My dream track (26/35 part added)(ff - Page 21

Frankly saying it was tooo too awsome.. juz mindblowng..

frm d pranks(pland by mihir-mihika) to d confession of Ishra.. nd subbu nature.. woww hw u easily converted him frm mumma's boy 2 self depend subbu.. (it was 2 gud..) nd how raman manages to buy farmhouse nd indirectly hlpng the old couple.. (hatss off)..

waintg 4 nxt part plz update it soon..

this is my very first Ishra ff n I wrote and posted.

Thankyou for comment I hope you enjoy it.

Scene starts in hospital while Sonali was waiting outside the operation theatre and Dhruv along with her.

Doctor come outside and tells operation was over and they have to wait for 12 hours to know the result.

Then after 12 hours in farm house.

Raman was talking to doctor.

Raman "Thankyou sir aapney bahuth good news diyan hain.I will surely go through it.I know complications hain but atleast we got some hope from nowhere."

Raman then remembering about Gaurav.

Raman "Sir mujhey Gaurav naam kley patient key baarey mey jaanna hain.Usska operation huan thaa kyan huan."

Doctor "Sir humney tumour nikaaldiyan hain.But usskey jeeney key chances kamm hain hum ney jitna ho sakey khoshish kee but ."

Raman cuts the call he understood that it means Gaurav life span is reduced.It may be few months hardly.

Then Raman tells this to Ishita.Ishita gets sad listening this and she decide atleast to meet Sonali and comfort her.

IshRaRu go and meet Sonali.She was crying profously and she is sad.

Doctor was telling her "Maadm hum jaanthey hain kee betey khoney ka dard kaisey hotha hain.But aap jaanthey hain kee who marney waala hain.Atleat you can make his final days happy for him."

Doctor "Usskey saarey kwaishey poorey keejiyen .Usskey khushiyan unko deejiyen.Atleast let him die with smile in his face."

Ishraru heard this words.

Raman "Sonali I know I cant' help you but doctor ashen keh rahan hain you can make his final days memorable for him and for yourself."

Sonali was crying as she know the only sole wish of Gaurav is to meet his father.

Sonali leaves from there crying and Ishita goes from there to calm her down.

Ruhi and Dhruv were left alone.

Dhruv "Gaurav sirf papa sey milnaa chahtha hain .Usska ek hee wish hain papa key saath khelnaa.Lekin papa kabhee nahen aayega." He has tears in her eyes.

Gaurav's plight made Dhruv stubborn and hate his father.He too oves happy family and he was always envious about Ruhi.

Ruhi feels sad .

Ruhi "Tumhaara papa kabhee nahee aaya naa.Tum unhey dekha bhee nahen."

Dhruv "Han ."

Ruhi "Idea."

Dhruv was shocked over what it could be.

Ruhi "Main merey papa ko kehoongi kee who tumhaarey papa key tarah act karey kuch din.Gaurav bhee happy rahega ."

Ruhi tell this innocently she gets ready to share his father .But her wish is genuine she was not expecting some gifts or prizes for it.She too wants to keep Gaurav happy in his final days.Sh eheard doctor' words.

Dhruv "Tum tumhaarey papa ko kahogee."

Ruhi "Han Gaurav ney mujhey merey papa key saath nahen dekha naa.Tho theek ho jaayega.Mera papa bahuth achey hain.,Who world key best papa hain.Who jho boley who karega .Gaurav ko pamper karega gifts dega kisses dega.Mera pap best hain."

Ruhi with out waiting for an instant rushes to her father who just came meeting doctor and was trying to calm Sonali.

Ruhi "Papa aapney mujhye promise kiyya thaa na .Main jho kahoongi aap karengey."

Ramna "Ruhi abh nahen baath mey."

Ruhi "Nahen papa aaj hee main pooch rahen hun.Aapko karnaa hoga."

Ishita don't know about that promise and was wondering what she is going to ask.

Ruhi "Papa dhruv ney kahan kee gaurav ka final wish hain ussko usskey papa sey milnaa hain.But who kabhee nahen aayengey."

Sonali was shocked knowing Ruhi speaking about them.

Ruhi "Papa aap kyon nahen unkey papa banjaathey kuch dinoin key liyen."

All are shocked seeing Ruhi's wish.

Ruhi "Papa please aap karon naa.Gaurav ko unkey papa sey milna hai n unkey saath khelna hain.Who nahen aayengey aap tho world key best papa hon naa.Who aapkey saath khelega aur happy rahega."

Raman was caught off guard by Ruhu because of his promise and now Raman was thinking on what he has to do.If he acts as father for Gaurav it indirectly means Sonali as his wife.For Raman Ishita is only his wife and he will never ever give that place to other lady even in his dreams.

now wat will raman do..!! 😕

plz updt it fast..

Scene starts with Raman walking out angrily unable to answer his daughter.Dhruv and Ruhi are sad as they din't get the recquired answer.Ishita was puzzled at the situation before her .

She then takes Ruhi aside to speak to her.

Ishita "Ruhi tumney aisa kyon poocha tumhey aisaa nahen karnaa chahiyen thaa."

Ruhi "Ishima kyon nahe?I know papa sirf merey aur Adi bhayya key papa hain.Par Gaurav key liyen drama kar saktey hain naa."

Ishita "Tumhey yeh sabh kissney kahan beta.But papa ko kaisey lagega.Gandha lagega naa."

Ruhi "Ishima papa merey saath bhee nahen they naa jabh main chotte thee.Par who kabhe kabhee mujhey dekhney aathey they.Par Dhruv aur Gaurrav key papa kabhee nahen aaya."

Ishita then remembers Ruhi's chihood when both her parents were not there with her.Shagun left her for her comforts and Raman scared of getting hurt again started avoided her even though he loved her.Then everything solved after Ishita came Ruhi proved that she loves her father more than anyone.The Ishita realized that Ruhi is not asking that wish as child wish but a genuine wish .

Ishita "Main papa sey poochungi papa ko manaaney key koshish karoongi."

Dhruv and Sonali were shell shocked as those words came out of Ishita's mouth.

Ishita "Sonali Ruhi sahee keh rahen hain.Gaurav ko unkey papa sey milnaa hain.Main uss bachey key liyen itnaa tho kar sakthee hun .Tumhey bhee yeh drama karnaa padega atleast for Gaurav."

Ishita convinces Sonali for this drama.Sonali was shocked more because of Ishita who was ready to give in line her husband and the trust she had on her husband.

Ishita then goes outside where Raman was sitting on a bench alone and angry over himself.

Ishita comes and sits beside him and keeps her hand over his .

Raman "Kyon aaye hon yaha?"

Ishita "Raman Ruhi ka who wish koi bachpana naheen hain.Ussney sooch samjhkey poocha hain.Apnee yadon sey."

Raman has tears in his eyes.

Ishita "Raman aap yeh naatak kar saktey hain uss bachey key liyen"

Raman "Ishita main hee kyon kitney log hain iss duniyan mey main kyon karoo."

Ishita "Raman aapko patha hain Ruhi ney mujhsey kyaa kahan."

Raman looks at Ishita.

Ishita "Merey saath bhee papa nahen they naa jabh main chotee thee."

Raman's old memories erupts out listening this reminding of his one of the mistakes of his life.He neglected Ruhi who loved Raman most in the world.Ruhi always wanted Raman more than anyone in world she missed him all her child hood till Ishita came to their life.

Raman breaks down remembering his rude behaviour with Ruhi .Dhruv was watching them from distance.

Raman "Ishita I love Ruhi.Mainey kitnaa bada galthee kiyan thaa uss samay.Sabh kuch merey gussa key wajaha sey."

Ishita "Raman aap dukhee amth hoyiyen.I know aap Ruhi sey kitney pyaar karthey hain.Main jaanthe hun aap jee bhee Ruhi key liyen he rahen they.Raman aapney saarey galathiyan sahe kiyan hain.Ruhi abh kush hain."

Ishita "Ruhi aapko world key best papa maanthey hain.Issliyen ussney aapko hee kahan."

Raman looks at her.

Ishita "Raman aap khudh iss situation mey they.Aap jaanthey hain bachey ko kaisaa lagtha hain jab usska parent usskey saath nahen hotha."

Ishita "Raman you are the best person ever known to me.Aapko sabkaa feelings ka khyaal hain aap khud ko hurt karengey lekin doosro ko kuch nahen honey dengey."

Ishita "Raman sirf aap iss naatak ko anjaam dey saktey hain .Koi bhee admee key liyen yeh ek naatak hoga.But aapkey liyen ek bacchey ka khushi hain."

Ishita "Please merey aur Ruhi key liyen."

Raman "Tum kuch samjh kyon nahen rahen hon.Main usska baap ka naatak karoonga tho mujhey yeh kehnaa padega kee who mere biwi hain.How can I.Main kabhee yeh jagaha kissey ko nahen doonga.Yeh sirf tumhaara jagaha hain.Main swapney mey bhee kissey ka naam nahen aaney doonga."

Ishita "Raman yeh sirf naatak hain.Main jaanthey hun how much you love me.Raman aapko yaad hain hummarey shaadi sey pehley aapney apney clients key saamney mujhsey natak karwaaya thaa ke main aapkey biwi hun.Raman uss samay mainey aapkey madad kee uss samay main aapkey biwi nahen thee naa."

Raman "Lekin abh tum hon.Who jhoot abh sach hain Ishita."

Ishita "Main bhee merey jagaha kissey ko naehn doongi.Raman main hummesha aapkey saath rahoongi."

Ishita finally persues Raman to act as father for Dhruv and Gaurav.(Dhruv knew about it so for Gaurav)

Then on other side Dhruv who listened the conversation of Ishita and Raman.

Dhruv "Tumhaarey papa bhee nahen they tumhaarey saath ."

Ruhi "Nahen papa loves me.Main jabh bahuth chthe thee na jab papa mujhsey katti thaa.Mujhsey baath nahen kartey they.But fir mainey papa ko manaalee.Jab sey papa kabhee mujhey nahen chodtey.Who bahuth rothey hain who yaad karkey .Issliyen I love my papa.Ussko sab kuch pata hain main kyaa khthee hun kaisey .Kabh rothee hun kabh naatak."

Ruhi tells her stories of Raman and Ruhi.

Then Ishita and Raman meet Sonali and Dhruv and Ruhi were also there.

Ishita "Raman naatak karega."

Ruhi "Merey papa best hain papa gaurav ka achey taraha khyaal rakhengey .Aap royiyen math.Papa gaurav ko pamper karengey sab kuch karengey."

Ishita "Pehley humey kuch kahaani banana hoga.Jab ussye poocha tho itney saal kyon nahen aaye."

Ruhi "Ishima hum farmhouse jayengey.Wahan koi nahen hoga aur hum chupey chupey papa ka help bhee karengey."

Dhruv was looking at Raman who was standing silently.Dhruv was surprised to see a person and father like Raman from Ruhi's stories.He is wondering why god din't give him such a father.

While Ishita and Sonali were discussing plans.Raman sat on a bench there and Ruhi came and sat beside him and kissed him on cheek.

Ruhi "Papa thankyou.Aap best hon."

Raman "Sabsey best tho mera beti hain .Kitney chtee hain fir bhee sab kuch samajhthee hain." Kissing her .

Raman "I am luckiest father .Ruhi.Mujhey tum mile beti key roop mey."

Ruhi huhs her ather as Dhruv watches them and their father daughter bond.

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