OS: Happy Days have thunder too.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Back to the past in the future.

I am submitting this OS to the 200th episode celebration so feedback please!

It is 2 years in the future. Raman is driving the car and Ishita, Ruhi and Adi are having lots of fun. Adi and Ruhi tease each other jokingly and they enjoy their sweet ice cream. Ruhi sticks hers out the window and laughs.
Ruhi: Adi bhai! Look at my ice cream!
Adi laughs. Ruhi drops her ice cream out and shouts "no!" Ishita gives her ice cream to Ruhi and they all smile. Raman smiles at Ruhi.
Raman: Ruhi beta, be careful. Adi beta, me and you will go in this sport shop to get some nice shoes for you.
They leave and go inside. Ishita and Ruhi see a clothes shop across the street. They agree to go together.
Ishita: Stop, Raman!
Raman: Haan?
Ishita: Me and Ruhi will go to the shop across from this shop for her.
Adi: Mom, can I come as well? I want to see what Ruhi gets and help her choose!
Ruhi: Haan! Then I will come with you to choose!
Raman: Ok, let's get shoes for Adi first. Then get the clothes.
Ishita: No no no! We will go to clothes first!
They walk over to each other to guide each to their shops and they grab hands. Their eyes lock and Raman goes with Ishita to the girls shop.

Precap: Ruhi and Adi choose an outfit and go to pay Ramans card is stolen by a person passing by.

Ruhi runs in with Adi and Raman and Ishita upon reaching the shop, leave either others hands. Raman holds the door for Ishita. Adi picks a top for Ruhi and Ruhi picks a nice skirt. They match perfectly.
Ishita: This is very nice beta, you will look very cute.
Ruhi nods and Raman smiles. A passing by pedestrian, swipes Ramans card and runs. Raman looks and runs after him.
"Thief! That man, black top, thief! Get him!" He chases him to an alley where the man turns around and stops. It is none other than Ashok Khanna.

TO BE CONTINUED
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CONTINUED

Part 2: Ashok's end is always the beginning.

Ashok laughs and Raman is still shocked. He walks over to him, cautiously. Ashok reaches in to his jacket pocket. Raman stands prepared. He pulls a pistol and points it at Ramans helpless body.
Ashok: Not one more step...

Ishita is with Adi and Ruhi. Mihika walks by with Mihir and sees Ishita tensed. She comes in and asks her what happened Ishita leaves the children with her and runs calling Ramans name.
Ishita: Where could he be? He has to be ok!
She becomes worried and walks by the alley without stopping. Thankfully Ashok didn't see her but she saw it all. She decides to go around the back and begins her plan.

Raman slowly steps forward and Ashok shouts at him to remain. He shoots. The gun is empty!
Ashok: These bloody wifes, good for nothing! Bloody hell!
He loads the gun and points it at the frozen Raman. He walks away with his details. He begins to climb the wall but is it on the head with a club from the other side. Ishita climbs over and he points the gun at her. Just when he shoots she pushes his arm and it fires at the dumpster. She slaps him so hard he falls to the ground and screams. She picks the gun up and throws it at a moving Raman. He throws it over the wall and throws a lit match. The gun gives off a mini-explosion. Ishita picks up Ashok and slaps him again harder, then harder and then harder. His face is blue and red. Raman punches him.
Ishita: You thought you would kill my husband, huh?
She slaps him with the club.
Raman: You rascal! Ishita call the police!
Ashok gets up and pushes them off. He begins to climb the wall and forgets about the burning gun. He lands on it and burns to death. Ishita cries in Ramans arms. He wipes her tears and go back to the shop where they tell no-one what happened and says the criminal got away but the card burnt away. They all get a row of ricksha was back home after Mihika helps and pays with cash. Raman and Ishita promise to pay her back and she says to make it their New Year present. Once home Raman goes back out with Adi to the boy shop.
Mihika: So Ishita did you beat Ashok good?
Ishita looks at her shocked and Mihika reassures her she will keep it secret. Ishita thanks her.
Mihika: Akka, I saw Raman being confronted by him and therefore came to find the kids so you could go and help. I knew you would do it akka!
They smile.


Precap: Raman sees Shagun shouting to find Ashok and stops the rickshaw.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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shoo nice. continue soon .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Like the way you have potrayed Ashok and Shagun. Wow! From palace to road-side...😉

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