OS IshRa (Ishita & Raman)- Balam mohe chhedo naa ... ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Friends ..My name is Deepika.This is my 3rd fanfic in YHM forum.I've written OS and SS in other Forum. Our super adorable IshRa inspired me to write another story on them Hope you'll like it.. Your feedback will be anticipated..😊Sorry for the errors,didnt get time to proofread...


This OS is dedicated to
Namy (-DreamWeaver-)..
I know its not good enough still i hope you guys will like it😳




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---Balam Mohe Chhedo Naa---

His deep dark brown orbs were fixed on her angelic face ...her beauty was beyond words to explain ...her glowing complexion was enhanced with the moonlight falling on her through the window ... Her face was glowing with the cool silver light on it ... and...he saw a sign of irritation on that angelic face...she tried to move from her place...



Ishita, Sit straight na...don't move. You are distracting me.He said with a straight face...


Ishita just made a face at him and again sat like a statue letting out a huge sigh.


Yeh Ravan Kumar paiting banane ki acting kar rahe hai ya sach main kuch bana rahe...god knows...uff ...Its so difficult to sit idle ...


Raman just chuckled at her cuteness and continued his work...which held his attention on a potentially romantic Saturday night.


Ishita was hell irritated, they were here on their farmhouse to spend a romantic weekend and here her hubby is busy imprinting paints on the board instead of placing love bites on her...She even left Ruhi with her grand parents just to spend some quality time with her ever-busy CEO husband...Only she knows how difficult it was for her to convince her heart that Ruhi will be fine in her absence ...


On the other hand Raman was trying hard to concentrate...he was having a tough time in keeping his hands limited to the paint brushes...when they were craving to move all over her...


Concentrate Raman ...you have to finish it today itself'...u don't have much time left ...he told to himself...

He almost forgot his brushes when his life became colorless due to his dreadful past...He was turning into something he always hated to the core...Raman Kumar Bhalla - the arrogant ,emotionless Businessman ;which was his pretension to save his fragile heart from the ruthless outer world...He had lost all faith in human relations when she entered his life...He was not being a good father to his little angel Ruhi ..His father stopped talking to him for years when he killed his son ruthlessly and only let an emotionless stone breath...He was successful and center of attention everywhere in his business circle but his broken soul was craving for some warmth...She touched his life and all his pains disappeared...the faded colors on his canvas of life started deepening with each passing day ...


He was trying hard to control his desires when a sweet voice again broke his concentration...


Baby! Are you done... We have wasted enough time on this...we can do much better things tonight...


He looked at her...and she teased him with a flying kiss...


He gulped looking at her...his eyes traveled all over her and she taking the advantage slid the strap of her dress down...which exposed her shoulder to him...


Raman's breath was stuck in his throat... he looked down at the paint brush in his hand and then at his gorgeous wife...who was already in a compromising position...


He just wanted to throw that brush and go and take that lady in front of him in his embrace ...But with great difficulty he managed to shoo his thoughts

off..Yeh Jhansi ki Rani ke iraade khatarnak lagte hai...Beta Raman tera so called thpughtful creative gift ki band bajane wali hai yeh...he muttered under his breath ...and tried to control his desires ...


Ishu, baby please don't move you know I have to complete this before your birthday...and it will take time to dry also... now please sit straight na baby...


He went near her and made her sit properly and put the strap of her dress back in place he was about to move his hand when Ishita held it and moved it over her bare shoulders and again slid down both her straps...


She held his hands and made him rub them all over her shoulders and neck and then placed it just above her heart...


She breathed hard which made her chest move up and sown in sync and along with it his hand also moved up and down... Raman gulped..he had lost all his senses...he tried hard to control his desire and here she was spilling water on all his hard work...


He was lost in her and by mistake he spilled the paints he was holding in his hand on her...


Ewww!Yeh aap ne kya kiya Raman... She screamed and pushed his hands aside.


He heard her loud voice which broke his chain of thoughts and looked at her who looked like a cartoon...


Oops! He means tigress...who was all set to kill her husband...


She glared at him which made him move backwards...


Baby.. It was your mistake...he said trying hard to suppress his laughter...

My MISTAKE...she said through clenched teeth.

You were the one who was seducing me...so i lost control...he chuckled ...

You...Go to hell... you were here to spend a romantic weekend with me and not your paint brushes...

Baby...but...

What but...

Now...Dare you come near me Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla... You are not even allowed to touch me for this life time...


Now move she pushed him and started walking towards the bathroom...


He saw her leaving and he noticed the silky dress which was about to fall off from her body...


That was when her words dawned on him...

What?? No how can I not touch her...we were here to spend a romantic weekend with each other and for that I need to...

Oh god!

Ishu...wait I am coming...


Ishita went inside the bathroom in haste and forgot to lock the door...


She went and switched on the shower and was about to pull her dress down...when she felt a pair of hands encircling her waist...


She gasped at his touch...


He bended and kissed her on her nape and rested his chin on his shoulder and then again kissed her on her cheeks and moved back...


Ishita gained her composure and turned back to shout at him but the sight in front made her lose all her sense...


He had removed his shirt and was now standing with bare chest so close to her and water droplets were continuously falling on him making him look irresistible...


She closed her eyes to calm her hear which was beating at an unnatural speed...


Why the hell he has to look so irresistible when she was so hopelessly trying to be angry at him...


Before she could do anything she felt him hugging her again...


I will help you in cleaning up...he said in huskily voice sucking her earlobe..


No ways...No ways...she tried to show her Jhansi ki Rani side...it didn't work...


You have only two options...YES or YES...take it as a punishment for disturbing me in my painting...he said..winking at her...


He didn't wait for her answer ...next moment he slid his hands in her dress and made it fall on the ground...


She thought of running away ...but a part of her knew that it won't be possible for her ...to run away from him...she was looking down at trying to think of some plans to win over her smart husband...


She looked up...and all her plannings disappeared in thin air... he turned her around and smashed his lips on her...


While kissing she felt his hands move all over her bare form...she moaned at his actions which turned him more wild...


He left after what seemed like ages...her eyes were still closed...she slowly opened her eyes to find him adoring her...


She turned a shade of deep red and turned around avoiding his gaze...


The water droplets were shamelessly hugging his chiseled body...he ran his fingers through his wet hair... he pulled her back and she landed on his chest...


A part of her was telling her to stay away from him and continue the "who is having upper hand " game...the other part of her was surrendering in front of the Greek god beside her..


Ishita 1:WTH Ishita...don't give him that love sick puppy cum seduced look...you just can let him win(Jhansi Ki Rani Ishita)

Ishita 2:OMG...OMG...Why the hell ..he has to look so mercilessly hot ..it should be a crime..he looks so out of this world..his wet hairs...the water droplets hugging his lips...i so want to taste those lips...NOW...(Raman's Ishita...drowned in his pool of love)

Ishita 1:Hey ...why are you confusing her...she just can't let him win..Ishita ..never looses...NEVER..Even Raman calls her Jhansi Ki Rani..you Know

Ishita 2:This is not war sweety ..this is LOVE.

Soon her doppelgangers started fighting with each other...pulling each others hair..spoiling each others make up...


She looked at the cat fight between her images...and she knew what she had to do...


I thought ...you wanted to help...he heard an angelic and dangerously seductive voice...he simpered...he knew she won't be able to resist him..


Oh I would love to help ..he winked at her ...he pulled her under the shower...next moment...water droplets were unashamedly hugging her all over... he adored the mermaid in front of him...the water droplets were making her beauty even more angelic...if that was possible...


She started running her fingers on his bare torso...which were playing with his senses...those chocolate brown orbs were fixed on her angelic face..she could feel his gaze over her...as if he was touching her through his eyes...


She blushed ...to the deepest shed of red...she turned her back towards him..gosh...Raman ...why do you have this effect on me...i can't think straight when you are around...u work like my personal drug...when I want to be angry at you..you make me go weak on my knees...she whispered to herself...



Ahhh...meri jaan...he whispered softly in her ears..this is the time to LOVE..not to be angry..


He hugged her from back and moved his fingers on her creamy and soft skin of her waist...her heart started beating harder...as if it would jump out of her chest any time...he kissed moved her hair from her back ...he moved his hand towards her neck...up & down...her breaths became heavy with the movement of his fingers...she was loosing her senses...he planted a trail of wet kisses on her creamy back...moved toward her nape...brushed his wet lips on it ...played with her ear lobes...with his tongue...continued moving the other hand fingers on her navel...


Ramaaan...she moaned his name...


Ummm...he was too busy to reply to her...


Sorry for disturbing you in your painting...she said..with a cute smile playing on her lips...she was breathing harder with each passing moment...


He made her face him...her face was painted crimson red ...it was his effect on her...he loved that fact..


Its ok my Jhansi Ki Rani...I am ready to get disturbed by you every single day..if we always end up like this...he whispered near her ear while still brushing his lips on her creamy skin...


She turned crimson red at his statement...Next moment she felt his soft lips on hers...he kissed her gently with all his love and affection...she responded to the kiss in no time...she parted her lips and gave him a better access...his tongue entered her mouth..tasted every part of it and their tongues danced in unison..to the beautiful melody of their pure love...he picked his beautiful mermaid in his arms... and walked towards their bedroom...without breaking the kiss...


They were lost in their world of love and passion...moon was peeping through the window...he was the witness of this beautiful scene...two angels...deeply in love...lost in each other...making love to each other ...two soul mates...finding solace in each other embrace...


They were moaning each others name...their voices full of passion and love were creating a beautiful melody in the deep silence of the night along with the wind-charm hanging near the window...


The touch of their bare forms were sending shivers down their body...she closed her eyes and allowed him to kiss her all over her...his touch made her got lost in her alternate universe...with HIM...finally their dream weekend had begun...


The moon left them alone ...trying to give the madly in love couple some privacy...his eyes fall on the incomplete painting..he sighed ...he knew...the poor thing will never get their attention back...


Edited by _Deepika_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Comment By Namy


Hey Deepika 🤗

Firstly, i would like to do a lil scolding.. You dedicated an OS to me and you even didn't tell me.. You're a chhupa rustam..

Now some more scolding.. Why didn't you reserve a spot for me on the first page?? Next time give me a chance to Res my spot whenever you dedicate something to me😛😳😕

Girl, last night only I got to know that you dedicated such an awesome OS to me.. I am overwhelmed.. I was a bit busy in the last few days and only last night I got a chance to read ur OS..

What a brilliant piece of writing.⭐️⭐️. It was beautifully passionate & intensively romantic.❤️. A perfect balance of emotional passionate yet naively innocent scene between a hubby & wifey.. You caught RKB's personality so well in this HOT scene

The scene I loved the most was Ishita's talking to her inner self.. Could imagine various emotions playing on her face at such disturbing thoughts..☺️

A part of her was telling her to stay away from him and continue the "who is having upper hand " game...the other part of her was surrendering in front of the Greek god beside her..

Ishita 1:WTH Ishita...don't give him that love sick puppy cum seduced look...you just can let him win(Jhansi Ki Rani Ishita)

Ishita 2:OMG...OMG...Why the hell ..he has to look so mercilessly hot ..it should be a crime..he looks so out of this world..his wet hairs...the water droplets hugging his lips...i so want to taste those lips...NOW...(Raman's Ishita...drowned in his pool of love)

Ishita 1:Hey ...why are you confusing her...she just can't let him win..Ishita ..never looses...NEVER..Even Raman calls her Jhansi Ki Rani..you Know

Ishita 2:This is not war sweety ..this is LOVE.

Soon her doppelgangers started fighting with each other...pulling each others hair..spoiling each others make up...

You portrayed such a passionate romantic scene with very depth and fineness.. I absolutely loved it.. and you deserve a lot of praise for such an awesome work⭐️⭐️

Since I wasn't able to sleep after reading ur breathtaking OS and Nikki's astounding Post on the last night epi, I made something that I would like to dedicate both of you.. It's a very short version still hope you ll like it ;).. And I might complete the long version when you might convert this OS\into SS or FF 😉😳😆

So here you go..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ljq2DncZ_oA[/YOUTUBE]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ljq2DncZ_oA

Comment By Surbhi




Can i borrow some ice? As my eyes are blazing after reading such H.O.T.N.E.S.S
DD What did you just just changed my expressions from this to this ☺️
I mean seriously man what a Hot writeup! Ismei dislike aur like ka toh sawaal hi nhi uthta boss! Yeh toh scintillating tha 😆 Aap toh waise bhi super writer ho...yeh toh hona hi tha mere saath..infact sabke saath ;)
RKB toh bada hot nikla yaaar! Yeh dikhaya na aapne RKB plus KP effect! SuperLikeee!!
Aur ishitaaa haha she got upset in the start when he was not doing anything lol but towards the end she was pleading him to stop XD XD It was such a simple story but the way you wrote it..it just brought havoc 🤣 in my mind atleast!
Ab aap na zyada mat likho...warna mai bhi inspire hoke likh dungi inpe kuch 😕
Shower ke baare mei toh mai kuch nahi likhungi as you've embarassed me ache se ekdum. Aap toh samajh jao bas meri feelings ko.
Ab mai jaati hu hukum _/\_
Keep writing 😆

Edited by _Deepika_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omggg this is one of the HOTTES HOTTEST OS i hv read on IshRa...Very passionate...wild...romantic..!!!

too too good deepika...LOVED LOVED it...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg!! Why is it
just an os!!! Plzz write more such amazing ones!!
Edited by SnigdhaGautam - 11 years ago
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Smoking hot!!!!!!! Well written!!! 😃
Edited by Indian_Isha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG Deepika!! Super hot OS tough to handle😆☺️

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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh woww
this was so amazing ☺️☺️
loved, loved it
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oh my..super hot and romantic..😳😳..very well written..pls continue it na😊
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Super hot yaar wish they showed this but Indian tv is not advanced so not expecting anything .
Awesome post
Do cont...
Edited by rockstar29 - 11 years ago

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