez se problem hota hai...

After much reluctance, Raman finally gave in...

Ishita who was enjoying her kulfi noticed that Raman was feeling awkward and he didn't have his kulfi...

Ishita: Raman... Aap road ko khila rahe ho?

Raman: Tum kao na... Hamesha mujhe...

Ishita: Kitna bolte ho? Try this...

Ishita stuffed her own kulfi into Raman's mouth...

Ishita: Kaisa hai?

Raman: Very nice... Really Ishita...

Ishita: Kaha tha na?

She offered him again...

Raman: Nahi... I'll have mine...

Raman's phone rang... Amidst that confusion, he dropped his kulfi...

Raman: Kya? Loan? Mujhe kuch nahi chahiye... Aapke wajah se... Dobara phone mat karna...

Ishita: Kulfi toh gir gaya? Woh insaan bhi chala gaya jo isse bhej raha tha? Ek kaam karo... Mere kufli le lo...

Raman: (In a awkward tone) Share kare...agar tumhe aitraaz na ho toh...

Ishita who lowered her eyes nodded her head even without looking at him. Ishita and Raman shared their kulfi without looking at each other...

Raman: So... Bahut raat ho gayi... Chale?

On reaching the kalyana mandapam,

Raman: Itne kanjoosi kyon? Saare lights off kar diya?

Ishita: Time is 11.00... Subah jaldi bhi utna hai na...

Raman: Phir se bhramhamuhurat wahi siyappa. Hum kahan rahenge?

Ishita: Room mein...aur kahan... Chalo...

Raman: (On reaching their room) Yeh kaisa room hai? Bed ke alava yahan kuch bhi nahi hai... Chair tak nahi hai... Toh...

Ishita: Raman... Main sab kuch jhelungi lekin aapke taunts nahi... Ek raat ki baat hai...Mein neeche so jaongi... Aap bed pe so jao...

Raman: Problem toh solve ho gayi...

Ishita: Kiska?

Raman: Inn choohon ka... Tumhare baal aaj raat inn chohoon ke tiffin toh ho jayega...

Ishita: Chooha...

Raman pointed towards the corner of the room where a rat ran into its hole...

Ishita: (Jumping on the bed) Yahan hole? Yeh kaise kamra diya inn logon ne?

Raman: Ek raat ki baat hai...

Ishita: I'm serious... Mujhe darr lag raha hai...

Raman: Tum bed pe so jao... Main chat pe tere cousins ke saath so jaonga... Unlogon ne kaha ki aaj raat wahi sone wale hain...

Ishita: Lekin...

Raman: Koi poochega toh yeh keh doonga ki tere karate ke wajah se main pareshan hoon...

Ishita: Please... Aisa kuch mat karna... Usse behtar hai iss choohon ke saath adjust karna...

Raman: Mazak kar raha tha... I'll manage... Tum so jao... Darwaja band kardo...

Ishita: Good night...

Raman closed the door and reached terrace to join Ishita's cousins...

Siddu: Jiju... Akka ne kamre se bhaga diya...

Raman: Hamesha tere akka ke saath rehta hoon toh socha aaj raat uske pyaare bhaiyon ke saath bitaon taaki Ishita ki kuch secrets jaan paaye...

Balaji: Yeh toh adha sach hai... Akka ke raaz jaanne ka koi iraada nahi hai aapka... Aayiye na... Baitiye...

Raman: Jab mein yahan aaya... I heard some noise... Clinking of glasses... Daaru?

Krishna: Hume laga thatha ya chittapa hoga... Agar dekh liya toh...

Siddu: Jiju...ek drink ho jaye?

Raman: No... Aaj nahi...

Balaji: Aap toh punjabi ho... So, aadat toh hoga na... Kahi akka ke wajah se toh nahi na?

Raman: Actually yes...

Balaji: Toh akka se darte ho...

Raman: Tumhari akka se nahi lekin lecture se darr zaroor hai... But, Ishita is also right... Yeh sab achi aadat thodi hai... Isliye kabhi kabhi uski baat maanta hoon...

Krishna: Bahut acha lag raha hai aapko akka ke saath dekhkar... Iss Subbu ne akka ke zindagi barbad kar dala... Ek lame reason ke wajah se...

Siddu: Actually, nashe mein thoda emotional ho jata hai...

Raman: Bolne do...

Krishna: Hume sab pata hai jiju... Kyonki uss kameena Subbu humare haath chithi bhejtha tha akka ke liye... Dono Vandu akka ke shaadi mein hi mila... Iss Subbu akka ke peeche pad gaya... Das saal ka rishtha tha... Akka bhi uske baaton mein aa gayi... Lekin jiju, uska pyaar sacha pyaar nahi tha. Agar hota, toh who akka ka saath itne mushkil waqt mein nahi chodta.

Raman: Pata hai... Apne maa ke baaton pe aa gaya aur rishtha tod diya...

Balaji: Jiju... Usne rishtha thoda...ok. He didn't want to become a great person... Lekin, insaaniyat toh dikhani chahiye... Aise ek din mein aake sab khatam kar diya. Who bhi uss waqt jab akka was in a vulerable state... Lekin, akka ne sab kuch apne andar dabakar rakh diya. Humare saamne ek boondh aansoo tak nahi bahayi... She's a very nice person. Apne maa baap ke liye sab kuch muskurahat ke saath jhel rahi thi. She deserves to be happy... Aap usse woh kushi doge na?

Raman: Ofcourse... Main lucky hoon jo Ishita meri zindagi mein hai. Usse kabhi dukh nahi pahunchavunga...

Finally, Ishita's cousins slept off...

Raman: (Self talk) Ishita ne itna sab kuch dekha apni zindagi mein... Aur main... Phir se uska dil tod diya... Main apne aap ke aage kuch nahi dekh paaya... Apne past mein hi duba rehta hoon... Ishita... Kabhi uski sahare banne ki koshish tak nahi kiya... Main itna selfish kaise ho gaya... Ishu must vent out her feelings... Warna who kabhi apne past ki boore chaye ko chodkar nahi aa paayegi... I have moved on because of her... I must help her move on...

Even when he was thinking about all this, he slept off...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful update Kri.🤗
Ishu explained Raman on how to deal with Adi vey nicely.😊
Oho. Mathangi took Raman to a dhaaba to eat nonveg food. Kya baat hai. Caring hun.😉
Kulfi part was cute 😳😳
Update soon. 🤗
Edited by -Srkfan4ever- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update.
pls pm me further updates...😊
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Originally posted by: Pratiksha100

nice update.

pls pm me further updates...😊


Thanks for liking it... Will PM you...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww... sweett update. Loved it. Esp raman 's monolouge.. keep continuinggg!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Cute update Dear!Thanks fr pm!Luved Ishra's dayout!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really good loved the dinner and walk outing can't wait to see what Raman does to help Ishita move on. 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow that was a awesome update kri, a simple IshRa outing loved it

Ishita: Bhawan se yehi prarthna karti hoon ki iss jaman mein na toh sahi agli janam me tumhe gunga bana de ya phir mujhe behri...

This was a superb dialog 🤣 maybe they should use it in the show 😉

Ishita and Raman sharing ice-cream.. wah kya baat hai

Ishita is scared of rats just like me, and btw i was expecting IshRa to sleep together.. but Raman's convo with ishu's cousins was also great 👍🏼

You updated after a long time and this update was worth the wait, loved it 😎

Agle baar se, if possible please PM me wen you update!! 😃

Edited by PreruS - 11 years ago
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nice update i felt its short thora lamba hona tha loved it

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