Ishra SS: Alaipayuthey..Pg 65 - KC spl completed - Page 35

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Posted: 11 years ago
i love ur writtings vidya... superb...loved it 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JUHI.HI

i love ur writtings vidya... superb...loved it 👏


thanks dear!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: life93

hi vidya di🤗...

awesome !! 😉 passionate☺️...
in this one ishita is daring😉😛 showerwala love☺️
u know what i'm going to say 😉 i'm so helpless my Arre !❤️ missing them !😔
update soon di🤗


mujhe patha hai...ARRE update is long pending...will do it this weekend...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor waiter, mann mein hii bohot gaaliyaan aur maar mili hongi usko. 😆

Raman knocked again, "maine mess kiya na?...chalo open the door...let me help you" 😳

😲 Usko Biwi ke saath khaana hai toh plate ko kyun blame kar raha hai? 😆

After all these, phirse romance shuru!
And I lost myself in my dreams.

Aur phir dono se, "Acchhoo...!" 🤣

He ruffled his hair and smiled at her =>So cute 🥱

I wasn't expecting more parts, but i'm very happy. Since they've confessed already, you were able to go a bit further.
I loved your version too. ❤️

And I love the song so much. After reading this, i was listening to it on repeat. 🥱

Edited by dhaakshu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand


thanks!

I am settled in Chennai but basically a Malayalee...
but I know Tamil well!



Oh.. that's nice.. I'm from chennai too... Nice to know you 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is such a cute story...loving it!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand


mujhe patha hai...ARRE update is long pending...will do it this weekend...❤️

really thank u di🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
room service???😆😆
kya exact timing hai!!🤣
aww...raman help karna chahte hai kya?☺️
romance bhi kare to taunt marke..kya insaan hai!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello YHMians...back with a closing part...hope u like it...

PMs later...

plz excuse errors...I havent proof checked...

Kids pls stay away as this is not for u...others can grab a bottle of cold water...

pls read and comment...thanks a ton again for all the support...

thanks for all the prev likes and comments! thanks to all those who eagerly wait for this update...u really motivate me to write more!

Part 7B:

He smiled as he bent down to gulp in the remnant water drops with gentle kisses. His lips trailed a line of kisses all along her face before his gaze settled on her wet quievering lips. They had been inviting him to them for quite sometime now. He didn't waste another second to place a gentle peck on her lips which obviously sent a shrill up her spine.

But before he could deepen the kiss, she let out a sneeze which broke the moment.

The sneeze was infectious and he sneezed too making them laugh out the very next instant transforming the whole romantic moment back into a funny encounter.

He ruffled his hair and smiled at her, then passed her a towel and went out of the room taking his towel with him.

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She came out a little later drying her hair with the towel but her entire attire still wet. She pouted seeing Raman lying lazily with his face pressed into the fluffy pillows but a part of her just wanted to get under the duvet and snuggle into his arms. She shyly rubbished her crazy wish and complained. "Raman, yeh dekho aapne kya haal kiya...my saree is fully wet...What will I wear now?"

He naughtily grinned as he turned his face to her, "Filaal uss problem ko main solve kartha hoom"

Saying that, he pulled her into the bed and in a jiffy, pulled away her wet saree! Even before she realized what was happening, he placed a heart searing kiss on her lips and was completing what he left incomplete beneath the shower due to her sneeze. Though she resisted a little, she gave in eventually because he was literally unstoppable or rather irresistible! The soft caress of his mouth on hers and then along the outline of her body set her aflame and then there was no stopping.

Almost an hour later, she lay wrapped in his arms. She blushed remembering about his naughty ways of making love to her and true to his words, he had helped her change clothes in his own unique mischievous way. She gazed at his sleeping form while her fingers played with his hair. He groaned in the pleasure that gesture of hers gave him. He slowly opened his eyes to meet hers. He could see that she had been gazing him without a blink. Chuckling, he enquired, "kya dekh rahi ho?"

"Dekh rahi hoom ke aap sothe hua kitna innocent ho" she said with a grin.

He was quick to bounce back another question, "aur jaagthe hua?"

She pinched his nose and replied grinning, "jaagthe hua bohat badmaash aur besharm ho...sharm naam ki koyi cheez hi nahi..."

"Hoo hoo...apni biwi se badmaashi aur besharmi nahi karunga toh kiske saath karunga...yeh sab mera haq hai...don't you dare control me madrasan!"

He kissed her fingers and pulled her closer leaving no space between them. She struggled a little and said, "ab bhi mera problem wahi ka wahi hai...I don't have anything to wear Raman...Do you want me to go out in that bathrobe?"

He huskily voiced, "I don't mind..." and then instantly added, "But I should be the only one seeing you like that..."

She smiled shyly while he said, "tum jaake shower karlo...by the time you come out, you will have a dress to wear...Ruhi promise!"

She smiled and said, "OK"

As promised, a new dress was on the bed by the time she stepped out of the bath. She was really surprised as it was something she never wore these days or rather quit wearing after her college days. It was a long flowing skirt with floral patterns with a plain white top. It looked beautiful and she was also tempted to wear it. A note saying Give me the pleasure of seeing you in this' accompanied the dress She found the door to the balcony ajar and instantly realized that he was there waiting to see her in the dress.There was no way she could deny or refuse to his wishes.

A little later, she came out wearing that dress. He instantly turned to her and was mesmerized. She looked lovely and cute in it that Raman couldn't take his eyes off her. She looked like a college girl. It looked like she had gone younger by a few years as well.

He chuckled and added naughtily, "arre Ishita, maine toh apne hi paer mein khulaadi maar li...ab tumhe sab ke nazar se bachaana hoga..."

She assumed it to be a taunt and asked,"Accha nahi hai na? Shall I change then?"
Raman knew what exactly she was thinking. He had always taunted her for her looks but little did she know that all of it was his false attempts to keep his eyes and heart off her. He was just doing it to distract himself away from her. He instantly said with a wink, "No no...you look good...meri biwi toh dur ki baat hai, koyi college student lagthi ho yaar!"

Ishita smiled at his comment and blushed while replying,"I have a solution for that...come"

He wondered what she was intending and followed her inside eagerly. She stops near the dressing table and gives him the sindoor box and asks him to fill it in her hair parting, "Isse mere maang mein acche se barr dijiye...mark me as yours...phir kisi ko koyi doubt nahi hogi!"

He was pleased by that but then he couldn't stop mocking her too.

"Oh hello Jhansi ki rani, itna matth udho...main bas aise hi mazaag kar raha tha...inn sab ke koyi zaroorat nahi...tum pehle jaise thi bilkul waise hi ho..."

Ishita wasn't hurt but still she replied sounding inferior to him, "I know Raman...I do know how I look..."

He didn't reply but just picked the sindoor in his hands and filled it in. Then he leaned to her and pecked her forehead fondly.

Raman then commented playfully looking at her head to toe, "ab aisa lagega ke kisi student ko usi ke professor ne pataa liya..."

Ishita blushed but encircled his neck and kissed his cheeks fondly, she replied naughtily "Raman...ab professor itna handsome hoga toh koyi bhi ladki khud fidaa ho hi jaayegi na?"

Raman raised his eyebrows and looked at her, "Ohhh kya baat hai? My Jhansi ki rani knows to flirt too!"

Ishita smiled and replied touching his nose tip with her finger, "haan par sirf aapse..."

Raman nods giving her an "I know it" look and then shifts to a naughty mood. He hugs her from behind and says, "Accha hua ke tumne saree nahi pehena..."

When she looked enquiringly, he added with a wink, "Your saree teases me big time Ishita...phir outing cancel ho jaatha..."

That's when she knew his plan to take her out. He had planned a lunch together and also take her for shopping and pamper her with gifts.

He wasn't planning to stop teasing her. He went on, "waise ab bhi kuch kam nahi lag rahi ho...You look beautiful and all I want to do is..."

He leaned towards her lips and his words trailed off but she shyly lowered her lashes and spoke with a frown, "I said na I know how I look...aapko jhooti taareef karne ki zaroorat nahi"

Raman grinned at her modesty or rather her inferiority complex regarding her looks. But he knew that it was his own doing. He had taunted her too much and that's why she felt she wasn't beautiful enough. He realized that he had to fix this complex of hers once and for all.

He hugged her closer,"Tumhe khud nahi patha ke tum kitni khoobsurat ho Ishita"

He turned her towards the mirror and said,"tum khud dekhlo, aur bathao kya main jhoot bol raha hoom? "

Ek Din Kabhi Jo

Khud Ko Taraashe

Meri Nazar Se Tu Zara

Haay Re

Aankhon Se Teri Kya Kya Chhupa Hai

Tujhko Dikhaaoon Main Zara

Haay Re

Ek Ankahi Si Daastaan Daastaan

Kehne Lagega Aaina

Subhanallah

Jo Ho Raha Hai Pehli Dafha Hai

Wallaaah Aisa Hua

Subhanallaaah

Jo Ho Raha Hai Pehli Dafha Hai

Wallaaah Aisa Hua

She was first confused but when she understood his intention, she smiled at his romantic actions.

She cherished his words, it felt so good. Everytime, he did or said something romantic, instantly everything felt magical around her. He was truly her magic and could transport her to a whole new world altogether. Nothing else mattered to her in those magical moments. She was truly lost in a beautiful trance.

He hugged her from behind snaking his arms around her waist and placing his head on her shoulders, "Agar yeh bhi jhoot hai toh mere aankhon mein dekhlo...tumhe patha chal jaayega..."

She blushed and replied, "Your words work like magic on me Raman...mujhe nahi patha ke what you do to me...I love you Raman"

Hearing that from her, he couldn't hold it back either! He twirled her around still embracing her within his arms and forced her to look into his deep eyes. He voiced romantically, "I love you too"

Their eyes met each other and a passionate romantic silence set in.

No words were required to convey what he felt for her or what she evoked inside him. All his love and passion he had for her were evident in his eyes. It reflected nothing but love...

Hers were no less...she loved him truly deeply madly...She could give up anything and everything for him and his happiness...He could read it from her lovely eyes...

Meri Khaamoshi Se Baatein Chun Lena

Unki Dori Se Taarife Bhun Lena

Haan Meri Khaamoshi Se Baatein Chun Lena

Unki Dori Se Taareefe Bun Lena

Kal Nahi The Jo Aaj Lagti Hoon

Taareef Meri Hai Khaama Khaan

Tohfa Hai Tera Meri Adaah

Ek Din Kabhi Jo Khud Ko Pukaare

Meri Zubaan Se Tu Zara

Haay Re

He voiced huskily, "ab kahi baahar jaane ka mann bhi nahi hai..."

"Then let's cancel the outing" pat came her reply but his naughty eyes which teased her for that made her correct herself, "Mera matlab woh nahi tha...bas yun hi..."

Raman grinned naughtily, "then what else do you want to do? Tumhe saamne bitaake tumaari taareef kartha rahoom?

She buried her face into his chest and whispered playfully hitting his arms, "aap bhi na Raman"

Raman continued, "I can do that for an entire lifetime Ishita..."

He could feel her smiling against his chest. He could feel the color and warmth of her blush as well. He just closed her in his arms and hugged her tightly.

Tujh Mein Chhupi Si Jo Shayari Hai

Tujhko Sunaaoon Main Zara

Haay Re

Ye Do Dilon Ka Vaasta Vaasta

Khul Ke Bataaya Jaaye Na

Subhanallah

Jo Ho Raha Hai Pehli Dafha Hai

Wallah Aisa Hua

Subhanallah

Jo Ho Raha Hai Pehli Dafha Hai

Wallah Aisa Hua

Subhanallah

Jo Ho Raha Hai Pehli Dafha Hai

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They didn't know how much time they stood like that but after what looked like eternity, they made up their mind to part and venture out.

Ishita was always attached to the city for more than one reason. The most important reason obviously was her mother's ancestral home being there in Chennai. She used to come here for all her vacations and she had first met Subbu in Chennai. She had fallen in love with him during such a vacation as well. There were many good memories of this city. But now, her moments with Raman replaced them all. She wanted to fill her memories with Raman and just Raman.

Forgetting all their past and present, like any other couple on honeymoon, hands entwined they ventured into the city without any preplanning, whispering their sweet nothings which meant a world just to their ears and hearts!

Except for each other, nothing else mattered at those moments...cherishing, treasuring every passing second for a life time together!

Ishita couldn't have asked for more...she couldn't have wished for more...she felt she was the happiest, the luckiest woman in this whole world. Raman was no less. With Ishita by his side, he felt complete, his life felt complete and his love, yes his love wasn't incomplete now.

Suno Na Sangemarmar Ki Yeh Minaare
Kuch Bhi Nahi Hai Aagge Tumhare
Aaj Se Dil Pe Mere
Raj Tumhara A A Aaa
Taj Tumhara

They were truly made for each other and perfect with each other.

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So how was it? pls do reply...

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Edited by vidya.anand - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update dear...
So beautiful. ..
Loved it..

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