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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 4

Scene starts with Raman entering the clinic and notices no one there .Ishita was sitting alone in her cabin.She was lost in thoughts.

Raman slowly enters her cabin.

Ishita knew it is going to happen she din't even looks at him and speaks.

Ishita "Raman aapko meri fikar ho rahen thee?"

Raman was silent then Ishita comes to him looking at him .

Ishita "Aap kuch bol kyon naheen rahen hain?"

Raman was silent.

Ishita "Raman aap uss court case key pass Mumbai gaye they."

Ishita "Raman aapko uss baath sey bahaar aaney key liyen time chhiye thaa but Raman aap ney mujhey ek bhee mauka nehen diyya."

Ishita "Raman main aapsey yeh nahen poochney waaley hun kee apney mujhey kyon naheen bathaaya.Kyon kee usska jawaab mujhey patha hain."

Raman "Ishita aisaa nahen hain main tumhey bathaana chahtha tha but Shagun ney Adi kee kasam lee thee."

Ishita "Raman main jaanthe hun.Main aapko samaj sakthee hun jiss din mujhey sach patha chala ussey din main samajh gayee kee Shagun ka haath hain issmey."

Ishita "Raman but mera sawaal who nahen thaa."

Raman was silent and Ishita looking at him continues.

Ishita "Main jaanthe hun kee aap Adi sey kitnaa pyaar karthey hain. Aur ussko bachaaney key liyen kuch bhee karengey."

Ishita "Raman ussmey mera kyaa galathee hain kee aapney mujhey yahan Akeley chodkar chaley gayen?"

Raman was silent.

Ishita "Raman aap ney socha kaisey kee sab kuch solve hojayega aap bahar gaye tho."

Ishita "Raman mere kyaa galathee thee.Kee aap mujhsey baath hee nahen kar rahen they."

Ishita "Raman teen mahiney.Ek baar bhee aap mujhsey baath nahen kiyan.Raman main yahan marr rahen thee aapsey baaath karney.but aapko kuch faraq naheen pada."

Ishita "Raman main har din yeh sochkar bitha rahen thee kee humaarey issues solve hongey."

Ishita "Mujhey mera pathi chahiyen thaa Raman.Mujhey uss baath sey koi problem nahen thee kee aap Shagun ko support kar rahen they.Raman mujhey faraq nahen padnaa chhiye thaa hummarey shaadi Ruhi key liyen huin hothee tho.But Raman you are my husband.Mujhey yeh bardaash nahen huin kee mera pathee koi aur ladkee ka madad karey jab who galath thee.Mera pathi mera khilaf khada hain.I can't take it Raman."

Raman was trying to speak some thing but Ishita stops him.

Ishita "Itney din aap sirf Ruhi sey baath kar rahen they.Main usskey saath aapkey baathey sun rahen thee.Abh aapke baarey hain Aap sunengey."

Ishita "Raman jawaab deejiyen mujhey kee aapney kyaa sochkar gayen they yahan sey."

Ishita "Raman jab mujhey aapkey jaroori thee aap merey saath nahen they.Main itney din aapsey baath karney chahthe thee ke.I am sorry main aapko galath samjhee.But aapney mujhey mauka nahen diyaa."

Raman "Ishita mujhmey itnaa himmath nahenthaa kee tumhaarey saamney aaon."

Ishita "Raman kyon?Kyaa jaroori thaa?Raman aap mujhey ek mauka tho diyan hotha.But you are adamant to your decision."

Ishita "Raman aap key saarey galathiyon ko maaf karney ke takath hain mujhmey but mujhmey yeh takath nahen hain kee aap mujhsey door rahon."

Raman "Ishita.It hurt me equally.Merey pass yeh sawaal ka jawaab aneh thaa kee main tumpar vishwaas nehen kartha hun."

Raman "Ishita.Main yeh baath tumsey boolney kee bahuth koshish kee.Main andhar he andhar mar rahan thaa kee main tumsey kuch batha anhen paa rahan hun.I just can't do anything without you."

Raman "Ishita I love you.Yeh baath mujhey kehney kee himmath nahen thee uss samay.You are my strength.Mera taakath tum hon Ishita.Tum merey pass nahen thee mujhey kuch samajh mey naheen aa rahan thaa ke kyaa karon.Main darr gayan thaa mera himmath thoot gaya.I just can' face you."

Ishita was shocked at the confession and tears of happiness flowing in her eyes as Raman hugs her.

Raman "Ishita inn teen mehiney mey ek bhee din nahen thee jab mujhey tumhaarey yaad na ayaen hon.Main tumsey baath na karney kee iccha hon.But I could'nt dare."

Ishita "Raman aur ek baar boliyen Raman."

Raman understood what she wants.

Raman "I love you Ishita."

Ishita "I love you too Raman." Breakin down.

Ishita "I love you .I love you."

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Posted: 11 years ago
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U r an awesome dreamer... Going gr8..
plz pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 5

Scene starts in clinic with Raman hugging Ishita and crying.

Raman "Ishita abh tho rona bandh karon.I am sorry .Mujhey nahen patha kee yeh baath tumhey itnaa chot pahunchayega."

Ishita "Raman kaisey nahen pahunchega."

Raman "I am sorry.Tum bolon mujhey kyaa karnaa hain isskey badaley mey.Mujhey kyaa karnaa padega kee tum fir sey hason."

Ishita "Raman yeh koi business nahen hain kee aap kuch dedon aur aapko jo chahey miley."

Raman "Ishita tum hason tho ashen.Tumhey decide karnaa bhee hain naa humey kahan jaana hain tour key liyen .Tumney plan kiyya .Mainey tum logon par choda thaa."

Ishita "Aap topic divert math keejiyen."

Raman cutting it out.Lifts her in his arms and takes her to mirror in her clinic.

Raman "Ishita ek baar yeh chhra ko dekhon .Merey shaadi issey nahen huen thee."

Ishita seeing her crying face in mirror and changes it and clearing her tears.

Ishita "Sab kuch aap key wajaha sey hain."

Raman "Abh thodi Ishita lag rahen hon.But poorey ke poorey nahen .Meri Jhansi ki Rani ka baath kuch alag hain."

Ishita "Abh chup keejiyen ." smiling ."Raman hum ghar kaisey jaayengey Baarish bahuth hon rahen hain."

Raman "Dekhthey hain?" they go and look out side and as expected it was raining heavily and car is also completey immobilized.

Raman "Lagatha hain yehi rukhnaa padega.Aaj raath."

They move inside and Raman sits in couch in Ishita's cabin.

Raman "Ishita ghar phone karkey boolna hoga."

Ishita "Han sab loog pareshaan hongey."

Raman then calls home and tells them that they wont be able to come as it is raining heavily and planned to stay their itself.

Then Raman cuts the call.

Raman "Ishita ek baath bathaon." Going near her holding her hands.

Ishita "Kyaa?"

Ramna "Tum har din aisey hee rothee thee kyaa?"

Ishita "Raman abh uss baarey mey baath math keejiyen.Nahen tho main ..."

Raman "Kyaa karogi mujhsey baath anehn karoogi merey taraha."

Ishita "Main aapkey tarah darpook nahen hun kee bhagjaon."

Raman "Tho tumney Mumbai aaney key baarey mey kyon naheen soocha.?"

Ishita was silent as she know reason was not Ruhi .Even Ruhi won't mind if Ishita visits Raman and come back.

Raman "Tum kuch bol kyon nahee rahen hon?"

Ishita "Raman aapko raath bar iss room mey hee rehnaa hain kyaa?"

Raman"Abh tum topic divert kar rahen hon."

Ishita "Raman kuch tho serious leejiyen."

Raman "Main koi patient nahen hun hee main koi ward mey soun."

Ishita "Raman pehley suniyen tho sahin."

Ishita "Ek guest room hain.Emmergency situation key liyen rakha hain.Hum waha chaltey hain.Merey pass usska chaabi hain"

Raman "Theek hain chaltey hain.Aaj mujhey iss dawaion ka smell bear karnaa padega.But tumhaarey pass chaabi kyon hain"

Ishita guides him to the room.Room was small one with just few arrangements.

Ishita "Raman jab aap ghar pey nahen they tho main kuch din yaheen rehthee thee raath ko.Mujhey uss room mey sirf aapkey yaaden they.aur mujhey who baath yaad dilathey thye."

Raman "Tum fir sey wahen aagayee."

Ishita closes door and closes the curtains as Raman switches on TV.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome and very interesting... Continue soon...
waiting for next...
Edited by Asha122 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continue soon... Waiting for next...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update...👏👏👏👏
Please do continue this SS..😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update.
Please do continue this SS.

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