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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi All,
I am writing first time in any forum, I welcome honest feedback.
Intro:

Ishita just sits after raman left to picnic with his family & just started to analyze all the things done by Ramann in last few days. She was hurt, she does not understand why she was hurt, is it because raman didnt trusted her? Is it because raman still loves shakun(that is what ishita feels)? Is it because raman lied to her? Or is it because raman didnt treated her as family?

This is not the first time Raman hurted her saying adi ke liye, but htis is enough now... She feels that raman always have first prio to adhi & shagun, she feels bad that even ruhi is not equivalent to adhi for raman...So she decided to show Raman the importance of herself & Ruhi, So she decided to play a game with shagun, adhitya & raman.

let me know whether i should continue or not? Sorry if it is not upto the mark...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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seems interesting,
I feel that you should continue. 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start dear.. Daro nai aur likho.. Sab ko pasand ayega...! 😃

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