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Hello yhmians , I am really thankfull to all of u who motivates me . Ur feedbacks , comments , compliments for me are not words but they mean everything to me . Here , I wrote a os for all my lovely friends . Next part will be continue based on ur lovely feedbacks . So here it goes .
In the evening , In ishra's bedroom :
Ishita : Raman , Main amma ke yahaan jaa rahi hoon . Agar kuch chahiye hoga to nilu ko kah dena .
Raman : Koi khaas kaam hai kya ?
I : Nahi kuch khaas to nahi hai ..but bahut time se mili nahi hoon na . Isliye .
Raman : Hmm..theek hai jaao .
I : Good . Main thodi der me aati hoon. Bye ..
R : Ishita..but ruhi kahaan hai ?
I : Woh ruhi mummy ji ke paas so rahi hai . Jab tak woh uthegi tab tak main aa jaaungi . Don't worry .
R : Theek hai .
Just then ruhi enters in the room :
I : Are ruhi beta ..nini karli ?
Ru : Yes mumma..main ab sharavan ke paas khelne jaaun ?
I : Of course chalo..main bhi wahiin jaa rahi hoon .
Ru : Chalo mumma..papa bye .
R : Bye ruhi .
They left from there . At amma's house :
Ishita : Hello amma , Kaise ho aap ?
Amma : Main theek hoon ishu . Tum kaisi ho ?
I : Main bhi apni amma ki tarah theek hoon .
Ru : Hello patti.
A : Hello ruhi . Ruhi andar shravan tumhaara wait kar raha hai . Jaldi jaao .
Ruhi runs to shravan :
I : Amma..vandu akka kahaan hain ?
A : Andar kamre me hai .
Ishita goes to her and greets :
Vandu : Hi ishu ..kaisi hai tu ?
I : Main bilkul theek hoon . Aap bataao aap kaise ho ?
V : Main bhi theek hoon .
I ( smiles ) : Vandu akka , Yeh mihika kahaan hai ?
V : Pata nahi ..kuch der pehle to yahi thi . Shayad mihir se baat kar rahi hogi .
I : Right vandu akka .
Just then mihika enters talking with mihir on the phone, She sees them and cuts the call :
Mihika : Mihir main tumhe baad me baat karti hoon . Bye .
Mihir : Bye mihika .
Ishita & Vandita think to tease mihika :
Mihika : Hi , Akka .
Ishita : Vandu akka , dekho naa mihika ko ab time mil raha hai mujhe hello karne ka . Warna yeh to mujhe bhool hi gayi thi .
Vandita : Very true ishu . I totally agree with u .
Mihika : Kya ..vandu akka aap bhi . Ishu akka ki side le rahi ho ? Main to bas mihi...
I : MIHIR se baat kar rahi thi , Hai naa ?
M : Haan ..
I : To tu sharma kyun rahi hai . Dekho vandu akka..hamaari mihika ab sharmana bhi seekh gayi hai .
They have a laugh :
I : Mihika we are very happy for you . Tu khush to hai naa ?
M : Haaan .
I : Haaan..so nice mihika .
They three have a hug . After a while, Amma calls ishita , she goes :
M : Vandu akka ..Friday ko ishu akka ka birthday hai . Abhi tak humne kuch bhi plan nahi kiya hai .
V : Mihika , tension matle everything will be done . Hum sab log milkar ek bahut achchi party plan karenge.
Ruhi hears all this and comes to ask them :
Ruhi : Chiththi ..mumma ka birthday hai ?
V : Ruhi..beta ..aap sabse pahle humse promise karo ki aap apni mumma ko kuch bhi nahi bataaogi ?
Ru : Promise .
Mi : Ruhi ..kya hai naa ..aap ki mumma ka birthday hai Friday ko , Iss topic ko lekar hum baat kar rahe the ki hum unka birthday kaise celebrate karenge. Ruhi hamaari help karegi kya ?
Ru : Yes ..chiththi main help karoongi but kaise ?
V : Dekho beta ..aap socho ki aap kya gift dogi mumma ko . Ok ?
Ru : Okay .
Mi : And ruhi listen ..mumma ko pata nahi chalna chahiye . Its our secret .
Ru : ok..its our secret . Main abhi aati hoon .
V : Mihika ..tu chal main aati hoon .
Ruhi goes to her house and counts her collected money . Raman sees her .
Raman : Ruhi beta ..aap kya kar rahe ho ?
Ru : Papa , Mumma ka birthday hai Friday ko . Isliye gift purchase karne ke liye money count kar rahi hoon .
R ( in shocked ) : Kya..?? Mumma ka birthday ??
Ru : Yes papa..aapko nahi pata ?
Raman whispers : Iss jhaansi ki rani ka birthday hai parso aur yeh to aise behave kar rahi hai jaise isse kuch yaad hi nahi hai . Kuch to plan karna chahiye ishita ke liye . But kaise????? Idea !!
He goes to amma's house , He finds ishita talking with her sisters and with her amma :
R : Namaste amma . Kaisi hain aap ?
Amma : Aiyoo raman , Main bilkul theek hoon . Come and sit naa .
R : Jee haan ..but amma woh mummy ko ishita se kuch kaam hai . Isliye bulaa rahi hain woh isse .
I : Oh..amma , Main jaati hoon . Baad me miloongi . Bye amma , akka and mihika .
Ishita leaves :
R : Amma , Vandita and Mihika..mujhe kuch kaam tha aap logon se .
Mihika : Kahiye jiju , Kya kaam hai ?
R : Actually , Mujhe pata chala ruhi se ki ishita ka birthday hai Friday ko So , Main chaahta hoon ki sab kuch main plan karoon .
Vandu & Mihika smile :
Mihika whispers to vandita in her ears : Vandu akka , Lagta hai raman jiju ko ishita akka se pyaar ho gaya hai . Tabhi to itna care kar rahe hain To main kya soch rahi hoon ki har saal hum akka ka birthday celebrate karte hain . But iss saal kyun naa raman jiju apni wife ka birthday celebrate karein .
V : Absolutely right mihika . Kitne years baad tune ek achcha idea diya hai.
Mi : Kya akka aap bhi .
V : Sorry baba . Maaf kar de .
Mi : Okay ..ok..ab reply bhi karo jiju ko .
V : Yes..Of course raman . We r glad ki tum ishu ka birthday celebrate karna chahte ho . We all will definitely help u .
Mi : Haan..jiju..aapko kisi bhi guidance ki zaroorat ho to hume bataa dena .
R : Thanks alot .
Amma : Raman beta , mujhko achcha laga ki tum ishu ki care karte ho. Aap sab baitho , Main coffee laati hoon .
R : Amma ..its okay , Aur waise bhi mujhe abhi jaana hoga , thoda sa kaam hai . And ishita ko pata nahi chalna chahiye surprise party ke bare me .
They nodded in agreement , Raman leaves :
At bhalla house , Ishita meets raman in the living room :
I : Raman , Mummy ji ne to nahi bulaaya mujhe phir aapne kaise kaha ki unhone mujhe bulaaya hai ?
R : Woh..mummy ko kaam nahi tha , actually mummy thaki hui hain naa to isliye mujhe chai peeni thi . Mere liye chai le aao please .
I : Ok..neelu ko kehti hoon .
R : Are..neelu kyun ? Tumse maine kaha naa .
I : Aapko mere haath ki chai kahaan pasand hai , Isliye neelu ko kehne jaa rahi thi .
R : No , Aaj mujhe kuch kadwaa peene ka man hai isliye tum banaao mere liye chai .
I ( in angry ) : Haaww..aap kaise react karte ho raman mere saath . Amma appa ke saamne to seedha - saadha raman hote ho , to mere saamne raavan kumar ka roop kyun dhaaran kar lete ho ?
R : Kya hai naa , Main amma appa ko hurt nahi karna chahta yeh bataakar ki unhone kisko paida kar diya hai . Aur chalo kiya to kiya , Phir baad me mujhko tolerate karne ko de diya . It's not fare naa !!
I : Huh..raavan kumar !! Aaj tum laal mirch ki chai piyo . Sugar ki jagah wahi de doongi phir pata chalega ki tum mujhe kitna tolerate karte ho .
R : Ab tumhe sambhaal raha hoon to woh bhi pee loonga .
Ishita leaves in anger :
R ( murmuring ) : Yeh jhaansi ki raani ko surprise dena bahut difficult hai raman beta . Phir bhi isne tere liye bahut kuch kiya hai , Tu ishita ke liye itna to kar hi sakta hai .
After a while in ishra's bedroom :
I : Ravan Kumar , Lo chai piyo .
R : Kahiin sach me to laal mirch ( powder ) nahi daal diya naa tumne ?
I : khatam ho gayi hai isliye kal daal doongi , Don't worry .
Raman gives a fake smile :
I : Yeh smile aap par suit nahi karti hai .
After saying that , she looks at ruhi who is thinking about the gift :
I : Ruhi beta ..aap itni der se kya soch rahi ho ?
Ruhi : Mumma..nothing .
I : My bachcha , Aap apni mumma se kuch hide kar rahi hona . Tell me princess .
Ru : Mumma..
Just then raman interrupts :
R : Kya ishita..tum ruhi ko force kyun kar rahi ho ? Bachchi hai kuch soch rahi hogi ki school se related . Monday se uska school reopen hone waala hai , ussi ke bare me soch rahi hogi . hain naa ruhi ?
Ru : Yes mumma .
I : Okay , beta . Aap socho main aapke liye milk lekar aati hoon .
Ru : Okay .
She goes to kitchen :
R : Ruhi beta , Mumma ko kuch mat bataana iss surprise party ke bare me . Ok??
Ru : promise papa .
Her daadi calls her , she goes to her , Ishita comes :
I : Raman , ruhi kahaan hai ?
R : Daadi ke paas hai .
I : theek hai , main milk mummy ji ko de deti hoon , woh use pilaa doongi .
R : ok .
She comes after giving milk to ruhi :
I : Raman , Main to ruhi se pooch rahi thi ki woh kya soch rahi hai phir aapne reply kyun kiya ?
R : I am his father . I know ki tum uski maa ho , iska matlab ye nahi ki main ruhi ka mind nahi read kar sakta .
I : Achca baba . Main to bas pucha tha . Aap aise react kyun kar rahe ho?
R : Itna kaam hai , busy hoon dikhaaye nahi deta kya .
I : Calm down . But baad me kaam kar lena abhi aakar dinner kar lo .
R : Tum chalo main aat hoon .
Ishita nodded in yes :
After having the dinner , bhallas went to sleep :
In ishra's bedroom :
Ru : Mumma .
I : Yes beta . Chalo ab aap so jaao . Kal to holiday hai , Baaki masti kal karna .
Ru : Okay boss .
I ( smiles ) : Natkhat bachcha . Aap ruko , main aati hoon night dress pehenkar .
Ru : Jaldi aao main wait kar rahi hoon .
I : Ok boss .
Raman sitting their thinks about the party :
R : Main kal papa mumma , romi and simmi ko bataa doonga ki jo gift unhe kharidnaa hai wah kharidle aur main jaakar kal five star hotel book kar loonga . Ahh..Everything is done .
After sometimes , Ishita comes :
I : Ruhi princess . Chalo mumma aa gayi . Ab ninni kar lo .
Ru : chalo .
She lifts ruhi in her arm , take her to the bed and makes her sleep by singing lullabies , By her singing..raman also gets asleep :
Ishita thinks : Murugan ,friday ko mera birthday hai , Main chahti hoon ki jisne meri life me complete khushiyaan laa di , jisne mujhe sab kuch diya , woh mujhe sabse pehle wish karein . ( she looks at ruhi and raman ) . I hope , mere ghar waalon ko mera birthday yaad ho .
Guys , Do tell me , Did u like it ? Based on the comments , I shall continue the next one . Do tell me in ur feedbacks .
Precap : In the morning , raman taunts ishita for being unpunctual. They have a small cute fight .
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