OS Tagathon #7 rasam ki kasam

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohk so I have been tagged in this Tagathon

So here it goes

Lets hope you like it


Well ppl I know all have written already so no idea who to tag

So all of you can decide to tag here and put it here
Edited by --mancityfan-- - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Raman sees Ruhi mihika mihir and shravan angry and looking at him with deadly expressions

If looks could kill

He would have been melted and settled into dust on ground

He is scared and goes and hides behind ishita

He tells ishita "chalo yahan se main tumhe India gate gumata hu "

Ishita is amused and understands and says "Raman kumar bhalla dar Gaya mujhe yakeen nahi Hota "

Raman asks "main aur dar Gaya Kya bakwas kar rahi ho "

Ishita says "aur nahi to Kya "

Ishita says "mujhe samaj nahi aata Kya tum jo fauj tumhe apne karam ke falo ki saza dene as rahi hai isliye tum yahan se bhagne ki firaq main ho "

Raman says Aisa kuch nahi

Ishita says "toh unke paas jao aur apni Galti Mano "

Raman nods and before he can do anything

The fauj comes and launches an attack on him

Mihir says "Bhai mujhe yakeen nahi Hota aapne mere purse se bina bataye mere ticket nikali "

Mihir says "bas aap mujhe bata dete main khushi khushi apni ticket kurban kar deta "

Then mihika comes in

Mihika says "Kya jiju aapne Hamara Sara plan chopat kar diya "

Mihika says "ek to aapne aise hi mihir ko doordarshan channel bana diya hai jispar ek hi program chalta hai kaamdarshan "

Mihika says "aur Aaj jab isne kuch Naya program lagane ki koshish ki aapne signal kharab kar diya aur yeh to acha hai he movie ki ticket thi aur train ki nahi warna hum to jail jate "

Ruhi then says "papa chori karna buri baat hoti hai na "

Ishita is looking at all this and smiling at her Ravan condition

Raman by now was in tight condition

Ishita is about to say something

When Raman starts

Raman says "Kya yaar mihir tumhe Lagta hai main chori kar sakta hoon "

Raman says "yeh jo bhi hua tumhari bhabhi ki wajah se "

Ishita is shocked

But Raman continues

Raman says "isko film dekhni thi aur film ki sari ticket houseful thi "

Raman says "tab Maine isko bataya ki mihir ja raha hai to main usehi puch leta hoon "

Raman says "phir tumhari bhabhi ko Kya suji toh isne mujhe bataya ki bina bataye le lo to aur dekhne main maza aayega "

Raman says "Maine bahut mana kiya par isne kaha ki Maine ticket nahi li to mujhe Harroz rasam khilayegi "

Raman says "mihika tum to apni behan ko jaanti ho aise utpatang idea use hi aate hai aur tumhe Lagta hai main film bhi dekhta hoon "

Mihika says " very bad akka aapne jiju se Aisa karaya "

Ishita with angry expression tells mihika " sorry chal tum sab ko meri taraf se film aur dinner "

Ishita says " aur mihir koi kaam na bahana nahi chalega kyunki Raman ne pehli hi mujhe bataya kal ki Saari meeting woh handle karenge"

Mihir says " thank you Bhabhi "

Ruhi says "to papa nahi aayengec hamare saath "

Ishita says "papa ko picture pasand nahi aur waise bhi unke paas time nahi toh unhe kaam Karne dete hai aur hum enjoy karte hain "

Now everyone goes

Raman is shocked

And then ishita with intense look keeps coming close to him

Ishita comes very close to him and cusps her hand on his cheeks and is coming close to him

Raman is nervous and asks "tum yaha sab ke samne Kya kar rahi ho "

Ishita pays no heed and comes close to him and

Then says "rasam ki kasam agar tumhe roz rasam nahi khilaya na to mera naam ishita bhalla nahi "

And goes smiling from there

Raman is perplexed
Edited by --mancityfan-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Me too Res Leo :)


Leo, I am 🤣


Kaam darshan... 😆 and the last line BY God!!!🤣

Too good man... albeit a little short... you should write more... see who said you cant write rom-com... chalo, once your demented mohabbatein ends, please write some more like this...

Nicely done Leo. really 👏
Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Still lot of excellent writers left, Leo - Deepika, omshreejanu, Tehsina, Vidya.anand, Modernfamily...so on...take your pick! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mihir ka naya naam...kaamdarshan...🤣 mujhe bahut pasand aaya...

n best part ishi ka promise abt rasam...bechara RK...ab toh har roz...medical se packet mangana hoga...n now ishu will enjoy her sleep in bed...poora bed uska hoga...kyunki...raman toh rasam ke baad...bathroom mein hi sone vala hain...loading and then unloading...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raatri

mihir ka naya naam...kaamdarshan...🤣mujhe bahut pasand aaya...

n best part ishi ka promise abt rasam...bechara RK...ab toh har roz...medical se packet mangana hoga...n now ishu will enjoy her sleep in bed...poora bed uska hoga...kyunki...raman toh rasam ke baad...bathroom mein hi sone vala hain...loading and then unloading...😆

awesome comment loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOL it was funny Leo! Donon chor hai!
Really liked the dialogues! Ek dum show type! 😊

Ok who did you tag?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Indian_Isha

LOL it was funny Leo! Donon chor hai!

Really liked the dialogues! Ek dum show type! 😊

Ok who did you tag?

thanks I will tag someone and pm

Maybe meet fierylioness
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Then says "rasam ki kasam agar tumhe roz rasam nahi khilaya na to mera naam ishita bhalla nahi "

And goes smiling from there

Raman is perplexed
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MI itni fast...not bad...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOL I was literally laughing at raman condition but how can raman bhalla back out so easily n his reply was bang on but again he forgot his jkr to be nehle pe dehla.I loved mihika's dailogue 1st time this much.'ek to aapne aise hi mihir ko doordarshan channel bana diya hai jispar ek hi program chalta hai kaamdarshan ". 😉

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