ISHRA OS: Hoth Rasiley...! PART 2 - PG 11! :)

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drooler

@drooler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

super super super awesome update

loved it

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sai

@sai14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Isha Isha Isha 🤗 I LOVE this one. You took a simple thing as a love bite and made it into such a romantic naughty story..Love it

Raman is such a buddhu when he is in love 😆 The easiest explanation would have been Ruhi ne kick maara and he could have said that to Ruhi too and all done but damn all those lies he had to create to make up for his buddhuness 😆😆

and the way he gave her a love bite back 😳 i know this is not gonna happen soon but one day when they are in love i want them to to read this script and put it on the show word by word.

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yhmfever

@yhmfever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Oh god that was so funny
Raman bechara
Hahah the end wild raman
Loved it will u continue it ? Cuz i loved it

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Nikita99

@Nikita99

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

That was such roller coaster. Love Raman's fierce response 😃

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afsanaanjum

@afsanaanjum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Hey there Isha!
Pardon me for being late. Read both the parts at one go!

Now coming back to your story. Dude! What a thought to portray the domineering self in both the characters (-I mean jokes apart!😆-).👏 You deserve an applaud for that!

And yes, my my, I did know it for a fact tha this Jhansi Ki Rani can be no less when it comes to such-utterly-private-yet-alluring-and-tantalizing-matters.😉 (-do pardon me for the lack of adjectives! At 1am in the night can't think after reading such stuff you see!😃).

Starting from the name of the topic, i knew it that I'm in for something coquettish and enticing!😆

What a thought i swear. This is actually were the chemistry lies in this non-quintessential jodi. Their fights beneath their love, passion, friendship and care.😳 I sincerely thank you for creating such an amazing thought. Though regretting the fact that it ended so soon. Yet, I believe that somethings should be left they way they are so that the imagination can succeed. (If you know what i mean!😉)

P.S : Thanks a ton for the PMs! I did see your msgs but left to peruse on the weekends. So do pardon me buddy.

P.P.S : Do keep these short, quirky and adorable stuff coming in quick intervals. A pleasure to read them my friend.😊

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divya17.8

@divya17.8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

mihir and pathak doing jasoosi...🤣🤣

Poor Raman...😆😆

Super hilarious and romantic part...

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shaayne

@shaayne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

This is amazing!!! Omg I loved how Raman got caught up in his lies. He's always so suave on the show, its good to see him fumble.. Would love to read more :)

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

hey isha...

God.. you are damn funny!!!

haha... neal and mihir spying on raman... and the case of bruise on lips...

🤣... i was like this through the entire os...

not even one moment i didn't find it funny...

for sure.. mihir and neal has no other work than spying on raman...

and their curosity got too much that they even called ishita to confirm!!!

haha... and seriously mujhe bataao... how raman got the best ceo award... office mei bechaara koi aur kaam to karta nahi hai other than evesdropping mihir and neal...

lol... poor raman... faking anger... only to provoke ishita..

he surely took the revenge n ishita... and with a greater degree...

now next morning when tishiji would ask ishita.. .she say raman kicked her... and then she'll say... " tum dono ko aur koi kaam nai hai kya.. ki raat mei kick kick khelte rhete ho!!!!

haha... i loved your os...

seriously some very hilarious stuff... you should write more of comedy!!!!

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

I wanted to say so many things..about the one liners,hilarious punchlines,dreamy ending...but then I prefer not to say anything.
I am overwhelmed..you were as per my expectation!👍🏼
Love you sweets 🤗🤗

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#110

can you plz tell me how to upload URL if I want to post a pic??
I was trying to post a pic for long time...but its not taking the link that m posting😭

Edited by debomaaneet - 11 years ago