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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Beautiful OS !! I loved how nothing mattered after a point but being with the other. Being apart made them realise that they need one another no matter what and any fight compared to that is trivial.

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

hi dear

this was absolutely amazing and soo beautifully written⭐️👏

loved it😃

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Wow this is awesome and so beautiful.

Plz write more

Love the one shot 👏

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Vishwa

@-Inferno-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

SSSOOO CUTE!

I love love love the OS. I felt that the style of writing was very unique and enticing. Love the way you expressed the characters' emotions and progressed the plot.

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli
omggg this ws so so beautiful...!! could really feel the turmoil of emotions ishu went thru rite frm beginnin till end n ending ws the best one...!!

do write more dear on IshRa

Quite frankly this is one of the so very less a story where when I re-read for editing, instead of passing a critical eye over the grammar, I paused to reflect over her feelings.

I plan to write a lot more on this couple too

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: crystalmoon
It was amazing, loved your writing
write some more 😊

Thank you, will surely do

Originally posted by: lourel24
loved it

Thank you!

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Wow this is awesome and so beautiful.
Plz write more
Love the one shot 👏

Thank you, I look forward to be more active in this forum too

Originally posted by: Rozy77
hi dear
this was absolutely amazing and soo beautifully written⭐️👏
loved it😃

Thank you, glad you liked it

Originally posted by: ishra-rocks
beautiful!!!!!!!

Thank you

Originally posted by: Arooj.M
This is so good! That song at the end fit perfectly! You're a really good writer!

That song had been the stimulus of this story in a way. Isn't the song amazing?😃

Originally posted by: aashiqua
I sm unable to express ma feelings..ma heart feel warm...good job

Touched. Honoured. Thank you

Originally posted by: Neha07
Beautiful👏.I had tears of sorrow first and then of joy by the time I read the end.

No more words could made my day as much as yours did. Thank you!

Originally posted by: nauka87
OMG one of the best stories i ever read
this is just too good to be described in words
its was just awesome, each emotion and action
described so beautifully.
I m speechless.
loved the concept and ur writing

Thanks a lot. That's overwhelming to listen that. 🤗

Really glad that you enjoyed the story and liked it. Really, really glad

Originally posted by: zoya789
Amazing OS

Thank you!

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

wow - that was so beautiful; all their passion; insecurities so aptly defined in your writing!

-Sona

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pomegranate

@pomegranate

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

this story was so beautiful and poignant, I'm at a loss of words right now. you are an exceptionally talented writer and I hope that you write more stories for raman and ishita. well done.