SS: Aisi hai yeh mohabbatein...pt 29...pg 140 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Nichuss


me so happyyy to see u back with OS😳😃


Thank you Nichi...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

superb 👍🏼
plz continue soon :)


Thanks a lot...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Hayaa.m

Lovely SS

Very bad u forgot to PM me kri
Anyway i am so glad that u have kept ISHRA characters normal
No heavy dose drama and keeping it realistic which i want in the serial actually
Now waiting for the next part. Keep ishu like this
Khob tarpaye Raman ko ...chorna met.


I'm sorry yaar... Will definitely PM you when i update...

Yes yes... i am not going to make Ishu forgive Raman soon... Thanks for liking it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

first time commenting on your post perhaps. loved your ishita . ye dil maange more till he gets success to woo her . just suggestion :P


Glad to see your comment... Thanks for liking Ishita... Will definitely take your suggestion into account. It means a lot...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I like it I want in the serial this happen...than we saw Raman try to manofy ishu but she does not talk with him n ignored his presence...
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Originally posted by: pscmp

I like it I want in the serial this happen...than we saw Raman try to manofy ishu but she does not talk with him n ignored his presence...


Thanks for liking it... Even, i want to see this happen...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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At 6.00 a.m. , Ishita woke up and saw that Raman was sleeping in a uncomfortable position. She realized that he must have slept while seeing that album which was lying wide open on his lap. Not in the slightest, Ishita expected to look at herself in that album. She was surprised to see Raman with their wedding album. She took that album from his lap and made him lie down properly... Before Ishita could move further, Raman caught hold of her hands...

Raman: Yeh kya kar rahi ho tum? Hum dono ke beech kuch bhi nahi hai na toh yeh sab... Tumhe farak kyon pad raha hai?

Ishita: Kyonki main Ishita hoon... Ishita... Apne clinic mein aanewale patients se bhi yehi bartaf karti hoon... Infact, jab aapko aapke drunk state mein ek stranger hone ke baad ghar chod sakthi hoon, toh aaj kyon nahi... We are living together... in this room...

Raman immediately left her hand...

Ishita: Mere saath mind games khelne ki zaroorat nahi hai... Isse nuksaan aapko hi hoga... Bewajah hurt honge aap... So, door rahiye mujhse... Maine aise sochkar ab yeh madad nahi kiya... Aage se door rahoongi main aapse... Aaj ke liye...I'm sorry...

Raman got ready without Ishita's help... Ishita didn't take his suit out of his cupboard. Infact, Ishita stayed away from their room after that bitter conversation between them... He went outside to join everyone for the breakfast. The Ishita he got to see there was totally different.

Ishita: Aap aa gayi? Baitiye... Nashtha lagati hoon...

Raman didn't have an answer. He occupied a empty seat and Ishita served him with a smile in her face. She was simultaneously taking care of Ruhi by packing her lunch and her school bag. Raman wanted to initiate a conversation to maintain that drama being staged by Ishita...

Raman: Nashtha bahut acha hai...

Ishita: Hai na... Guess what... Maine banaya... Mummyji ne sikhaya mujhe...

Raman was again perturbed by her reply but managed to give her a answer...

Raman: Use pehle batao na... Teacher achi hai isliye kaana acha hai... Warna, tumhari upma yaad hai na?

Ishita: Maine achi tarah se sikhaya aapko... Aapne sab kuch daala uss upma mein... Pyaas ke peel se lekar sab kuch... Toh taste aisa hi hoga na...

Toshi: Tum dono ko aise dekhkar acha kag raha hai... Uss manoos humari zindagi se chali gayi...

After having their breakfast, Ishita sent Ruhi with Mr.Bhalla for her school as he was passing by that lane. Ishita went inside her room to take her handbag when Raman followed her and closed the door behind him.

Raman: Ishita... Tum mujhse naraaz ho... Toh sabko batane mein kya dikkat. Yeh natak kyon kar rahi ho... Andar ek roop bahar ek roop...

Ishita: Yeh aapke liye naya thodi hai... Aapne bhi wahi kiya na... Amma ke satputra banne ka natak ek taraf aur doosri taraf aapke ex-wife ki faithful ex-husband jisne sabse jhoot bola... Mujhe der ho rahi hai... Hato...

Raman didn't want to press anything more and silently left their room... Ishita was also feeling bad for passing such snide comments but she was hurt and broken... She couldn't forgive Raman for the breach he committed... She left for her clinic with a heavy heart... In the office, Raman was shouting at everyone including Mihir and no one wanted to go near him...

Mihir: Bhai... What's wrong?

Raman: Sab kuch... SAB KUCH...

Mihir: Bhabhi aapse naraaz hai... Hai na? But, what's surprising about that Raman? Tumne jo kiya...

Raman: BAS...BAS... Main pagal nahi hoon... Mujhe achi tarah yaad hai sab kuch...

Ishita: Toh yeh bhi yaad honi chahiye ki aap yeh sab expect kar rahe the... You knew what you were letting yourself into... Toh aaj yeh outburst...

Raman: Ishita...

Mihir: Bhabhi... Aap yahan...

Ishita: Romi ne call kiya... Keh raha tha ki uske bhai ne poori office ko sar pe utake rakha hai... Mihir, please excuse us...

Raman: Yahan kyon aayi?

Ishita: Aur kya karti? Mera gussa inn becharon pe nikal rahe ho...

Raman: Nahi Ishita... Main tumse nahi apne aapse gussa hoon...

Ishita: Whatever... Lekin jhelna kisi aur ko pad raha hai... Raman, don't mix your personal life with your professional life... Ghar ka maamla ghar mein rehni chahiye... Usse office tak le aakar kisi aur pe chillana teek nahi hai... Imagine what'll happen if I do the same with my patients... Tumhare daant todne ke mann karne pe mere patient ka daant tudvaya toh... Acha hua tum ek CEO ho... Iss samaj ne tumhe CEO of the year ka award diya... Rishton ka na toh sahi, kam se kam uss award ka saaman karna toh seekho...

Raman: Sorry...

Ishita: Hamesha galat insaan se galat samay pe kyon maafi maangte ho? Tumhare employees se maango... Maafi... Shayad maafi mil jayega...

Ishita left from there and met Romi on the way...

Ishita: Romi... Tumhe pata chal gaya hoga ki hum dono ke beech sab teek nahi hai... Lekin, please... Iss baat ko bhool jao... Ghar mein kisiko pata nahi honi chahiye...

Romi: Lekin Bhabhi...

Ishita: Please... Maine Mihir ko bhi yehi samjaya... Hum dono ke beech mein kisiko aane ki zaroorat nahi hai... Its my request...

Romi: Ok Bhabhi...

Raman apologized to his employees for his rude behavior that morning and entered his cabin.

Mihir: Raman...

Raman: Come in Mihir... I don't want to discuss about my personal life now...

Mihir: Bhabhi ne samjaya hoga... Lekin, ek aakhri baar... Aakhri baat... Koshish karo... Bhabhi dheere dheere maan jayegi. Aise devdas bankar ghoomne se kuch nahi hoga. You deserve her every single taunt. Keep this in mind...

Raman: Itna aasan lag raha hai yeh sab... Maine bahut koshish kiya... Lekin...

Mihir: Bhai... You haven't even tried for 24 hours... Itne jaldi haar maan gayi... You must toil hard to win Bhabhi's confidence again... Aapke wajah se toot chuki hogi na... Main kuch madad karoon...

Raman: Haan... Apne kaam pe dhyan do... Main kuch kartha hoon...

Raman wanted to do something but he didn't know what to do and how to do. Ishita is not someone who can be convinced by gifts and sarees... Still, he didn't want any third party intervention because there has been much in their life till then and he wanted to please Ishita on his own... Luckily, his angel gave him a chance by asking him to take her out with Ishita for shopping... He called Ishita to inform about the same and as he expected, Ishita gave her assent...

Ishita, Raman and Ruhi started together at 5.00.p.m. and reached a mall... Compared to the last time, Raman didn't have to face embarrassment again and again as he managed to choose some decent dresses for her...

Ruhi: Ishima... Iss baar, Papa pass hogayi... Last time, yaad hai na aapko...

Ishima: Kuch toh badlav aaya...

Ruhi: Matlab?

Ishima: Yehi keh rahi hoon beta... Aapke papa seekh gayi... Aur kya chahiye meri roo ko?

Ruhi: Aapke liye saadi... Waisi wali saadi jaise aap Mihir chachu ke sangeet pe pehne hue the...

Ishima: Waisi... Teek hai...

Ruhi: Papa... Aao na... Aap choose karo... Uss blue dress ki tarah...

Raman: Teek hai... Chalo...

Ruhi saw her school friend in the shop and started chatting with her.

Ruhi: Papa... Main busy hoon na... Aap mamma ko lekar andar jao na...

Raman: Chale...(Ishita stared at Raman) Warna Ruhi sawal karegi...

Ishita: Chalo... Yeh bhi Ruhi ke liye karti hoon... Meri bachi ka dil todna nahi chahti hoon...

Raman showed her one saree and Ishita nodded to the same even without turning her head towards him...

Raman: Dekhkar haan bolo... Meri selection kahi kharab na nikle...

Ishita: Jab zindagi kharab ho gayi, ek saadi se kya bigad jayega... Ruhi believes in your selection... Just finish it soon...

Raman: Saadi aur zindagi mein kya connection?

Ishita: Hum argue karne ke liye yahan nahi aaye... Hope you remember that...

Before Raman could answer her, he heard a voice...

Stranger: Ishita... What a surprise...

Ishita: Deepthi... Yahan...

Deepthi: Mujhe apne parivaar se bhi milao...

Ishita: This is my husband, Raman Bhalla and there, that's my daughter, Ruhi... Raman, she's my colleague... Deepthi... Deepthi arora...

Raman: Hello Deepthi...

Deepthi: Hi Raman... Ishu... You are lucky... Tumhare pati saadi select kar raha hahi... Tumhare liye... His choice is very nice...

Ishita: Aakhir kiska pati hai...

Deepthi: So Raman, issi wajah se woh tum logon se door jaane se manaa kar rahi hai...

Raman: Matlab?

Deepthi: Aaj Ishu ko ek invitation mila ek medical conference ke liye... In Chennai... Do hafte ke liye... But, she refused to go there... Keh diya woh apne parivaar ke bina nahi reh paayegi... Abhi pata chal raha hai who parivaar ke wajah se ya pati ke wajah se...

Ishita: Tum bhi na...

Deepthi: Hey... I'm sorry... I have to go... Someone is waiting for me...

Raman: Sure sure... Carry on...

Ishita: Bye...

Raman: Kyon Ishita? Aisa kyon kiya tumne?

Ishita: Kaha na deepthi ne...Main apni parivaar se door jaana nahi chahti hoon... Tumhari galti ki saza poori parivaar ko dena nahi chahti hoon yeh drama stage karke ki main upset hoon aur isliye aap sabse door bhag rahi hoon... I like to face my problems... Door bhagne ya jhoot bolne se kuch solve nahi hoti...

Ruhi: Papa... Iss saadi ko choose kiya aapne?

Ishita: Haan beta... Aapko acha laga...

Ruhi: Very nice Ishima... Papa, dinner ke liye kahan jaa rahe hain hum...

Raman: Chinese restaurant...

After reaching the restaurant, Raman was reminded of their first coffee date where Ishita was struggling to tell him something which eventually got spoilt by Romi and Trisha's interference...

Ruhi: Ishima... Main uss aquarium ko dekhkar aati hoon...

Ishita: Sure beta... Jaldi aa jao...

Raman: Ishita... Tumhe iss restaurant ko dekhkar kuch yaad aaya?

Ishita was also reminded of their first coffee date but she was reminded of something else also which she chose to mention...

Ishita: Why not? Yehi maafi manga na... Adi se aur Shagun se... How can I forget it?

Raman was once again slapped by Ishita's words... Defeated, he chose to remain silent for the rest of that evening... That night, Ishita and Raman were forced to share the same bed because of Ruhi. Ishita and Ruhi slept very soon but Raman couldn't sleep... He was feeling helpless and was totally lost. He wanted to seek apology from Ishita but the path was becoming difficult for him. He finally decided to do something and prayed god that it should work for he couldn't see Ishita like that anymore...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
loved the part 1
wt we alll want ishu to react n respond nad behave...u very

nicely penned it...

waiitng for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww mar raha hai Raman..😒,,.bas ek aur update torture dedo usko n then maafi dedo...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nichuss

loved the part 1

wt we alll want ishu to react n respond nad behave...u very

nicely penned it...

waiitng for next part


Thank you Nichi...

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