SS : Khas tum Mujjsko Samajthe - Part 9 updated in Page 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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really awesum update!! keepp continuingg and plsss PM me... thankuu so muchh!! eager to read part 4
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it ..
Please do Pm me other writing could love to read it ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update.I liked when raman started getting irritated becauz he was not able to talk with his Jkr.Awww!so cute
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Continue soon !!!!
Superb update !!!
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Part 4
Raman and Ishitha get back and retore in their respective places. But both do not sleep. Ishitha thinks to herself

I: Why was I feeling very hurt when I discovered that he lied to me? I was calling myself his wife and not only mom of his daughter. So does that mean I have progressed in this relationship? She smiles thinking of the moments they spent togather. The night talk in the hospital, the day when they were locked inside the house, the eye lock that they had when she was applying medicines, the way he was checking her out during mihir's sangeeth, her Punjabi speech, the walk in the night, the pooja scene in her aunt's place, the way he said today everyone will look at his wife, the promise they made on the night of the party, eating parathathe togather, way he lifted her up, the hospital scene when he held her hand, the way he came running thinking she was indanger when Sid visted her hospital. She also remembers what he said " Abbe mere ethne bure din nehi agaye hai ki mai tum se pyar karu". Kya ishitha tub hi kuch bhi sochthe hai. Who toh bohut clear hai tu he confuse ho rahe hai. Tuh srif uske bacho ki ma hai. I will have to stay away from him that is the solution.

Situation was similar for Raman. He was also thinking why did he feel very hurt whe she said she hates him and drunk so much. He smiles remembering the care she takes care of him and his family. The cute nok jok that they have. But he felt she also loves him and he must talk to her.

With Adhi also at Bhalla house, Ishitha is very busy with the kids. She had started to bond with Adhi as well. He finally started calling her Ishima. She was hardly getting time for Raman. She was taking care of housesold work, clinic, Kids studies and needs and Raman is totally being ignored. He feels irritated. Hardly is he able to talk a single word once in 2 days. That also was so limited. This is making him very frustrated. On top of it the family was also determined to increase the distance so that it forces both of them to confess. Ishitha consistently avoiding Raman so that her feeling doesn't come out. Raman comes home early daily bot is unable to get Ishu's time. She had started sleeping with the kids in their room. He is left alone in his room. He has full independence to watch match, but he is not happy with that. He is missing her badly. She is friendly with everyone else in the house, but royally avoids him. He tries to call her to get her search his things, but she would run away immedietly after that is done. Nower days he is being left out so much that he is jelous of Ishu's closeness even with Mihir and Romi.

It's a regular weekend morning. Mihir had also come down. Ishitha had made Poori chole and rajma. Ishitha was feeding Adhi and Ruhi. Raman was also on the table and eating having all his glances on Ishitha. Mihir and Romi wanted to make Raman jeleous, as they had noticed Raman's desperation to be near Ishu.

M: Bhabhi, mai bhi toh apka pyara dever hu na, mujje bhi kilavo.

R: Abbe Mihir, meri bhabhi pehale hai, Bhabi mujje kilavo

I: Arre dono ko kilavungi, don't worry.

Ishitha starts feeding in a circular order to Adhi, Ruhi, Romi and Mihir. Raman is getting furious. Mutters to himself

Kye pathni hai, puri duniya ko kilathi hai par pathi ke tharaf mudke dekneka bhi time nehi hai.

All of them finish eating, Romi and Mihir go and hug their Bhabi and thank her. Adhi and Ruhi kiss her.

Raman is cursing his fate, puri duniya meri biwi ko hug karthe hai, kiss karthe hai mujje kuch bhi karne ko nehi miltha hai.

Mihir and Romi had already planned to infuriate Raman. They had planned to go out for a movie in the evening and had got a nice western wear for her to wear in the evening. They gift it to Ishitha. She thanks them and assures that she will wear it in the evening.

R: Abbe Mihir, mujje nehi bulaboge picture dekne

M: Bhai woh toh love story hai, apko pasand nehi. Vase adults only hai. Issiliye bacho ko chodke hum log ja rahe hai. Bhabhi, Romi, Mihika, mai, Vandu akka and bala Jiji.

R: Toh tu maja karne ja na, puri barath leke jane ki jurrat kya hai. He mutter to himself ajj kal mujje bhi adults only movie pasad hai. Tum log toh pair pair ja rahe ho pur mera kya. Ishitha woh bi toh akele hai.Kahe Romi ko company dene toh nehi jarahi hai. Meri Biwi mere bhai ko company de rahi hai, who be aults only movie mai. Rabba mere hi saath aiyse kun hotha hai. Saying so he goes to his room. Mihir and Romi giggle.

Its evening. Ishitha is dressed up in the dress her dever's have gifted. It's a sky blue frock. It is exposing all the delicate curves of her body.It is covering till her knees with a clear view of her tender legs. It's a low deep neck on both the sides and sleeveless. Raman walks up to his room and is stunned to see her. He is dumbstruck to see her. After a while he realizes and mutters to himself. Abbe Mihir aur Romi, meri Biwi ko short frock gift kiya. Woh be adults only movie me leke ja rahe ho. Plan kya hai tumhara. Iss pagal madrasan ko deko, mere saath parties me toh bade sathi savitri banke sari pehenthi hai aur devero ke saath frock. Bewakoof samja kya hai. Mihir aur Romi phale tum logo ko sambaltha hu.

He locks his bedreoom from outside and goes to Romi who is getting ready, holds his collar.

R: Abbe tum logo ka plan kya hai. Meri biwi ko frock kui gift kiya aur who be aults only movie me jane ke liye.

Ro: Bhai yeh kya bol rahe ho. Who toh Bhabi hai na.

R: Ha ha Bhabi hai issiliye frock gift kiya kya

Ro: Who bahi sab log apne pair ke saath hai, mai akele. App bhi toh bhabhi ko kahe nehi le jathe, issliye mai unko leke jar aha hu. Unka time pass ho jayega na

R: Abbe meri biwi ko kha le jana hai mujje patha hai.Tu apna kam karna. Aur pair kya tu leke ja na apne woh girl friend jiko pregnant karne wla tha. Who hi Minister ki beti, meri biwi mille the kya?Abhi teri Bhabhi ko messege bej ki plan cancel ho gaya aur nikal yehai se.

Ro: Bhai, ticket waste ho jayega

R: Tujje mere se sapete kane hai kya? Tera kaam badvavu kaya, subbu ko bolke.

Ro: Tik hai Bhai. He does as raman says

R: Papa , mummy, simmi kaha hai. Aur bacche

Ro: Who Bacche Iyer aunty aur uncle ke saath park jake Rath ho dinner karke ajj Vanditha madam ke gar me rukenge. Aur baki sab ek saadhi me gaye hai. Kal subh hi ayege.

R: tik hai , abb bag yeha se, picture katam hone ke baad bhi Mihir ke ghar chale jana, yeh ayega toh dekna

Romi nods with a smile. He is happy that their plan is working. He leaves. Raman thinks to Aaj toh sach me majja ane wala hai. Mihir - Romi sponsored gift me romamnce karne wala hu. Ajj toh Punjabi romancing Madrase in frock hai. Tyar ho javo madrasan for a power packed romance. Ajj tum mujje se bach nehi sakthe. Tumse I love you bolvake chodunga.

Part 5:

Raman gets in to his room and locks the room. He is looking at Ishitha furiously and asking why is she avoiding him these days.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg u hv ended on a high note..last two updates were really good..very eager to read part 5
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for the pm.It was nice."Mihir - Romi sponsored gift me romamnce karne wala hu"🤣 only raman can say such things.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow thats really awesome
Waiting for part5
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Part 5:

As romi leaves raman locks the main door and wants to go to his room. In the meanwhile Ishitha comes out asking for Romi. Raman is again smit by his wife's beauty. He is looking at her lovingly.

I: Raman , Romi kha hai.

R: Who to gaya. Usske friends ke saath. Kyu kya hua.

I: Kuch nehi, saying so she calls Mihir. But he doest pick up.Seing her irritated, Raman smiles to himself and comes closely to her and asks

R: Kya hua, pareshan ho kya. For a change tumhe toh pareshne dene ki adaath hai, kud kaise pereshan ho gaye.

I: App se matlab, Hum log aaj majja karne wale the. Patha nehi ku plan cancel ho gaya.

R: Majja, who subh movie ki baath kar rahe the na uskke baath kar rahi ho?

I: Hmm

R: Adults only movie bhut pasad hai kya? Dekneliya tadap rahi hi

I: Chi, kaise baath kar rahi ho. Mai toh baas sab ke saath bhar jane ki bath kar rahi thi

R: Issme chi kya hai Ishitha, Tum kaho to mai dikadu. Bedroom me chalogi

I: Kya, bakwas kar raho ho

R: Yeh bakwas nehi pyar hai Ishitha, he moves closer to her and places his hand mildly on her waist.

Ishitha senses that she will loose her control due to his proximity. She quickly moves to her room avoiding Raman. Raman furiously follows her. Ishitha is getting ready to change her cloths. Raman quickly grabs her wrist and pushes her towards the wall and places his hand on either sides of her preventing her from going anywhere.

R: What do you think of yourself? I am noticing these days, you have been trying to avoid me. Whats wrong with you?

I: Raman please leave me, I need to change. Iam feeling shy

R: So you weren't shy when you had to go out in this dress that to with your brothet in laws, but you are shy infront of me. Iam your husband, let me remond you.

I: What is this husband husband ka Raat laya hai. Mereko jana hai.

R: Nehi chodunga, mjje bolo kyu kar rahi ho yeh saab. I was running away from love, relationships. You came into my life, made it colourful. Made me realize the worth of love and relationship and then why are you running away from me. Whats wrong with you. Don't you realize that I love you Ishu. You have become an indespensible part of my life. My heart really beats only for you. I have been longing to talk to you. What is your problem, tell me.

Ishu is pleasantly surprised and blushing. She is also having a lone tear in her eyes. Raman looks at her and is not able to understand. However pulls her into a hug and comforts her.

I: Raman app mujjese pyar karthe hai Raman. Mai toh bhut phale see hi apppe marthe hu. Bas appne apko rokne ke liye apko avoid kar rahi thi.

R: Roakne ke liye, pur kyu.

I: I thought you don't love me

R: pagal, tumhe bewakoof bulane see tumhe bura lagtha hai liken ho sabse badi bewakoof. Mantha hu ki tum moti ho. Iss dress me bi bhut muskil see gusse ho. Ekdam moti water filter lag rahi ho, pur kya karu, mujje tumhe pasad ho

Ishitha gets irritated with his commenst and pushes him. She hits his chest

I: I told you, see how you are commenting. I know you only like youre trophy wife Shagun with all perfect looks.

R: yeh Ishu , don't you realize that's fun. Why do you even want to take her name in such a happy moment? You what to know how much do I love you, come let me show you. He pulls her again and starts kissing her back. Ishitha is shocked by his sudden advances

I: Raman... Please chodo.

R: Nehi chodunga, pichle kuch dinno se meri pass bi nehi aarahe thi na, Ajj sab ka karsar pura karo.

Ishitha relases herself from his grip and says she needs time. Raman smiles and understand that she is scared as its her first time.

R: Ishitha trust me you will like it. Iam will ensure you like it. Come on.

I: Please Raman.

Raman doesn't heed to her plee and persistent in his advances. He starts kissing her feverishly. She is morning.

R: Bahut sexy lag rahi ho.

I: Chi Raman kaise bathe kar rahi ho.

R: Thighs be dikaye detha toh aur achha lagtha

I: Ayo murga, kya hai yeh saab.

R: Abb toh kuch nehi kiya abhi hi iethna kya reation de rahi ho.

I: Raman pleases mejje chodo.

R: Please mujje kisse do na, Waise to deverko kana kilathi ho, bachho ko kiss dethi ho. Devero ko hug karthe ho. Srif mujje taang karthe ho. Aajjavo yar.

I: Kucch bhi, woh alag hai.

R: Usse alag adaz ko jine keliye bula raha hu. Ajjavo.

Raman slowly moves her to the bed and seeks her permission to go ahead. She nods with a shy blush & they become one with each other on that day. Raman was very passionate with her initially and realizes its her first time and milds down his desire.She was just responding to all his movements. Raman and Ishitha were the happiest people on that day.

Edited by iloveyhm - 11 years ago

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