Ishra SS: Alaipayuthey..Pg 65 - KC spl completed - Page 22

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Posted: 11 years ago
Di phirseh nooo nooo nooo nahiiin nahiiin nahiiin 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Bachi ko rula diya apne 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Hehe... awww our cute ishita..she could not not understand 😳 😳 😳 hum toh samaj gayi 😆 😆 😆 😆

I always love their nok-jhok and how raman always try to make her feel at ease 😃 😃 😃 😃

Ayyooo i looove this ishita..who voice out what she wanted and also what her husband wanted 😛 😛

We want the confession and after confession tooo jaldii jaldiii 😉 😉

Pleaseee pleaseee pleaseee pleaseee 😳 😳 😳

Love the chotu sa cute updateee 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
That was an awesome, short and sweet update vidhya.
You have stopped at the most interesting moment. Why are you doing this to us yaar? 😔

Please continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow. Too nice. Loved it. next parts pls want asap. Pls pm. thanks a lot :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello YHMians...back with the next part as promised...plz excuse errors...

I havent proof checked...

Kids pls stay away as this is not for u...others can grab a bottle of cold water...😉

pls read and comment...thanks a ton again for all the support...

thanks for all the prev likes and comments! thanks to all those who eagerly wait for this update...u really motivate me to write more!

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Part 5b

Ishita spoke up looking into his eyes in true Jhansi ki rani style "aaj main sona nahi chahthi Raman"

He turned around fully to face her. Her eyes told him all that she had in her mind but then he couldn't believe what he had read from those deep eyes. May be he wanted to hear it from her or...his thoughts ceased ...

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She took his hands closer to herself "mujhe apna banaa lijiye Raman...make me your wife in all meanings...I want to be yours...just yours...I don't want to remain as just Ruhi's mother but...jo bhi dhooriyaan humaare beech hai unn sab ko aaj mitaa dijiye...I want to cherish this night forever Raman..."

Raman wasn't sure of what he heard...did she actually say all that?

Damn, it was just a dream or as it her mind voice or was it her confession that he longed to hear.

He was no less adamant of staying calm. He decided to tease her as usual, "sona nahi chahti, huh? Then watch football with me...aaj finals hai...match shuru hone tak ek movie bhi dekh sakte hai, what say?"

Her irritation hearing that was well evident though she tried her best to hide. She gave a made up smile and nodded but then remembered what she was going to change to. They hadn't brought any clothes. Right at the moment, she remembered Mihika placing a small bag in the ward robe. She had thought that it was Mihika's clothes. She quickly went to check. From it emerged a night wear which she couldn't even dream of wearing and that too before Raavan Kumar. No way. There was another saree too which was for the next day. She had thoughtfully kept Raman's casual wear too. So it was all set for him but damn, what would she do now?

She had no choice but sleep in that saree itself. She shut the wardrobe with a bang and walked back to the bed. Meanwhile, he had plonked himself on the bed with the remote. He started seeing some random channel but his focus was undiverted and fully only on his wife. He smiled to himself watching her angry antics. When she came back without changing, he knew what the issue was. He chuckled naughtily as he liked the fact that she was still in that saree. It was indeed a perfect turn on to what he intended to do.

She took the extreme end of the bed and was turned to the opposite direction away from him. She was cursing under her breath, "praandh, muttaal...mujhe na samajh kehta hai...aur khud ko badaa intelligent...smart my foot!"

Raman's eyes and ears were only glued to her. He grinned seeing her continuous mumbling. He put the remote aside and stretched towards her. Sensing him coming closer, she tightly shut her eye lids pretending to sleep. He smiled at her innocent act and placed his hand on her upper arm, "Tumne toh kaha tha ke aaj sona nahi chahti thi...then?"

She replied with her eyes still closed, "haan kaha tha but ab mujhe neend aa rahi hai..."

"Mera neend udaadiya aur ab sona chahti ho, huh? No way are you doing that so easily"

That made her eyes wide open and an instant blush crept up her soft cheeks.

He tried to pull her closer but she got up all of a sudden and ran to the window again shyly. He controlled a naughty laugh and walked to her.

Her heart beats seemed to have paced up suddenly as if she had just completed a marathon as he came closer.

He grinned cheekily at her shyness and stood behind her wondering where the brave Jhansi rani had vanished to. His fingers slid along her hands till it entwined with her fingers and hugged her making her lean back completely onto him. She kind of lost her balance and almost fell into his arms. Her loudly thudding heartbeats reached his. He could feel her body shaking as well.

He rested her face on her shoulders and spoke up huskily into her ears, "What do you want to do instead of sleeping Ishita?"

His breath tickled her and his lips almost brushing her ear lobes making her feel ecstatic. She closed her eyes to cherish that feeling and didn't speak up for a few minutes.

She looked into his eyes for a brief moment and voiced, "What do my eyes tell you Raman??"

Her eyes were speaking volumes and no more questions were needed for him to know what she wished for. Yes it said it all...she really wanted him to complete her!...He smiled at her and nodded meaning that her wishes were his too and will be granted tonight but that made her blush and move away from him.

She voiced out slowly when he tightened the grip on her wrist,"main dress change karke aathi hoom Raman! Yeh sab..." She pointed that the jewellery and the heavy saree was a hindrance to him. Now she didn't feel so odd in changing to the hot night wear that MIhika had kept for her but he didn't let her complete her words.

He cut her short and didn't let her move "nahi aise hi rehne dho..."

She looked sideways at him enquiringly and he added with a naughty wink "Do you even know what you do to me when dressed up in a saree? Khair tum aise nahi samjhogi...dheere dheere main samjhaatha hoom...Come..."

He said as he led her back to their beautifully decorated bed.

As they beside each other, she lowered her gaze and sat just like a new bride on her wedding night. He would be lying if he said that he was feeling any different though he had been through such a situation before.

It wasn't his first night but for her, it was probably the first time she sat even so intimately with a man. So he was a little apprehensive as he wished to make it a special memorable night for her which could be cherished forever. He couldn't take his eyes off her and he mentally smacked himself for all those witty taunts that he made on her. He had insulted her with his words which could have even dented the pride of the woman in her but still today she was totally surrendering to him and that only meant that she loved him so much. He felt pride in her. He also knew that she was always a bit unsure and insecure about him and Shagun. He had to clear all of it tonight.

He had to make her feel beautiful inside out and do away with all her insecurities that she had had about herself.

At each stage, he had to make her feel loved, desired and wanted. With all his love for her, he had to proclaim his desire and need for her. He couldn't let his past with Shagun hinder Ishita's happiness. She deserved the best like any other girl expects it on her first night.

He smiled at her lowered head "Ishita...mere taraf dekho na?"

Ishita slowly looked to his side, still her eyes were refusing to meet his gaze. He gently glided his finger across her face as he tucked her wandering lock of hair behind her ears. As his fingers touched her ear, she closed her eyes and tilted her head to that side...his palm supporting her face now.

He edged closer and brought her face to him. He kissed her other cheek gently and his lips moved down placing a line of kisses towards her neck. She didn't open her eyes trying to hold on to the new sensation that was rising within her.

He snuggled into her thick wavy hair and breathed in its fragrance...the hair and her body smelled like jasmine which was giving him a crazy feeling. He huskily spoke as he inhaled in her scent "You smell so good and tempting Ishita!"

She couldn't help smiling at that while he added still nuzzling deeper into her neck "You look so beautiful and you drive me crazy and wild every time doctor!"

"Doctor nahi dentist hoom!"

Her out of time correction annoyed him a little. Here he was bringing in the perfect setting and she was doing the opposite. He shook his head amused and pulled back abruptly surprising her as well and she wondered if she had done something wrong. He could see her confusion and spoke up, "I will be back now!"

He walked to the rest room while she sat there waiting. Her mind continuously praying that all went on well and that she could please him like any wife would do. He came out looking fresh now. He had changed and also brushed up. He dimmed the lights a bit leaving just the table lamp on and walked to her speaking out.

"Fresh nahi hua ya brush nahi kiya toh tum lecture dena shuru karogi which I don't want at this time..."

Ishita smiled and spoke up "I never lecture you for all that Raman...waise bhi mujhe pasand tha..."

Raman responded with a confused chuckle "kya pasand tha?"

Ishita looked away from him and managed to reply "aapka woh scent..." She couldn't say out more but he understood what she meant.

Raman laughed as he brought back her face to him "really?...pehle bathaa diya hota toh time waste nahi kartha. Anyways, now tell me what more do you like?"

Chahoon Bhi Toh Main Kaise Kahoon
Saari Jo Baatein Dil Kehta Hai
Lehar Sapno Ki Kaise Ginnu
Dariya Behta Hi Rehta Hai

She just blushed and tried to look away from while he sarcastically continued "tum na bohat chaalaak ho Ishita...kuch mehnat kiye bina hi mujhe tumpe fidha hone par majhboor kar dehthi ho...Jhansi ki rani bannke mujhse ladthi rahi... aur harr baar main haar jaatha hoom..."

He added after a small pause, "But today I want to win over you..."

Saying that he tried to embrace her while she slipped away from him shyly and sprinted two steps away from him but he was quicker and grabbed her saree pallu, stopping her from moving forward.

If she moved away, her saree would tear and start peeling off her. So she just stood in her tracks with one of her hands on her shoulder where the pallu was pinned to her blouse.

He grinned and stood up "aur bhaago na? I like this game"

She turned sideways and looked at him. He stood there with a naughty glint. He didn't walk to her but just continued to tug at the pallu and she automatically came closer to him.

Chahoon Bhi Toh Main Kaise Kahoon
Saari Jo Baatein Dil Kehta Hai
Lehar Sapno Ki Kaise Ginnu
Dariya Behta Hi Rehta Hai
Keh Rahi Hai Kya Yeh Suno, Meri Khamoshiyan
Raat Se Hai Lambhi Kahin, Dil Ki Yeh Dastaan
Kaise Kahoon
Chahoon Bhi Toh Main Kaise Kahoon
Saari Jo Baatein Dil Kehta Hai
Lehar Sapno Ki Kaise Ginnu
Dariya Behta Hi Rehta Hai
Keh Rahi Hai Kya Yeh Suno, Meri Khamoshiyan
Raat Se Hai Lambhi Kahin, Dil Ki Yeh Dastaan
Kaise Kahoon (Kaise Kahoon)

He slid his hands around her waist and pulled her closer, her back facing him. He inhaled in her jasmine fragrance to get drowned in that, pushing her hair to a side, he placed a line of kisses on her bare skin making her go weak on her knees. As his lips went back to his favorite place, her ear lobes and her nape of the neck, she was almost in a dizzy state.

He slowly sensed it and twirled her around making her crash into him for support. His hands now drew a line on the sides of her body till it reached her waist. He slid his fingers, playing a little on the exposed area making her shiver yet again.

He smiled seeing her response to his touches "tumhe darr lag raha hai, huh??"

Ishita managed to whisper back "thoda darr toh hai...As you know it's the first time that I..."

She didn't need to complete the sentence as he already knew that she was experiencing such intimacy for the first time. She was going to share herself for the first time which made him treat her all the more delicately. He couldn't go rough on her. When his hands loosened the grip, she added assuming that he was stopping himself, "don't stop Raman...I want this!"

Raman grinned and replied "darro matth...tumhe kuch bhi problem ho ya aage nahi badhna ho toh bathaa dena...I will control myself and stop then and there...ok?"

His honest words were like a soothing breeze to her. She reiterated to herself the fact that her respect and love for him was limitless and none of that was baseless. He deserved all of it. His comforting, understanding, caring words was all that was required for her to take the first step closer to him. Her hands encircled his neck pulling him even closer making his lips touch her forehead. She voiced slowly,"humein iss relationship mein aage hi badhna hai Raman...I don't want to step back ever now!"

They stood like that for a moment cherishing those words and lovely moments.

He smiled at her and kissed her eye lids while she stretched up and kissed his cheeks passionately cupping his face within her palms. Taking the hint, he touched her lips with his and then deepened it instantly as he felt that she was ready to respond to him.

Both the previous kisses were magical for them but this was even more special and magical as she initiated and triggered the passion which he poured into her. He slowly parted from her and loosened her long hair a bit, trying to remove the jasmine strands and clips which pinned it up. Throwing them all away to the side table, he spoke up "that will relieve you"

She nodded with a smile while he glided his hand down to her wrist, slowly removing the bangles off her. He pointed at her earrings,"isse tum nikhaal dho...main karunga toh...I may hurt you..."

She smiled and smiled as slowly took them out. He lost his patience at her slow pace though and pulled her necklace out from her neck but making sure she isn't hurt.

But when he tried to remove her wedding chain, she refused to part with it, "nahi...I cant take it off...let it be there"

Raman smiled and enquired "sentiments, huh?"

Ishita pointed to it, "It's the symbol of our relationship Raman...yeh aapne bhagwaan ke saamne mere galey mein pehenaaya tha...ab main isse kabhi nahi uthaarungi...Not till my death Raman!

Raman shuts her mouth angrily, "No...dont you dare say that Ishita..."

Then suddenly controlling himself, he added, "chalo chodo...iss waqt aise baaton ka nahi hai...[touches her thaali and says] isse yahi rehne dehthe hai, ok?..."[with a naughty grin and wink, he voiced] ..ab aage badein??

Ishita instantly smiles still blushing...and nods "hmmm."

Tumse Mujhe Yeh Kehna Tha Woh Keh Raha Tha Humdum
Ho Saamne Toh Kya Kahoon, Kya Kehna Tha Humdum
Kaise Yeh, Jazbaat Hain
Iss Dil Mein Toh, Din Raat Hain
Honthon Pe Kyun Aane Se Yeh Sharmaate Hain
Aankhon Mein Kyun Yeh Har Gadi Aa Jaate Hain
Chahoon Bhi Toh Main Kaise Kahoon
Saari Jo Baatein Dil Kehta Hai
Lehar Sapno Ki Kaise Ginnu
Dariya Behta Hi Rehta Hai

He didn't delay even a second. His hands went to her saree pallu, taking the pin off, he slowly pulled the saree out, his other hand slipped to her waist, tugging the pleats there.

She hugged herself embarrassed as her saree fell down on the floor. She turned side ways and managed to speak up "Switch off the lights Raman"

Raman chuckled and then replied to tease her"lights on rehne dho Ishita..."

Ishita shook her head in disagreement but he laughed and turned her around. She managed to say, "haan haan and you get enough fodder for mocking me about me being fat at all angles"

He couldn't control the laugh at that, "tum woh sab itna seriously lethi ho, huh?"

She replied forgetting her state, "aur kya? jabse aapne mujhe moti kaha hai, main toh teek se khaana bhi nahi khaati...aur roz exercise karthi hoom"

He looked at her enquiringly, "exercise? Kab kahaan?"

She couldn't control her own smile thinking about her exercise routines in the bath room. That's why she used to take so much time to bath and get dressed. From her smile he understood that and teased her, "bathroom mein?? Aur koyi jagah nahi mili, huh?"

"Aapke saamne toh bilkul nahi kar sakthi thi na? her reply made him laugh but also wanted to hug her harder and she had no clue as to what she did to him by her innocent talks and smiles. How would he explain to her how much her feminine curves entices him? Well perhaps she would know it after tonight.

Taking her hands off her, he hugged her sensing her uneasiness, "iss raat yeh sharmaana bhool jaao...Waise bhi, mujhse itna sharmaavogi toh kaise chalega?? Become my jhansi ki rani!"

He knew he had to stress his wishes a bit and push her to agree to it and he also knew that she wouldn't be bold enough to accept or initiate all of this anytime soon. So he gathered her into his arms and made her lay back on the bed. He switched on the tiny night lamp and switched off the table lamp to ease her off the embarrassing feeling. It wasn't easy for her and he understood that well.

Seeing him unbuttoning his shirt, she shyly looked away...sliding beside her, he pulled up the duvet covering them both...

Turning her to face him, "Open your eyes...I want you to see and feel me Ishita...I want you to know how much you affect me and how much I desire you"

She opened her eyes after a long moment of hesitation as he took her hands to touch his bare shoulders. His hands were moving around her as well pulling her closer if it was even possible. He kissed her to bring back the passionate romantic mood yet again.

He hugged her and slowly rolled over holding her tightly and he was on top of her making sure that his weight doesn't hurt her much.

She had rested all her insecurities and the fact that they married just for Ruhi on a side. On the other side was Raman, her husband who loved her more than anything else in the world. And she loved him with same intensity too. He deserved every happiness and pleasure. She too deserved him as her husband in every complete sense. It was his right to claim her and it was her duty to give him all what he desires. Nothing in the world should matter now nor should it stand as a hindrance to it.

Without a second thought, Ishita hugged him and kissed his ears gently which relieved him and assured that she was indeed responding to him willingly.

He kissed her forehead, slowly trailing a line of kisses along her face. Pecking lightly on her quivering lips, he went deeper down. His lips slid down her body trying to explore all of her.

Each of his intimate kiss made her tremble and clutch the sheets as it was a yet to be explored part of her. The feeling of touching her for the first time was making him ecstatic as well.

As he slid up to her face, he held her hand once and huskily voiced, "You are beautiful Ishu and I want you" making her blush one last time for the night.

He could feel her shyness and shivering lessen with each of his loving caress and passionate kiss. Now that she was doing so much for him, he too decided to give in to her wish. He stretched forward and switched off the night light too, making the entire room dark but he could see her, her eyes looked back at him as if thanking him for that.

The dark night was lit up by their ignited passion. As they blended with each other uniting in the most perfect way, her eyes flooded with unshed tears. He kissed her eye lids shut forcing the tears to drain away. As he kissed every tear of her away, he promised to himself that he would never ever give her tears or sorrow. He would keep her happy always.

She managed to whisper into his ears "I love you Raman"

She couldn't thank him enough in any other way to have made her see this day. From a loveless marriage, they had managed to travel this far that now it was just love or rather beyond just love.

He captured her lips caressing them gently as to ease away the pain of the bites he gave her and replied back

"I love you too Ishita!"


Hum Kyun Kahe, Joban Kahe, Ik Baat Hai Jaana
Dhadkan Kahe, Dhadkan Sune, Woh Raat Hai Jaana
Dil Bole Bin Hai Bolta
Sab Raaz Hai Yeh Kholta
Jab Khwab Hai, Jazbaat Hai, Ehsaas Hai
Toh Kehna Kya, Toh Sunn Na Kya, Awaaz Hai
Chahoon Bhi Toh Main Kaise Kahoon
Saari Jo Baatein Dil Kehta Hai
Lehar Sapno Ki Kaise Ginnu
Dariya Behta Hi Rehta Hai
Keh Rahi Hai Kya Yeh Suno, Meri Khamoshiyan
Raat Se Hai Lambhi Kahin, Dil Ki Yeh Dastaan
Kaise Kahoon

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Edited by vidya.anand - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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net so slow...so no big emotions..:(

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She took his hands closer to herself "mujhe apna banaa lijiye Raman...make me your wife in all meanings...I want to be yours...just yours...I don't want to remain as just Ruhi's mother but...jo bhi dhooriyaan humaare beech hai unn sab ko aaj mitaa dijiye...I want to cherish this night forever Raman..."

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margayi mein..margayi☺️ ☺️

ishu too be so bold..n so straight forward...keepin her JKR...

this was so romantic...and intense passionate...

this is my fav ss of ur ...

esply the way u bought the tamil wedding atmosphere...

i will miss tis ss a lot...

hope to get ...more ss...like this tamil-punjabi..delhi mix...

the best ss of IshRa...


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Edited by Nichuss - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
vidyaaa...aaah it ws so so romantic n hot..i loved loved loved this SS of urs...for me this is YOUR BEST ISHRA STORY......loved evry update of this..!! thnx for this wonderful endin to this wonderful ss..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg vidya...u r just awesome buddy..hats off
Sooo beautifully written
Loved it
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Only one word Vidya... PERFECT :)
Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
So beautifully written... so much romance n hotness...very much like it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome. Speechless. Loved it. Next part pls? or finished?

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