New IshRa OS: Tit for Tat!

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Sabina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

A prfect YHM OS

and this just suits perfectly because I am sure they can't even romance peacefully with these two crazy family around😆

Awesome one !! Mood changing. .

Keep writing

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Indian_Isha
You kidding me Jaanu????

How could you stop there? I mean, how could you? Atrocity! Plain atrocity! 😡

When the emotions are at an all time high, you burst the bubble! Sigh! Hate you for that! 😡

You know what, this is one of the best pieces I have read in the recent times! So well written, I mean, SO WELL! 😃 👏

You know to pen the thoughts and the fear and the...nervousness to the dot! I LOVED THIS! 😳

I have read many kisses that took place between Raman and Ishita in the form of OSes in the forum, but this one is pinned as one of my fave kisses so far! This stuff is believable, they are so in their characters still and I would totally buy this! 👍🏼

Embarrassing position...ROFL! OK please please write a sequel and let Raman figure the way out somehow! 😉 You better write huh? Don't make me wait so long!

Thank u thank u thank u not for hating me but for loving my story.😆 I guess I am very sadistic n meany n a tease just like our Bhalla. But I am dil ke acche so I will defo give it a perfect closure perfectly😉😆

Take care n thanks again 🤗

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: PoohLover
It is awesooomeee...i looove it...oops oops i lo...incomplete reh gaya 😳
But but you wrote it soo beautfull..thank you soo much🤗

U are welcome pooh lover!! I am happy u loved it. It us always a pleasure to write on IshRa n much more exciting to read u guys' reactions n feedback.

🤗

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: vampire12345678
Superb
Just WOW
Please update a part 2
U r my favorite writer after lucky

Thank u dear. Ur comment means a lot. Yes I have read lucky's OS collection n they r simply lovely. I am fan too.

I'll defo try to complete what Raman started. 😳😉

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: happenstance
This is frickin awesome!! Some serious hotness😳 just what i love😆😆 when he had her pinned against the wall, I remembered a certain Mr Grey😳😆 please continue it asap😛

Thank u buddy.

We r same same when it comes to serious hotness 😳😆

On a serious note, I am humbled by u guys' appreciation and love. Keep reading. It means a lot. 😳

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: archanamanav
U r in recycling mode you say teacher?
I must say this is one hot recycled stuff!
Isn't this the one u wrote when saras wanted chilli in his eyes coz kummi's hair was kissing another guy's face??..
I love ur writing style and it is funny and romantic .. My fav writer u r!
Ravan kumar has different way of giving compliments and ishita sure knows it! Meany not meant comments! Eyes are MF ing! Sure she wasn't born yesterday not to know that!
I like when she thinks she is smart but he says she is dumb! Reminds me of my best friend!
I chuckled yesterday watching epi when she said ruhi was so smart.. Just like ishita her mom!..
So adorably cute!
Thanks madam! I like this teaching! Too good!

Hahaha!! Look who is here!! My favorite stalker!!

U n I share such a special bond. U r my fav reader student ji.

Oh ho! Who is this pompous n smart friend who thinks highly of herself while a meanie thinks she is dumb???😆

Welcome student. Happy u enjoy my class. 😃

P.s: no this is not the mirchi waala story. It is the dangerous game played by K to S😛

Edited by omshreejaanu - 11 years ago

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20
hey
i am reading your work for the first time
it was wow...
i loved it..
passion... intensity... jealousy... with a hint of humour...
loved it to the core...
do write more...
and also pm me

Hi aditi. It is always a pleasure to get new readers n their reviews. I am happy u enjoyed this piece of writing. Do keep reading.

Thanks for ur time.

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Superb OS!! Ishita making Raman jealous and the way Raman reacted was perfect!! The kiss was amazing and hot. I wish you would continue the OS a little more so that we could have gotten Raman confessing his feelings to Ishita.

I guess I purposely stopped the story at the confession😆 I am now very keen to write this story's sequel. Hope to see u catching up with it.

Thanks for reading.😃