OS: Rekindled Passion - Part 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everyone😃 I started this one shot and was amazed by the fabulous responses by all my readers all encouraging me to give it a closure.
So here i am with an IshRa confession, hoping sincerely that i would live up to your expectations and would not disappoint you all.😳
Of course i am looking forward to ur likes, feedback, comments and suggestions.


Here is the link of the first part for those who missed it:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4027822/os-rekindled-passion

And here goes the second part. Enjoy!


Distractions! Raman laughed at himself! He thought people at the party would distract him and de-focus his attention on Mrs Bhalla but he found himself getting distracted by her and lost in the middle of a conversation every time he would notice the flash of blue and pink moving around.
His eyes would track her smiling and greeting the guests, swaying her hips gracefully from one end to another of the hall. He was not sure but he felt she was stealing glances at him but would immediately turn away as soon as he caught her doing so. Was she teasing him? He wondered.

Ishita was way too much aware of his eyes lingering on her even when he was supposedly in an animated conversation with a client or business partner. Raman Bhalla! What bit him tonight?
He had not stopped staring at her and it was making her weak on her knees. But she would not let him know how much he was affecting her. He was always criticizing her weight, her look and her taste. And right now his eyes were giving her a clear message - she was looking hot and sexy and Mr Raman Bhalla was impressed, more than impressed...
She was satisfied. Would serve him right! She told herself with pride.

OMG! He was coming towards her. What if he had a hidden talent? That of mind reader!! She would be in a soup. She was still twisting and turning her fingers under the pallu of her saree when she heard him:
- Why are you parading like this in the party as if you are Miss Universe?

Unbelievable! Whether she was Miss Universe or not, he was definitely Mr Vain!

- Looks like your tongue has turned completely bitter! U gulped all the karela dishes? Time to have some dessert.

Ishita turned her back and moved to the buffet as Raman looked on, a smirk on his lips. As he expected, her taunt didnt wait much to come. Good grace this woman was turning him on even with her exclusive tongue lash now! Tera kuch nahin ho sakta Raman Bhalla he muttered to himself. A voice suddenly snapped him of his thought! Shagun!

- Raman I can't believe it! You look clearly smitten. Your taste has been going down the drain alarmingly after I left you. Are you that desperate?

In a composed voice, keeping his anger under check, he replied back:

- Yes my taste has changed. From my food to my lifestyle to the people who share my life. Now I like simple yet classy things around me.




It was past midnight when they had reached home. They were at home in their room. Ishita had locked herself in the bathroom refusing to get out. Raman was fuming in frustration.

- Ishita open that damn door before I break it and get you out of this damn bathroom.

She would not open and he was getting really restless. He had goofed up royally this time.



*Flasback*

After his clash of words with Shagun, he had found Ishita standing in front of him with their desserts. Discarding the sweets, he had taken her by the elbow and moved to the dance floor, whispering to her - Let's dance.
She had tried to decline but he would not listen. He was angry she could see it. She had wanted to calm him down but he had hushed her by putting his index on her lips and said - You talk a lot.

And there with the slow music and romantic ambiance on the dance floor, staring in her expressive eyes, drinking in her cherry like lips and having her so close to him, he had lost control of the situation . He had pulled her closer and pressed her tightly against him, his hands finding their way around her waist. She had gasped and had looked at him with her eyes wide as she felt his bulge against her belly. She had tried to get away but he had kept pulling her closer wrapping his arms around her like a band. Finally releasing herself from his grip, she had sped up to the main entrance leaving a flabbergasted Raman.






Raman knew he had gone too far. He was upset and much tensed. She was still locked there and he desperately wanted to talk to her.
- Ishita please open the door. You are freaking me out. I am sorry. Please...

The door opened and she came out, her arms crossed in front of her chest looking at him squarely in his face.
- I am not killing myself Raman. I would rather kill you.

Raman heaved a sigh of relief. He started:

- Listen...
- No you talk too much Mr Bhalla. You will listen now.

Count on that woman to use his line on himself. Raman was had no option but to listen to her.

- I know Shagun provoked you. I know you tend to lose it around her. I know you love her and her every word and action affect you but I am warning you STOP. PLAYING. YOUR. WICKED. GAMES. WITH. ME.
I am not your toy.


Huh? What was she saying? He still loves that selfish Shagun? The woman who ruined his life and made it devoid of emotions? And was she implying that he was using her?
She was so dumb that woman.

- Ishita you are mistaken.

She refused to listen and turned away to dismiss him with her hand:
- I don't want to discuss Shagun and definitely not what happened in the party.

She was embarrassed and turned red in the face. He grabbed her wrist making her upturn her face to stare at him, her eyebrows cocked.
- But I want to talk about it. And you will listen to me.

His eyes looked at her with a fierce resolution and she knew it would be vain trying to get away. He made her sit at the edge of the bed and went to the window staring into nothingness and he went about telling her finally the "Shagun" chapter of his life. Her eyes watered realizing how much that woman had disrespected him, humiliated him and killed him inside for her greed and ambitions while he kept giving and giving and getting nothing in return.
He had opened up his wounds to her, bared his soul to her. And she finally admitted to herself with melancholy that she has lost her heart to him. Instinctively, her loving and caring nature overpowering her senses, she reached up to him and hugged him without thinking of the aftermath.
She felt him pulling her closer tightening his grip around her and she heard him muttering heatedly against the column of her neck:
- Stop me Ishita. I won't be able to stop myself

She did register what he had said but was unable to put any sense to it. Stop him? How could she when he was that close and she could feel their erratic heartbeats - hers drumming in her chest cavity, his racing under her palm as she clutched his shirtfront in helpless abandon. And as she looked up in his eyes, she was lost!
He took her lips... surprising her...melting her inside... As the desire took over, she felt his lips growing softer against hers and... she lost count of time. All she knew was that she trusted him... to keep her safe... while the ground seemed to be slipping beneath her feet. His warmth enveloped her again as she felt him drew closer to her, holding her, touching her lovingly and when she felt his fingers undoing the knot at the back of her blouse, she quivered in anticipation. He pulled her hair free and did what he had been dying to do for a long time - bury his head in them! When he lifted his face, his eyes were hooded with passion and desire, he moved to the bed with her, his eyes never leaving hers.
They knew they had reached the place of no return. She was in love with this man. He was not any man. He was her husband. Will he ever love her back she didn't know but she was ready to give herself to him and would not regret it. As he took her in his embrace, they gave themselves to each other.

When Raman woke up in the night, entangled in Ishita's hair, he was a fulfilled man! He was in love. The love he was feeling for her had surpassed anything he had ever experienced. Yes he had loved Shagun or should he say that she was beautiful and had fallen for her. But Ishita! He has fallen in love with her and she was the most beautiful woman for him! She was his soul mate and now he could not imagine life without her. It was time to tell her how much he loved her. She really deserved it. He was tempted to wake her up to say the three famous words but he didnt want to disturb the contented smile on her face.




Epilogue:
But the next morning a surprise was waiting for him. When he woke up, his eyes hooded with sleep searched for her.
And there she was! Getting ready to work! What a boring woman he has got married to. He rolled his eyes. He walked to her and hugged her from the back to tell her what he had wanted to tell her but she released herself and refused to look at him.What she said next left him speechless.

- Raman you relax. I knew what I was doing. You don't have to feel guilty about it.

What the hell! No!! She wasn't regretting what happened between them and wanted to make him feel guilty? A fuming Raman started ranting.

- Are you out of your mind? Are you dumb or you seriously like to act like one? You fool! You stupid bewakoof woman, do you have any common sense or not? Why will I feel guilty for making love to my wife?

- Raman please, stop shouting like this. Mummy ji n the others will hear you.


Exasperated he continued:
- I don't care. I guess it is my phooti kismet that I always end up falling in love with the wrong woman. This time I have to deal with a pea size brain.

Ishita widened her eyes . Had he said he had fallen in love with her? Facing him, she asked:

- What did you say?
- You have a pea size brain.
- No just before that?
- What? You are a dumb woman.
- No just after that?
- Kya hain yaar. I said you are stupid. You have no common sense. What's there to be so happy about??


Ishita rushed to his side, her eyes all wide with a broad smile on her face and said:
- What did u say about ur phooti kismet?

An irritated Raman replied:
- What? I tend to fall in love with the wrong woman!

She threw herself in his arms, wrapping her hands around his neck and went a long :
- Awww, I love you too.

He shook his head in disbelief as she rested her head on his chest hugging him tight!
He was married to a crazy woman indeed!




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Posted: 11 years ago
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edited!!!!

you definitely need to write more..just like these..enjoyed part 1 and 1..and the last epilogue part especially ..equally sweet,caring,crazy and loving...thanks for such a good piece of writing 🤗
Edited by -Raz- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res :)
Very beautiful👏👏👏

Loved it

there was right mix of passion n emotion.
Loved the way u expressed Raman n Ishita 's emotion. It was intense
I was choked with emotions while reading very touching.
N end was perfect.
Thank n a big🤗 for writing
Pls do continue writing on Ishra
Edited by shalu79 - 11 years ago
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Awh!
This was so cute.😳
Loved it. :)
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That was Awesome! Loved it ☺️
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The ending could'nt be better❤️
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Very few writers can write sensuous stories with utmost grace ...thank u so much for writing the confessions and following part ...loved the way u treated the concept..characters true to their real self...Shagun is the biggest cupid in IshRa life..here also Raman's feelings and Ishita's emotions got the final kick due to Shagun...loved the way the story changed into emotion one from a sensuous one in friction of seconds ...how he bared his soul in front of his soul mate and she healed him with her love and care...the love making part was beautifully written ...confession part again showed Ishita and Raman the Tom & Jerry pair in action...LOVED this write up will be an understatement ..keep writing dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb part...
Both got the love which they deserve in there in life.. ...
Epilogue conversation b/w ishra was hillarious. ...
Amazingly wriiten..
Keep writing

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Raz-

edited!!!!

you definitely need to write more..just like these..enjoyed part 1 and 1..and the last epilogue part especially ..equally sweet,caring,crazy and loving...thanks for such a good piece of writing 🤗



Thank u dear! It is u ppl only who have been encouraging me to write. Keep reading!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shalu79

res :)

Very beautiful👏👏👏

Loved it

there was right mix of passion n emotion.
Loved the way u expressed Raman n Ishita 's emotion. It was intense
I was choked with emotions while reading very touching.
N end was perfect.
Thank n a big🤗 for writing
Pls do continue writing on Ishra



Thank u. Ur appreciation means a lot to me. I guess i am in love with them and IshRa are very emotional ppl thought they tend to hide their emotions around each other by nokjhoking. This Tom n Jerry funda between them is part n parcel of their life - khatti meethi takraar as per YHM Anthem😆 If i dont add it to my stories, it feels incomplete!😳
Thanks again. Do read my previous works on them when u r free though i have just started on IshRa

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