OS: Based on yesterday's precap... (28/06/2014) Final note.Pg 23 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --mancityfan--

I am not sure one where adi dies


Yup... The same one... Actually, that's he only one i have written till date apart from this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Awesome part!!
You are truly a fabulous writer
Dying to read the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
omg accident...
raman ur one mistake...goin to take ishu' s life...

krishna nice one...continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Loved ur os...really nice...well written...i hope raman apologies to ishu...cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
dammit part 3 made me cry...
yup raman s ryt..he is human...his selfishness towards adi..

made him wrong...

now wht ishu goin to do...will she understand raman's wory..without

raman pleading her...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Heyya dear..just read all three parts...awesomely written..love it..love the silent treatment ishita gave to raman...cant wait to read what happen next..continue soon 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing OS... read all the 3 parts at once ! Hope something like this happens in the serial too Great going... plz update soon !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Loved it ...
Please do Pm me ...
Please
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

krishna...for u...

u got it na...in which behlaf ths pic...if not rembr our chat in lu thrd night...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Raman: Papa... Jaanta hoon ki aap sab naraz ho mujhse. Itna bada sach chupaya. Lekin please papa... Ek baar Ishita se milne dijiye. I have to see her. Mujhe usse surakshit dekhna hai... Please... Ma... Aap kuch kaho na...

Mr.Bhalla: Koi kuch nahi kahega... Bahut ho gayi Raman... Tum Ishita ke value kab samjoge? Phir ussi pagal aurat ke jaal mein phas rahe ho na? Shagun se bhi jyada gir gaye ho tum...

Raman: Papa... Maine yeh sab Adi ke liye kiya, Shagun ke liye nahi...

Mr.Bhalla: Apne bete ko kya seekh de rahe ho Raman? Baap ho... Sahi raasta dikhana chahiye... Tumhe yaad hai, jab tumne mujhe Romi ke baare mein bataya, maine tumhara saath diya usse saza dene mein. Kya woh mera beta nahi hai?

Raman: Papa... Main galat hoon... Jaantha hoon lekin galti sudharne ka ek...

Mr.Bhalla: Baat Ishita ki hai. Aaj tak kaafi saari galtiyaan hui hai humse Ishita ko lekar. Ab aur nahi... Romi... Yehi rukho. Tumhare bhai andar nahi aani chahiye. Agar woh andar aa gayi toh tum mere ghar ke andar nahi aa paoge.

Inside the room, Ishita opened her eyes slowly... Every inch of her face, legs and hands were aching as she winked her eyes... Ishita saw her whole family around her who were looking upon her with worried faces... But, Ishita couldn't see Raman... She knew that Raman was with her after her accident. She heard Raman voice. In a short time, she felt herself being enveloped in two arms... She felt Raman's warmness against her face. She couldn't open her eyes because her blood was oozing out and she felt weak. Later, she felt that her head was on some lap. She felt warm tears washing the blood covering her face... She experienced pain as a strand of hair caressed her face. In a minute's time, it was put back to its place and she din't even feel that single finger doing it. Then the hospital room... Amidst severe pain, she felt a small needle pricking inside... She thought it must be the anesthesia... Then, it blurred...

Ishita: (Thinking) Raman kahan hoga... Jab itne der mere saath tha...

Mr.Iyer: Ishu... Kaisi ho?

Ishita: Teek hoon appa...

Toshi: Hum itne saare log yahan rahenge toh doctor daatenge. Main rukungi Ishita ke naal. Aap log ghar jao...

Mr.Bhalla: Teek hai... Ek minute aap mere saath aayiye...

Taking her aside,
Mr.Bhalla: Raman ko andar le aane ki koshish mat kijiye. Agar aisi baat hai, toh aap ghar jayiye. Main rukunga apne Bahu ke saath.

Toshi: Bhallaji... Raman ke aankhon mein uska takleef nazar nahi aa raha hai...

Mr.Bhalla: Jaanta tha. Aapse aur kya umeed rakh saktha hoon? Iss baar aapke puttar ne haddein par kar diya. Apne biwi ko dhoke dekar uss dhokebaaz Shagun ke saath diya. Aap ghar jayiye...

Raman couldn't go near Ishita because of Mr.Bhalla. Others started feeling bad for Raman when they saw the pain in his eyes. Ishita who was angry with Raman for breaking his trust was somehow missing him.

Mihika: Akka... Ab kaisi ho?

Ishita: Teek hoon... Raman... Raman mujhse milne kyon nahi aayi?

Mihika: Bhalla uncle ne rok diya. Unhone jhoot bola Shagun ke liye isliye... Lekin, woh ghar bhi nahi gaya. Shirt tak Mihir ne aake diya...

Ishita: Sach mein Shagun ke liye kiya unhone yeh sab?

Mihika: Adi ke wajah se kiya akka... Lekin, kya farak padtha. Jhooth bolne ki kya zaroorat thi?

Raman opened her room's door...
Ishita: Mihika... Bahar jaake dekho ki kahi papaji na aa jaye...
Edited by krikumar.91 - 11 years ago

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