New IshRa OS: Tit for Tat!

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Superb OS!! Ishita making Raman jealous and the way Raman reacted was perfect!! The kiss was amazing and hot. I wish you would continue the OS a little more so that we could have gotten Raman confessing his feelings to Ishita.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: aphrodite143
OH MY...!!!!
you are as good as E.L James...& let me tell you i'm a great fan of her's...& from now on yours too!!

Awww I am truly honored. Thank u very much. Please keep on reading my work n give me ur feedback. 😳

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA
Fabulous os...
Such a hot and passionate one...
Beautifully wriiten

Thank u dear for ur time. I guess u r also one of me regular readers n a big encouragement indeed.😃

See u soon.

Take care

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Lovely OS Hema I hope you continue with the story and sort out Raman' embarrassing situation 😉😆

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amrithas

@amrithas

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

LOved it! Made me swoon!

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KurbaanHua

@KurbaanHua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

uff that intensity, passion😉...loved it. ❤️

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Absolutely loved it ⭐️. And so aptly named too ... it sure was Tit for Tat in more than one way for both Ishita and Raman.

And the ending was really cute. The great RKB worried about been seen by Mihir and Mihika (I do believe Raman is a bit apprehensive about Mihika's reactions in the show too ... yeh wali madrasan thodi dangerous lagti hai ussay 😆)

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Awesome OS! But I wish the confession had completed!

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cool_arpana

@cool_arpana

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Hey it was awesome, intense and I got totally into it ...tht shows u write very well...👏

It blended with IshRa so well...can't believe it was frm some prev work of urs..

Plss PM me if u do 4 others ...when u write for IshRa ...

And u must continue this !!!