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Posted: 11 years ago
its vry nyc part..
but smwhere i didnt feel gud ..
agar ye natak b sach hogya tau..?? (as u descrbd it)

Ishita "Raman yeh sirf naatak hain.Main jaanthey hun how much you love me.Raman aapko yaad hain hummarey shaadi sey pehley aapney apney clients key saamney mujhsey natak karwaaya thaa ke main aapkey biwi hun.Raman uss samay mainey aapkey madad kee uss samay main aapkey biwi nahen thee naa."

Raman "Lekin abh tum hon.Who jhoot abh sach hain Ishita."

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Posted: 11 years ago
hope all thng goes gud.. will wait 4 nxt updt..
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 26

Scene starts in Ruhi's farmhouse.Raman was acting as Dhruv and Gaurav's father before Gaurav and Ishita has managed o get a story to convince Gaurav that his father din't left them but was in deep trouble and could'nt come back as he was kidnapped.She got the story from pirate news.

Then Ruhi and Ishita were also in farmhouse in the name of their resort work.Sonali is trying to avoid awkwardness caused by Gaurav thinking they both are husband and wife.

For Ishita it is different story her treatment is started and she is responding well to it and she needed constant observation.

Scene starts with Gaurav playing with Raman near pool and Sonali and Ishita watching them from distance Ruhi is also with them while Dhruv is along with her brother.Dhruv is greatly affected by kindness of Raman for trying to keep his brother happy while his own father left them.

Gaurav "Dad aapko swimming kisney sikhaaya thaa?"

Raman "Merey papa ney aur kaun."

Gaurav "Hummara ghar kahan thaa?"

Rama n"Delhi mey hum abh wahan nahen jaa saktey naa."

Gaurav "Han aapko maarney key liyen koi dhoondhrahen hain.Mama ney kahan thaa bad people." Hugging Raman.

Raman was seeing Adi in Gaurav.Raman hugs him back.

Raman "Papa ko kuch nahen hoga.Uss samay cheating kiyen they naa who log abh papa ko pakad nahen paayengey."

Gaurav "Dhruv tum bhee aao naa." Gaurav brings him holding his hand.

Dhruv "Dad mujhey jaana hain.Mujhey assignment hain."

Gaurav "Han main tho school nahen jaatha hun par Dhruv ko school jaana padtha hain."

Gaurav "Dhruv dad tumhaara madad karengey." Looking at Raman.

Raman signs ok and they go inside to help Dhruv in his homework.

Sonali was touched by Raman .Raman was doing everything he can do to keep Gaurav happy and even Dhruv's opinion about fathers is changing because of Raman.

Sonali "Ruhi I don't know how to thank you.Tumney apney papa ko yeh karney key liyen kaha jho koi bache nahen karthey."

Ruhi "Koi baath nahen aunty.Papa tho promise sey bandhey they aur Ishima ney bhee merey support kiyaa."

Sonali "Promise?"

Ruhi "Mainey papa sey promise liya thaa who ek baar jho karengey jho main kahoongi.Mainey usska use kiyan."

SonalI "Tum ney who promise hummarey liyen istamaal kiya?"

Ruhi "Aaya bhee aapkey wajaha sey naa."

Sonal I"Main samjaa naheen"

Ruhi then tells "Mainey naa ek baar Ishima ko jhoot bola thaa kee Papa aapsey miley they raath ko.Ishima ko bahuth gussa aaya uar papa sey mainey sach bolney ley liyen deal kee.Buisness man kee beti hun naa."

Ishita smiles seeing this.

Sonali "Lekin tum meraa naam kyo use kiyan tum tho mujhye jaanthe nahen hon naa ?"

Ruhi "Ishima jaanthe hain.Mainey bahuth baar suna hain Ishima gussa sey aaokey naam lethee thee."

Sonali was shocked while Ishita was embraced trying to shut Ruhi.

Sonali "Kyaa huan thaa?"

Ishita "Thoda misunderstanding hain.I mean ek baar Raman ney mujhye kahaani bathaya thaa mujhey jalaaney key liye.Kee unka first crush kaa naam Sonali Kotnis hain.Thab tho who aapoko jaantha bhee nahen thaa.Accidentally Raman ney jho features boley they who aapsey exactly match karthey they.Jab mainey aapko dekha mujhye Raman par gussaa aaya kee who mujhsey jhoot boley kee jaisey ladkee nahenthee.But its purely coincidental."

Ishita "But how exactly little plump with broad and wide eyes and long hair.Raman ney jaisey bola thaa exactly aisey hee they aap."

Sonali laughs at this and Ishita embraced.

Ishita "Tum hass kyon rahen hon?I know I was jealous mera husband hain?"

Sonali "Main iussliyennahen hass rahen hun.Tumnye mujhey dekha kee who features mujhmey hain.Lekin Raman tho tumhey describe kar rahan thaa."

Ishita "Mujhey?" then looking in mirror.

Sonali and Ruhi are laughing.

Ishita "Main khud sey jal rahen thee.Ravan Kumar." Smiling.

Sonali has tears in her eyes.

Ishita notices that and realizes speaking about their moments might have hurt Sonali reminding of her life.

Ishita "I am sorry mera yeh intention anhen thaa."

Sonali "Ishita tumhaarey galathee nahen hain.Yeh tho khushi kee asson hain."

Sonali "I was cheated by a man.Sab log ladkee ka galathee dekhtey hain.Uss din sey merey liyen koi nahen thaa.Naa koi dosth an pariwar.Main apney bachon key liyen jee rahen thee.Aaj itnay salon baad tum log mujhye ek dosth key taraha treat kar rahen hon.I feel like you are my family"

Ishita understands condition of Sonali.

Ruhi "Aunty aap ro kyon rahen hon.Ishima sabkey madad karengey."

Sonali "Ishita I know merey pass kuch nahen hain.But I promise you that when you need help I will be there for you."

Then the scene shifts to Ramna and Dhruv .

Dhruv was doing mistakes in his assignment while Rmana correcting it and they are quarreling funnily.Gaurav is getting entertainment there.

Around afternoon Rmana makes Gaurav sleep in his room and comes out.

H edirectlu goes to other he want to see Ishita and Ruhi.

Ruhi rushes to him and gets into his arms while Ishita gives a smile.

Raman "Gaurav so gayan hain."

Sonali "Thaankyou sir."

Ramna "Koi baath nahen.Tumhey koi problem tho nahen Ishita sey."

Ishita nudges Raman with her elbow.

Raman "Kyaa ?Main bass ussey warn kar rahn hun tumhaarey pagal pan key sdaura sey."

Ishita "Main pagal hun?"

Raman "Poochrahen hon ya batharahen hon."

All laugh at this.

Ishita "Raman aapney khana khaaya ?"

Raman "TUm logon ney?"

Ishita "Theke hum sabh saath mey khaatey hain."

They leave for dinning hall and Raman was briefed about happening in resort.

Ishita notices some tears in Raman's eyes and realizes what could be reason.

Ishita "Raman Adi kee yaad aarahen hain." Soanli and Dhruv were clueless.

Raman "Tumhey kasiey patha?"

Ishita "Raman .I know you Raman ."

Sonali "Adi kaun hain."

Ruhi "Merey bhayya hain.Who Shagun mama key saath rehtaa hain.Papa sey katte hain."

Ishita then explains Sonali about Ashok and Shagun .But the name Ashok affected Sonali much.

Ishita notices this.

Sonali "Bachey sey door rehan bahuth hurt kartha hain."

Ishita notices Sonali change with the name Ashok.

After few minutes Rui starts her zidd telling she wants ice cream so Raman has to take her out and even Dhruv goes along with them.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ooo ashok so is he there father
Nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks vikas for the updates. As usual, the update is awesome. Please update next one asap.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Simmideepak

Ooo ashok so is he there father
Nice update

so you can know what it is in store now
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Posted: 11 years ago
ashok gaurav air dhurv ka dad hain ????
yar ye kya ye apshagun wapas aagyi to ishra ki life main??
nice update
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

ashok gaurav air dhurv ka dad hain ????
yar ye kya ye apshagun wapas aagyi to ishra ki life main??
nice update
update soon

No problem by that time Raman will take long leave along with Ishita for her pregnancy.(Raman leave everything his job and house to take care of Ishu for that period of time and story continues later)

Only Sonali has to handle along with new entry.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi ! I have read all your ff/ss and they have always been very gripping. Your a great writer. Continue to entertain us with your stories 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
did ashok cheat sonali?
cont.soon

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