SS : Khas tum Mujjsko Samajthe - Part 9 updated in Page 8

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Part 1:

It's the court scene and all the Bhalla's except Raman was with Ishitha. The iyers are also with her. Raman walks in. His heart is aching to sit on the other side with his ex-wife. He looks at his whole family on the other side. He is unable to look at them and lowers his eyes and sits next to Shagun. He is remembering what Ishu told him in the picnic spot and it hurts him. Tears roll down his eyes. Ishitha is badly hurt seeing him sit next to Shagun. She remembers the ruckus he created and the emotional talk of his. Both feel bad that they have to be sitting the situation where they have to be against each other. They never wanted something like this ever in life. Both loved each other to a great extent. This whole scenario was really making them descending from each other. We see Adhi also at the court. Raman questions Shagun

R: Adhi ko kyu eider laye ho

S: Adhi Zidd kar raha tha, mai kya karthi.

R: Tumhe use samjana chahiye tha, tum ussko yeha le aye?

Meantime the judge arrives and proceeding starts. Ishitha brings in the evidence of the eye witness, the car but no one could prove that it was Shagun. The Judge declares a break.

Shagun, Raman and Adhi are talking. Raman assures that nothing will happen to Shagun. Hide side Ishitha's lawyer is saying the case is very weak and we need some concrete evidence. Ishitha talks to Bala and Mihir.

We see Mihir is speaking to someone and mentioning to bring the master CCTV footage to the court asap. Shagun hears this. She informs Raman and Raman assures that she will be safe. They will not get any evidence and has destroyed all of them.

The proceedings start again. Ishitha's Lawyer is saying they are awaiting an important evidenace and that will be there in 10 mins. It's the CCTV footage of the accident and it clearly shows that Shagun has done the accident. Shagun becomes tensed.

S: No that cannot be they are lying

I Lw: How are you sure madam? We checked the footage, it's you

S: How can that be it cannot be me?

ILaw: No its you only. Since you have hidden all these evidence and it's an attempt to murder we want the court to give you strong punishment

S: Why will the court give me a strong punishment? It's not me, when you see the footage you will know. I have not done the accident, it's my son. Punish him if you want.

She stops right then and thinks what she has just said. Ishitha, iyers and Bhallas are shocked by the revelation. Adhi is shocked to hear his mom's words. Ishitha looks ate Raman and he is giving a wicked smile looking at Shagun. Ishitha becomes confused.

I Law: We are sorry my justice. We wanted the culprit to accept the crime, so we tried to pressurize her mentally. We do not have the footage with us.

Shagun is crying

I Law: Madam, your son is a minor was it not your responsibility to stop him. Where were you when the accident happened?

S: I was with him. I was sitting next to him.

I Law: didn't you know, he was a minor and was not supposed to drive the car.

Shagun is speechless. Ishitha is still looking at Raman, his smile vanished now and he looked at Adhi. His eyes were teary. Ishitha moves to the lawyer and says something. The Lawyer requests the judge that since it's revealed that the accident is done by a kid and that too by mistake Ishitha wants to withdraw the case. Meantime Raman's lawyer was handing over some papers to the judge. The Judge announces the hearing/ decision on the case is to postpone to tomorrow and also tells that Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla has failed a case against his ex-wife Shagun for the custody of his son on the grounds of she being a careless mother letting her minor son drive a car. The decision on the same will also be announced tomorrow.

Everyone in the family Ishitha, Iyers and Bhallas are shocked. So is Shagun, she looks at Raman with a fierce look. Shagun is being asked to do some formalities.

Raman takes Adhi with him outside the room. Ishitha is following them.

R: beta Adhi, you always thought I have not been a good father to you. I didn't keep up my promise. But I always loved you and I tried to prove you time and again that I love you by listening to your demands. I knew that you did the accident on the first day when your mom confessed that she did it. I agreed to support her for your sake. But I also wanted you to know the true colors of your mom. She has never loved you. Giving money and comfort alone is not love Adhi. I know you may not be happy listening to all this. I wanted your mom to tell the truth herself. Did you know why she didn't tell the truth?

A: Yes, because she loves me

R: Oh really, then why did she tell the truth when she was told that she will be punished.

Adhi doesn't have an answer.

R: She only loves herself. She is a selfish, characterless woman. Iam sorry but I think you also need to be aware of the reality. See Adhi, I always loved you, Ruhi and your mom. Your mom walked out of my life. She was always selfish and wanted to have her way out in everything. Her demands were never ending. I had a tough time satisfying her. She turned you also like her. Money cannot get everything in life Adhi. I really wanted you to grow up with good values. Whatever you did was wrong. You were not supposed to drive a car. You hit an old lady. You must have taken her to hospital; you left her to die on the road. Taking someone's life is not our right Adhi. I want to be a good father to you, in that if I have to hurt you also iam fine. I knew that you did the accident.

Flashback:

When Raman knew that shagun did the accident and he agreed for Adhi that he will support Shagun. He goes out and comes back to take his sunglasses that he left in the table of the house. He hears the conversation between Adhi and Shagun's self talk.

S: Adhi, you don't worry, Raman will take care of everything. Please don't tell anyone that you did the accident and I was with you. I will handle it. I have accepted that I did the accident and let's maintain the actual truth as a secret from everyone.

Adhi goes to his room nodding to whatever his mom has said.

S ( Self talk): Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla, you always insulted me. Now I will show you and your Bhenji Biwi who am I. if I had told you that Adhi did the accident you would have handled it with more care and ensured that nothing will happen to him. Now you will do that for me, because of Adhi. When you can save me for Adhi, you will save Adhi at any cost. But what benefit will I get, I will ensure that while you help me I create rift between you and your Bhenji wife and show both of you your place. She gives a victorious smile

Back to current state.

R: See Adhi, this was your mother's approach. I know I have to protect you, but I will also have to teach you the right things. Tomorrow will be the custody case. I don't want you to be brought up by your mom. She has never given any good values to you, so please decide whatever you want. Your father loves you, but will be strict to get you on right track. I didn't tell all this to bad mouth about your mother but wanted you to know the reality.

Raman moves towards his family after saying this. Adhi is looking at him. When he moves Shagun comes and she gives a disgusting look at him.

S: Adhi is my son, you can never win him from me. Do whatever you want. I will give you a fitting reply for whatever you have done.

R: All the best Shagun. I will wait for your reply. Saying so he moves towards his family.

Ishitha has been listening to all this. She is full of tears in her eyes.

Part 2:

Adhi is being questioned by the judge whom does he want to stay.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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woww!! reallyy beautiful.. i hv a strng gut feeling that this will happen in the serial... lets see..
but yes, i loved ur new attempt! its giving us positive vibes.. lol :D keepp continuingg... and thankuuu sooo muchh for the PM... keepp doing it.. heheh :D
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such a great is. Keep continue. All the best.
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Very positive os.. superb ! I really hope that this happen ! :D thks.
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Shagun comes and takes Adhi with her. She says nothing will happen to him. They have withdrawn the case. They leave. Raman comes and meets his family. He is looking for Isitha, she isn't there.He goes to Mrs Iyer

R: Amma iam sorry. I was trying to protect my son. I promised you that I will punish the culprit, but I failed. I wanted him to learn his lesson, but not going to jail. Moreover he didn't do it wantedly, it was a mistake. I will ensure that he at least apologizes to you.

Mrs Iyer: Raman, you always supported us. We misunderstood you. We didn't support you when you needed us badly. We are sorry for this. Adhi is our grand son also. It was a mistake. It's fine. Please accept my apology.

Mr Bhalla: Raman tera dimag tooh alag he chaltha hai. Tu ham sab ko batha deta toh hum be support karthe na. Tujje toh har chij apne tarike see karna hai

Mrs Bhalla: Tuse chodo ji. Peche pad jathe ho. Meera puttar kithna bura laga hoga, hum sabne uska saat nehi diya. Maaf karde puttar ham sabko.

All of them smile. Raman's eyes are searching Ishitha. Mihir slowly comes and wisphers in his ears

M: Bhai, Bhabi ko dund rahe ho?

R: Gruts his teeth, sapete kayage. Office ja aur kam kar. Bhabhi ka chamcha, jaha deko pahunch jatha hai

Mihir leaves from there and goes to Ishitha. Mihir, Romi and Bala are talking to Ishitha about some formality completion. They complete it and head to the house. Raman is waiting to talk to Ishitha, but she sees him and doesn't talk anything.

They reach home by evening and all have dinner togather after so many days the house atmosphere is very happy.

R: Ma, kal tumhara Potha bhi tumhare saath hoga dinner pe.

Mrs Bhalla: Ballae balle, dil kush kar ditha puttar.

Ishitha is serving everyone, Raman's eyes is glued to Ishitha. Romi sees this, he tells Ruhi to ask his papa.

Ru: Papa, app Ishitha ma ko kya dek rahe ho, kana kavona

Raman is startled by the ball bowled by his daughter. He searches for some words

R: Ruhi Beta, appke Ishima koye 8th wonder hai kya , mai unko deko. Mai toh kitchen me dek raha tha.

Ru: Acha papa, issiliye carrot ko paratha samjke ka rahe ho.

Apparently Romi had replaces Raman's plate with a plate of carrort and Raman was eating without realizing it. Raman bent down to find his plate changed. Everyone in the room started laughing. Raman feels embaressed and asks Ruhi to be quiet and eat.

Now Ishitha is continuously looking at Raman, Romi notices that and instrigates Mihika. Mihika calls ishu and she doesn't respond as she is lost admiring her husband. Mihika slowly moves to kitchen and hands over a hot tongs to her and Ishu hold it. She yells in pain after a min and everyone is worried about what happened.

Mihika makes fun of Ishu saying she was asmiring Raman and didn't notice the hot tongs that she placed. Raman quickly gets up and check of her hand is wounded. They have an eye lock. All others in the family were making fun of Ishra.They feel embarrassed and Raman leaves to his room. He is egerly waiting for Ishu to tell her everything and clarify so was Ishitha. She wanted quickly make Ruhi sleep and speak to Raman.

The Bhallas and Iyers come up with a plan to make both Ishra realize that they are indespensible to each other. So they decide to keep them away from each other so that they long of eachother and know how much both mean to each other.

Mr Bhalla: Ishitha puttar, Bhallaji ruhi ke saath so jayege, tum mere kamre me sona. Tujje toda tabyat tik nehi lag raha.

Ishitha feels bad and thinks tending to Toshiji is important. So she tells her that she will inform Raman and come, but Toshiji tells that Bhalla ji will tell him.

Bhallaji goes to Raman's room and tells him that ishitha is sleeping with Toshiji. Raman is cursing his fate. Mutter to himself- Jansi ki Rani kahe ki, bol ke nehi ja sakthe thi. Vaise toh sory thank u ki bade bade lecture dethi hai. Aaj jab usne galath kiya usshe sorry nehi bolna hai kya.

At Ashok house

S: Ashok Iam sorry, I just wanted to make Raman's personal life bad that why I did all that I did in the past few days.

A: Iam sorry Shagun, I didn't realize and spoiled the whole stuff. Anyways they have withdrawn the case. But what will we do with the custoday. I dont want him to be happy with his son.

S: Don't worry baby, Adhi will always listen to me. He is my son not Raman's. Dodnt you remember how we manipulated Adhi earlier so that he lies against Raman. Raman has never beat Adhi, how did I make him lie in the court. We will win don't worry.

Saying so they have a hi fi and drink. Adhi has been hearing all this. Adhi is completely shattered. He is remembering Raman's words. He also recollects how immedietluy Ishitha took the case off. He was feeling very bad and was hating himself.

Next morning all of them assemble in the court. Even Ashok comes with Shagun. First the judge dismisses the accident case and opens the custody case.

Adhi is being brought. The judge asks him if he realizes his Mother's carelessness and whom will he want to say. Adhi looks at Shagun and then Raman. He turns facing the judge,

A: Judge Aunty, my mother is a very busy person. She never had time for me. She made me lie in the court last time against my father. She always thought of fulfilling my needs just by money. I was not adviced properly when I did the accident. Iam sorry for the accident. Especially iam sorry Ishitha aunty's mom. I did a very big mistake. I want to live with my father, who is man of very good virtues and values. I want to grow up and become a man like him. Please hand me over to my father.

Raman and the whole family is very happy. Shagun and ashok are shocked to death. The court grants custody of Adhi to Raman and Ishitha. Like Ruhi, raman made Ashok and Shagun to drop Adhi as well in his house as that was his challenge to them, Toshi went along with her potha. Ishitha went home and all of them made preparations to welcome Adhi.

Part 3:

Adhi says he likes his papa, doesn't mean that he will accept Ishitha as his mother. Ishitha is in tears, Raman looks on.

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wow fab start...plz continue soon
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part 2 mein loved ishra moments...waitin for ishra talk..!!
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Wow really nice...thank god adi realised...cont soon
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reallyy amazinggg!!! loved itt.. finallyy Adi had the guts to say he wants to stay with Raman!! good lord!! keepp continuinggg
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Part 3
Raman brings Adhi home. Toshiji takes his arthi and everyone is very happy. Raman is very happy to have his son back and was moved by whatever he spoke in the court. He felt proud that his son recogonizes him as a man of values. Ruhi was very excited to have her brother. Ishitha has made food that Adhi likes and he is having. Meantime Mihir and Romi make fake calls to Raman and Ishu respectively to keep them enaged and Toshiji briefs her plan to both the kids as their parents are katti with each other. Aparently Adhi has to keep Raman enaged and Ruhi has to keep ishitha engaged so that they don't talk to each other and feel the pain of separation this is what the elders had planned and the kids were very excited to be part of this plan. Raman and Ishitha come back. Adhi apologizes to mrs Iyer and says he is very ashamed of his behavior. Mrs Iyer forgives him and says you are also my grandson; I will not punish you for your mistakes. Raman is very proud of his son and also apolozies to Amma. The whole family has fun time. Its bed time and Raman asks if he will sleep in Ruhi's room along with her and Ishima will tell him stories. Adhi is irritated and says:

A: I like you papa, doesn't mean that he will accept Ishitha as his mother. Ishitha is in tears, Raman looks on.

R: Ok Beta app unko aunty bulana.

A: Tik hai. Kya mai apke saath so saktha hu

Raman is indeed delighted and they decide that father son will sleep in Raman's room and the daughter mother duo would sleep in Ruhi's room. However Ishu and Raman think that they didn't get to speak to each other and feel bad. While the children are in the living room, Ishu comes to her room to pick her change over cloths. Raman notices that and quickly rushes to his room.

R: Oye Janshi ki Rani tumhe mujje kuch nehi kehana hai kya

I: Ravan kumar apko mujjse kuch kehna hai toh sede muh nehi bol sakthe.

Adhi enter the room and they stop arguing and Ishitha leaves. Both of them feel bad that they are unable to speak to each other.

After Ruhi and Adhi slept also both Raman and Ishitha were unable to sleep. Raman slowly goes to Ruhi's room to check out Ishitha. He finds her standing in the moon light infront of the window. She was wearing a sky blue kurthe and looking divine. He was awed seeing her. He sliently moves to her and stands next to her. Ishitha looks at him. He signals to go down for a walk.

They walk and its slience all through the walk. Then they sit in the bench. Raman breaks to ice apologizing for hiding things from her. Ishitha says she felt bad that she was not completely aware of the things and she assumed that he loves Shagun and that why he is supporting her. She also tells him that she heard his conversation with Adhi outside the court. She feels bad that he didn't trust her and tell the truth and also apoloze that she didn't trust him and support him when she must have been by his side.Raman and ishitha promise each other that they will not be hinding anything to eachother. They realize thatthis whole issue has strenghthen their relationship. However both start thinking why it affects them when they don't talk to each other or when they are angry on each other. Is it love

Part 4:
Ishitha is very busy with the kids. She had started to bond with Adhi as well. She was hardly getting time for Raman. She was taking care of housesold work, Kids studies and needs and Raman is totally being ignored. He feels irritated. Hardly he is able to talk a single word once in 2 words. That also was so limited
Edited by NithyaLaks - 11 years ago

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