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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus
Hey Lucky! Nice OS. I like Bala and Raman's bonding on the show and it was great to read it here. Also, everything else. Like Romi and Mihir's futile attempts to tease their brother, Raman wanting to spend time in Ishita's company. Even Rajeev Tandon. 😃

Hey Sneha

Thanks for the comments. People seem to like Bala a lot 😊 he is the best sounding board one could ask for 😊

I wanted to show a setting with all the guys together, trying to talk about the women in their lives.😊 I am glad you liked it

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever
Intresting OS Laxmi Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more on Ishra & pm Me!

Thanks 😊 and will do

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: soapliker
wow. loved it. Cannot wait to hear Ishu's side of the story

Thank you 😊

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bscorp13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Lovely OS Lucky!

Again - spot on with RKBs inner turmoil👏.

Loved the Bala - Raman bond in your scene, plausible too - after that scene yesterday.

But like Ishita, Bala too comes across as way too mature at times - almost a senior figure (he and Raman must be the same age I guess😊), but the actor is doing a fab job👏.

I would love to see the inverse happening too - Bala confiding in Raman about his insecurities and worries (He doesn't seem to have anyone he can do that with - he tries to put up a brave front everywhere - both with Vandu and Ishita). Also another interesting bond would be Vandu - Raman ; It could develop into something as beautiful as the Ishita - Bala bond😃.

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FieryLioness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

superb Lucky... my GOD yaar how u manage to write thoughts of Ishita and Raman so well... every time i read ur OS, m like this is the best but no u come up wid even superb master piece and i left like aww... this is the best...

very very beautifully written ...loved it...

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serendipity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

sorry sorry sorry, laakhon sorry 😛

its ben crazy at my end, hun, i shall read and edit as soon as i get time! 😳

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Prianka S.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

The last line said by Raman just made this OS beautiful! Aaaw..loved Raman here. You know where there are scenes where ppl make confessions wjen they are drunk..well in this case its not the case. He was conscious the WHOLE time! Aww..keep up the good work! 👏

Sapphire aka Priya

Edited by Sapphire - 11 years ago

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny
*Reserved* 😳
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Hey Lucky! 😊
Sorry for editing this so late.

Firstly, WOW!!! That was another amazing piece by you! I always adore the way you write such complexities as simple as possible; I mean both Ishita and Raman's inner turmoil. You bring forth such feelings that may have been evoked, in their characters, to brink and it makes the reader feel connected on a personal level.

Secondly, I have noticed that you love the Raman-Bala equation! You always try to bring them closer and have Bala play cupid, but in most cases, he is becoming Raman's friend. Yes, Mihir is his friend, but Mihir looks up to him as an older brother and a mentor. Therefore, Bala would be the perfect person to tell Raman the bitter truth, if he needs to hear it.

Thirdly, I can't thank you enough for showing this side of Bala. He is a good, responsible man on all counts, and thus, it was natural for the guys to think of him as a somewhat reserved and somber person. But family life honestly changes a person and who knows if the poor guy ever gets the chance to go out with friends and be himself, so I'm glad you're including him in this crazy bunch! 👏

Finally, Ishita. My God! She is the best wife! 😆 I loved the way she said he doesn't need permission. Aww! For a moment, I thought Mihika was going to suggest that she'd accompany Mihir to the rendezvous!

All in all, fabulous, as always! 👏

Added: OH! Thank you so much for the PM! 😊

Thank you for the detailed comments 😊

I do love the Raman-Bala bond, like you said, because I see Bala as an equal to Raman (Mihir and Romi are kids). and Bala is the calm to Raman's restlessness.

And yes, I had to make Bala a bit wild too... so what if It was in the past! gives a different aspect to his personality.

Ishita is indeed the best wife 😊

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: PagliLadki
Loved it

Thanks Yashasvi 😊

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Lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: FieryLioness
superb Lucky... my GOD yaar how u manage to write thoughts of Ishita and Raman so well... every time i read ur OS, m like this is the best but no u come up wid even superb master piece and i left like aww... this is the best...
very very beautifully written ...loved it...

Aww Meet... I miss the days we used to spam people's posts, usually Isha's! 😭 we dont get to talk at all...

thanks for the comments hun😊. I felt a bit better after writing this one. I was struggling for inspiration for a few days

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