ishra os:4 din mein hogya pyaar.

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deepa

@aashid27

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi guys im bk wid anoder os,its of 2 parts.hope ul lyk it.it starts aftr d sagai of mihir & mihika,evry1 came 2 knw dat ishra had pland things 2 make dem confess 2 each other.

M:wat??bhabi..bai..ye sab aap logon ne plan karke...

I:muje raman ke idea ke baarein mei nai pata.muje laga ke unke vaja se tum apne dil ke baat nai bata rahe ho,isliye meine Socha kyun na raman ka kel mein usike saat kelun..so oly i brout dis new character vibu but seriously bahaut acha actin kiya hai isne. see v gt d result of it also.

M:wa...bhabi kya plannin hai!!yahan meri jaan nikal gaye thi aur aap..

R:ye humesha se hi aise hai,dusron ko pareshan karna iske adat hai.

(Ishu was abt 2 retort wen,)

M:acha..tum toh aise keha rahe ho jaise ki tumne kuch kiya hi nai..

R:haan meine kya kiya?mein toh bas apne bai ke mu se sach ugalvane keliye ek chota sa natak kiya..

Mi:oh really jiju chota sa natak???

Mr.B:arre kitne asani se bol raha hai ke chota sa natak kiya tha.kya tumhe andaza bi hai ke agar mihir ne kuch bola nai hota toh kya hota?kaise laga hoga in donon ko uss waqt?aap donon ko toh saza milne hi chaiye kyun toshiji?

T:bilkulji ek dum sahi kaha aapne saza toh zarur milne chahiye.

R&I:kya?itne badi galti toh nai kiya na humne.bas donon ko milana chahte the apne tarike se.

Ru:bas ab aur behas nai papa aap dono ne galti ke so punishment milegi.waise ishima aap hi toh kehte ho agar galti ki hai toh usko sudar na bi chahiye.

I:haan ruhi lekin.

Ru:haan isliye toh keha raha hun galti sudarlo.

R:(he thinks,ye pagal aurat mere beti ko bi apne tara bashan dena sika diya)thik ruhi main tere kehene pe maan rahan hun.

Ru:very gud papa.dadu...papa aur ishima ko saza chachu aur chiti decide karenge k?

R&I:kya?(dey luk at each other)

Mr.B:haan ye thik rahega. chalo puttar decide karo aap dono jaldi se..

R&I:nai nai indono se nai pata nai kya kya bolenge ...nai papaji pls.

Mr.B:ye baat tab yaad aane chahiye thi jab aaplog ye sab plan kar rahe the.pata nai kab sudroge aap dono humesha jagdte rehtein,dekte hain iss punishment ke baat kuch asar padta ya nai kyun Iyer saab?

Mr.I:ji baat toh sahi hai..

I:appa!!!

Mrs.I:mihika rehne do na aap dono...

Mi:perima...aisa kaise chod den.no partiality haan...

I:acha tum toh aise kehe rahi ho jaise tumhe kuch pata hi nai tha.

Mi:haan lekin meine vahi kiya jo aapne kaha na..toh usmei mere kya galti hai?"

I:huh...cheater.

M:sahi baat hai ismein uske kya galti hai?

R:acha beta shaadi ke pehele hi baazi mar raha hai toh shaadi ke baat pata nai kya hoga?hum dono ne chote nai balki bahaut bade galti kiya hai.

I:haan muje bi aisa hi lag raha hai.ab pata nai kya plan kar rahe honge in dono ne milkar...

M&Mi:k humne decide kar liya hai.

Ru:batao na chachu mein sab ko bata dete hun.

Mi:ru... cum here(dey tel hr deir plan)

Ru:k...toh chachu aur chachi ne decide kiya hai ke...

R&I:ke kya??

Ru:aap donon ko 4 din keliye ek dusre ke kaam karna hai bina kisi ke help.

I:kya??nai nai pls...

R:ek dusre ka kaam matlab?

Ru:uffo papa...matlab ye hai ke aapko 4 din keliye aapko ishima ban na hai aur ishima ko raman papa ban na hai.

R:wat rubbish...mihir ye kya bakwas kar rahi ho tum ishita aur office kaam no its nt possible.

M:bai is it possible fr u to do housewrk? no na?but stil ur gona try na so let hr also.tum chinta mat karo vo jo bi important decisions legi aapko puch kar hi legi par meetings, presentations vo sab bhabi hi karenge il b dr 2 help bhabi if anythin happens.

R:fir bi yaar ek dentist hoke...buisness?

M:bai humhe scandal se bhabi ne hi toh bachaya tab bi vo dentist hi thi na to fir problem kya hai?vaise bi aapko shukar manana chaiye.. kyun ki hum aapko clinic nai bej rahein patients ke baarein mei soch kar.

(ishu smiles at dat)

R:zyaada kush mat ho buisness kaise handle karoge?

I:mere chinta chodo mere help keliye mihir toh hai.aap khana kaise pakayenge? aur bake sab kaise karenge?

T:ye kya baat hue bhallaji?mere puttar ko khana pakane ke baarein mei kuch pata hi nai kaas karke in madarasiyon ke baare mei kuch nai pata,ye kisi ke madat ke bina kaise karega?ishita ko tho mihir madat karega mere puttar ka kya?

R:haan sahi baat hai pucho na ma..

Mi:auntyji mihir toh sirf zaruri cheeson ke help karega other dan dat akka oly should do evrythin jaise ke files check karna,meetings attend karna,employees ko handle karna vo sab.agar vo chate hai toh jiju se kuch jaana zaruri hai she can ask him fr doubts but rest akka akele hi handle karege koi nai help karega other dan dis.

M:same wid u bai aap bi bhabi se help le sakte ho lekin hum sab mei se kisi se bi nai.

R:haye rabba muje aisa kyun dand de rahe ho?aisa kya galat kiya meine muje iske saat fasa diya.pata nai mere dimag ko kya hua ke meine is madrasi se shaadi karli...(he shakes his head)

Ru:papa sirf ghar ke kaam hi nai aapko mere kaam bi karna hai.

R:jab sab kuch teh hi hogya toh fir karna hi padega.

Ru:yeah...4din keliye papa ruhi ke ishima banenge.(She jumps on him & he holds her)

I:(she smiles at dem)-chalo acha hi hua isi bahane dono saat mein waqt betayenge.

R:ruhi ishima nai papa ab happypapa banege apne beti keliye..

(ishu & d iyers hav a confused & surprised look while,)

Ru:sachi papa???(raman smiling nods in yes)yeah...yeah..

T:oye hoye ye hue na baat changa hua.

(Raman leaves wid ruhi)

Ro:aaj romi kahin nai jaayega gar pe hi rahega kya pata mummy aisa mokka kab milenge dobara.kyun papa?

Mr.B:haan romi thik kaha tumne.

(Ishu did gt a gyst dat raman has changed & is gonna be lyk before fr his daughter.he is gonna becum ruhi's papa fr which evry1 r happy.)

I:(thinks to self)thank u murugan mere parivaar ko aise hi kush rakna.i hope i gt a chance to see MR.HAPPY BHALLA.

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deepa

@aashid27

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Posted: 11 years ago

Pls do comment and sry if any spellin mistakes are der.do let me knw wether i should continue or not.

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cyndu

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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved it! :) n do continue!

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Divan_Sashona

@Divan_Sashona

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Posted: 11 years ago

good idea nice punishment wanna see how thy both will handle each other work?

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

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Posted: 11 years ago

Great OS Dear!Pls do write more on Ishra & pm Me!

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deepa

@aashid27

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Posted: 11 years ago

Pt 2:(ishita helps raman in cookin)

AT D OFFICE:

I:(while goin thru d files)kya mihir?

M:kya hua bhabi?

I:muje kuch samaj mein nai aa raha hai.confusion se sar phata ja raha hai.

M:one min mein help karta hun(he starts explainin bt stil she could nt undrstand)

I:nai nai ye mujse nai hoga..nthin is gtin in my mind.

M:mein aur kya karun bhabi isse zyaada mein aur kaise explain karun??(he even tries explainin wid examples, objects,etc bt in vain)bhabi..mujse aur nai hoga..

I:deka isliye kaha meine ye sab wrk out nai hoga ab dek uss raavan kumar toh mere dimag kajayega..aiyo murugan pls bachalo muje...

M:bai...arre haan bai can help.bhabi ab aur koi choice nai oly bai can help u in dis.

I:kya?nai mein usse help nai mangunge..aap log ne fasa diya muje toh u oly hav 2 help 2 gt out of it.

M:bhabi...rules bhul gaye(she remembers)so u hav no other option.

I:(she decides 2 ask him bt doesnt express)nai nai mihir mein kud hi dek lunge tum jao na apna kaam karo..

M:k..il b outside oly.(she notices a file wid ashok's name & opens it)

I:mihir...(he turns)ye kya raman ne ashok ke saat partnership..

M:haan bhabi vo..bai mumbai gaye the na vo issi deal keliye tha un investors ne request kiya tha ashok ko partner banane keliye so oly & bhabi aaj uss project ke meetin hai u hav 2 make decisions so i think bai can oly explain u better abt it.

I:k bahaut hogaya ab jao...(he goes)ye mihir bi na apne bai ke tara chance milte hi masaq uda raha hai.vaise bi vo thik hi toh kehe raha hai i hav no other option aur agar ashok hoga i hav 2 ask raman before decidin on anythin (she calls him)

R:kya hua?

I:jab kisi cal ata hai sabse pehele hello bolna chaiye ye chote se baat bi nai jaantein aap?

I:agar pehele hi pata hai ke kon call kar raha hai fir hello ke zarurat kya hai?anyways JKR ko koi hello kaise bol sakta hai?

I:raman pls pehele se bi tere ye office ke vaja se mera sar fata ja raha hai aur aap...

R:deka...mere bina tera kuch nai hoga...call kar diya na.

I:kisne kaha ke aap ke bina mere...(she stops,der is silence as both realised wat dey wr talkin,wen.)

R:thik thik kya hua jaldi bolo muje bahaut kaam hai.

I:acha..toh kuch hi ganto mein gar ke kaam sikliya aapne?arre vah..(she starts teasin him)

R:h..haan aur nai toh kya.kya socha tumne raman bhalla ke baarein mein i can handle evrythin.

I:oh..agar aisa hai kya banaya aapne lunch mein.i wanna cum home.

R:kyun?

I:vo kya hai na jab mere pati ne itne ache kaana banate hain toh fir mein kyun bahar kaon?

R:nai nai gar mat aana.

I:y?

R:vo kya na tum kyun vahan se aane ke stress le rahi ho vahin raho na aramse anyways u hav lot of wrk...

I:raman..aap jitne bi koshish karlo u cannot hide frm me. muje ache se pata hai ke aapse kuch nai ho raha hai.

R:agar pata hai toh fir pucha kyun?

I:kk. mein kuch madat karun?

R:koi zarurat nai.

I:k...

R:ek min agar tum help karna chate ho toh kar sakte ho..

I:acha...(she smiles at his innocence)k but aapko mere madat karna hoga.

R:haan mere ma karunga ab batao kya banaon?

I:aap madrasi kaana banaoge ya..

R:dek mere dimag mat kao...ab kuch batao banane keliye...

I:kk suno(she tells sum dish as she was tellin he was makin)

R:finally...

I:ban gaye hw does it taste?

R:vahin toh dek raha hun..(he tastes)hmm...

I:ache hai na??

R:(to irritate her)oh god..ye meine kya kiya?tere baaton mein aakar sab kuch spoil kar diya meine... abi pata chal raha hai tum kitne bura kaana banate ho.

I:excuse me..meine help kiya toh zarur ache hi aaya hua hoga. zarur aapne hi kuch galti kiye honge.vaise bi mere mistake hai muje help nai karne chaiye thi nai nai muje call hi nai karna chaiye tha...(she was abt 2 keep d phone)

R:oiye JKR ek min...

I:kya?

R:masaq kar raha tha... bahaut acha bana hai.romi sahi keheta tha tere khane ke baarein mein ab pata chal raha hai.

I:really...

R:yakin nai ho raha hai kud aake dek lo..

I:aana toh mein bi chate hun par aapke office ne toh muje baand ke rak diya hai kaam ke saat.

R:hua kya hai pehele vo batao(she tells evrythin)

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deepa

@aashid27

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Posted: 11 years ago

Pt 3:(raman helps ishu)

R:bechara mihir hw sad...anyways he deserves it.

I:tum baad mein ye sab soch kar kush hojao ab pehele muje in deals ke baarein batao khaas karke vo jis mein uss ashok aapke partner.

R:tuje kaise pata chala?mihir ne bataya?

I:nai meine vo file deka.

R:k leav vo mein baad mein batataon.

I:baad mein nai aaj tumare uss 6ft2inch ke saat meetin hai so u hav 2 tell.

R:wat?meine date nai fix kiya fir..

I:pata nai mihir ne bataya.if he said den u oly would hav fixed it knw.

R:ab kya karoge tum?ab vo aadmi(parmeet) bi uske saat hai.

I:kon aadmi?

R:nai nai koi nai mein toh aise hi..

I:u just tell abt d deal il manage dnt wry i wnt let u dwn jo bi ho il ask u oly & den make any decisions k.

R:k(he explains wid wat hapd in mumbai)

I:oh...toh isiliye aap kush the deal ke milne par uss din.

R:haan.tum ye sab chodo aur kuch jaana hai ya aur koi meetings hai.

I:nai i guess aaj keliye ye khaafi hai.

R:thik fir,agar koi problem hua toh call karna k.and haan meetin ke waqt phone ko bluetooth pe connected rakna.

I:raman meetin mein kaise???

R:kya kaise itne lambe baal hai tumare ussmein nai chupalo..todi na kisi ko dikega.

I:mere baal aapko cheesein chupane ke jaga lagta hai kya?

R:aur nai toh kya isliye kehe raha hun.kk i dnt hav tym bye.

I:itne jald baazi kyun,kaha jaana hai?

R:mein ruhi ke school ja raha hun usko lunch dene..

I:oh toh ruhi ke papa apna promise puree kar rahein hai...

R:shut up phone rako muje jaana hai..

I:ek min..

R:mm...

I:thank u so much...

R:its k aur vaise bi meine jo bi kiya apne nokri ko bachane keliye kiya.

I:jo bi ho...and happy bhalla ko pata nai (she smiles and says)par raavan kumar ke ye avatar acha hai.i lyk it.

R:(he smiles at d comment,bt doesnt express)ab mein jaon??

I:k bye.(just den mihir cums in)

M:bhabi chalo lunch kaatein.

I:nai mihir muje bhoog nai u hav.

M:r u sure bhabi aapko gar ke khaana nai chaiye..k i hav no problem il eat.

I:ghar ke khaana?

M:haan bai ne beja hai.

I:raman ne..ye kaise ho sakta hai vo abi tak baat kar raha tha mere saat fir kaise..(she stops thinkin wat she had blurted out)

M:hm...toh aap bai se baat kar rahi thi..(he starts teaain hr while she just smiles embarassed)OMG bhabi ur blushing!!!

I:mihir...

M:bhabi vo bi bai keliye ye to chamatkar hogaya..

I:mihir pls..chup hojao na..

M:its k bhabi devar hun aapke chupane ki zarurat nai u can trust me.ab chaliye bai ne specially beja hai cum hav lunch(dey start havin lunch)

I:mm...bahaut acha hai i dint expect it 2 cum out so well.

M:oh so phone pe hi sab kuch hogaya...aap bai ko kaane banane ki madat kiya aur unhone bi aapko help kiye honge??

I:haan usne bataya deal ke baarein mein.(she tels evrythin except d last thin which he said to stay connected on d line)

M:oh..so aap ready ho meetin keliye??

I:muje meetin ke chinta nai balki uss..

M:ashok se vo dikta aisa bhabi bt andar se kuch nai hai aap apne attitude dikaoge vo chup hojayega.

I:uss keliye mein raavan kumar nai ban sakte.

M:raavan kumar ke zarurat nai aap apne JkR mode pe rahi hai vahi khaafi hoga shayad

I:mihir...

M:sry bhabi(he runs out)

D MEETING:

I:ye raman phone kyun nai utta raha hai?its gttin late i hav 2 go in.

M:bhabi jaldi aaye..

I:haan mihir.ab jaana hoga muje jab vo call karega mein connect karte hun.(she goes in wen all welcum her & at d end came ashok & parmeet.she was shocked & luked at mihir who just asks hr 2 relax)

A:(he smiles)hello mrs.bhalla.(raman calls her bk she attends it aftr which he hears evrythin)

I:hello mr.khanna

P:hello is..i mean mrs.bhalla mein mr.khanna ke saat newly join kiya hun aur mera naam parmeet(he shows his hands fr handshake)

I:(raman was gtin irritated)oh toh vo tuche aadmi yahin hai..its nyc meetin u(sayin so she sits down widout givin a handshake)

R:tuche aadmi..(parmeet sits embarassed while mihir was smilin)

I:i guess evry1 is here so y dnt v start.mihir...

M:k.mr.khanna.

A:ya mrs.bhalla aaj ka meetin isliye hai...(sayin so he tells sum things which he says is gud fr d deal itl wrk out best and all,it goes on fr an hr den)mrs.bhalla i guess aapko zyaada experience nai hai issmein bt still i guess u can go wid dis well.kyun mihir?

M:bhabi i guess..

R:ishita tum usske papers check karo mein soch ke bata thaon tuje.

I:hmm..ek min mihir...mr.khanna can i see d papers pls..

A:sure..here(he givs d papers she goes thru it & finds sumthin wrong bt doesnt show,just den)

R:ishita i guess pehele baar akal ke baat kiya hai ussne accept it he is rite.

I:no..

R:ishita..

A:y mrs.bhalla anythin wrong? y r u sayin no?

I:no no mere kehene ka matlab ye hai ke i need sum tym y dnt v meet aftr sumtym mite b day aftr tomoro i guess dat wnt b a problem.

A:no nt at all.

I:k den thank u.

A:k meet u later bye.

I:bye.

P:thank u so much bye(she just stares at him.he leaves)

M:bhabi kya hua?

R:tum pagal toh nai hogaye?kar kya rahi ho tum?ur gonna spoil everythin.

I:raman pls u dnt knw y i said lyk dat.

M:bai..

R:vahin toh..muje seriously samaj mein nai aa raha hai ki tum kyun aise kar rahi ho?ur unbelievable.

I:tum...aap gar par hi ho na?wait mein gar aa rahi hun.(sayin so she cuts d call)mihir aur kuch nai na..mein gar ja rahi hun k tum dek lena..

M:par bhabi..(she just leaves)office aake zyaada waqt nai hua par itni jaldi bai jaise ban gaye..pata nai kya ho raha hai...

AT HOME:

Mr.B:ishita puttar..tu itni jaldi aagaye sab thik hai na office pe?

I:haan haan papaji sab thik hai kaam jaldi khatam hogaya isliye aa gaye.raman kahan hai?

Mr.B:vo apne kamre mein hai.

I:acha thik mein dekte hun..(she goes in seein him sittin wid tensed face.she puts d things on d table.hearin d sound he turns)

R:aaye madam aap hi ka induzar kar raha tha.sab kuch barbat karke ab kushi milgaye tuje?kitne ache soch tha vo..(she listens quietly den)

I:hogaya ab mere baat bi sunoge??(she gts d file & shows him)pad isko fir pata chalega..(he goes thru it finds out d samethin which she did & luks at her)mm..ab kyun kuch nai bol rahi ho??

R:ye..

I:haan isliye meine tym maanga taki hum pure tara se samaj sakein ke vo kya plan kar raha hai.

R:k im...sry m..muje pata nai tha ke..

I:its k raman nw v hav to do sumthin to change his plan.

R:k par hum kya karenge..

I:mere paas ek plan hai.jisse v can teach him a lesson.

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felciya

@felciya

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

I loved the three parts of Your OS. M&M gave a nice punishment to Ishra in the 1 part. In the 2&3rd part They were helping each other in their respective tasks Very Nice.