Aga Bai-OS Mature- Part 3 on page 17

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@sai14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: serendipity.
brb :D
YOOO! 😃

Okay i know youre super mad, dont say those words out loud, alright!? 😛
HAH, I LOVE YOU! 😛

Okay, so OMG, i had to read this again, so i could comment so i did this mistake last night. HAYEEE Thanks to this Aga Bai, meri neend urr gayii! 😛 ☺️ 😆

This was so so beautiful and sensuous! ☺️
HAYEEE! MUJHE AISE TOUCHY TOUCHY Mr & Mrs Bhalla chahiye!!!
I absolutely LOVEEED this Ishita! ☺️ Haye, somewhere down the line... humain bhi aise IshRa milenge na!? 😛 Nahi? acha 🤔 ofcourse, Sanskaari STAR PLUS! -_- 😵 and apparently CHILDREN also watch YHM 🤣 according to Divz' latest interview! :P

Okay, so initially, at the start of the OS, how Ishita is admiring and fantasizing about her husband who's in OMG HES IN CARGO PANTS ☺️ 😛 yes, i can SO IMAGINE YOUR STATE, DEAR ISHITA! lol
it was super sensuous yaar! :) and then HAYEEE THE KITCHEN ROMANCEEE MY FAVVV! ❤️ Promise id do ANYTHING to see aisa proper Kitchen Romance between IshRa ❤️

and then as their rendezvous started... OFCOURSE it had to be interrepted... Ruhi Ke Liye... would these beautiful Bhallas ever get proper time alone, alag from that madhouse?! :P 🤣 haha, but then, part two mein ☺️ HAYE too cute, i LOVEEDDD how Ishu tried seducing him and then later he had no choice but to give in... it was just AAH TOO HOT! ❤️ <3

please write more hotness, k? 😛

Yes, now i will edit the other one! 😳

Reeno, you FINALLY replied.. I knew you could do it baby 🤗

they come at 11:00.. they can do lot more and kids should not be staying up at 11..if parents let their kids stay up until 11 it's the risk they are taking 🤣

I WANT a kitchen romance scene. after all this migraine inducing track we deserve a kitchen scene and we deserve to see RKB in cargo pants. keh diya bas keh diya 😛

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serendipity.

@serendipity.

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

mere andar k armaan jagarahi hai Sai baar baar! 😳

pehle FB pe him doing something to her back... and now again, this kitchen romance which TRUST ME IS SO SO SO SEXY, OKAY!? 😳 ❤️

☺️

HAYE. 😔

DONT do this to us! Iss track ne toh literally Dimaag ka Dahi kardiya hai! 🤣 my brain has stopped functioning regarding this track atleast 🤣

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sai

@sai14

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: serendipity.
mere andar k armaan jagarahi hai Sai baar baar! 😳
pehle FB pe him doing something to her back... and now again, this kitchen romance which TRUST ME IS SO SO SO SEXY, OKAY!? 😳 ❤️
☺️
HAYE. 😔

DONT do this to us! Iss track ne toh literally Dimaag ka Dahi kardiya hai! 🤣 my brain has stopped functioning regarding this track atleast 🤣

🤣 back romance and kitchen romance...

OMG same here, my feelings are numb regarding this track and it is giving me a migraine. so much majboori on us thanks to RKB's majboori 😛

i just hope that back romance and kitchen romance and now strip romance will be in the show pretty soon 😳

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Isma

@Isma_A

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

Res. This one I will definitely edit today. 😈 😆 😛

Edited:

I am hereee, and that, too, on the same day! You can't be more impressed than I am with myself right now. 😆😛

Loved this update, Sai!!! What I've noticed and love about your writing is that your mature pieces are not only sensual, but also very romantic, which is a such a nice combination for this reader. I love how you had them lead-up to the strip-tease, with a romantic date where we also got to see jealous Raman. 😃 This is a really difficult genre to write, and I think it's easy to get carried away and produce something hollow that can even come off as vulgar. However, by you mixing and combining the elements of romance and sexy, you avoid that trap and instead produce something very mature in terms of writing, and of course, content. 😉

Keep writing, Sai! This is great! 😊

Edited by Isma_A - 11 years ago