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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!!! Mihir Mihika together finally😃 was that really Ravan Kunar?😲 i love this version of his😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3:

It was decided that the engagement will happen as per the scheduled date and will be between Mihir and Mihika and Trisha and her boyfriend. Both the iyer family and Bhallas were busy in the preparations. All through the day Raman was continuously gazing Ishu without shifting his eyes. Ishu noticed it couple of times and was literally confused by his behavior. He was also trying to get pampered like a husband every now and then asking her to do something or the other so that he can have her near him. Tried to continuously touch her whenever he had an opportunity. Ishitha was getting uncomfortable each and every time. She could feel the intention with which he was touching her similar to how she could recognize Param's intention. She was wondering if it was to show the family.

It was night everyone had dinner and Ruhi wanted to sleep in Iyer's place with Sharavan so Raman and Ishitha were to sleep alone in the room. Ishita was unusually getting worried. She changed and was applying her lotion to legs, when Raman walked in. He closed the door and locked it. They never used to lock their door. This made Ishu panic more. She wanted to pretend to sleep immediately. Before she moved to the couch Raman grabbed her hand.

R: Kaha ja Rahi ho. Mere Sath Bistar me Sojavo na. ( Where are you going, sleep with me on the bed)

I : Ruhi is not there , so in genral I sleep here only. Raman please chodiya haath. Aaj subha see dek rahi hun, appa mere karib aa rahe hai.( Leave my hand, From Morning you have been trying to come closer to me) I can understand when others are around. But here no one is around. Why do you want to show off. Please iam tried of doing all this for the family and Ruhi. I feel pained to do this. At least give me my peace of mind inside our room when no one is there. I know you cannot get over Shagun and you don't love me. But when these encounters happen I feel very bad.

Raman is in the peak of his anger. He starts in his Ravan Kumar Mode

Bewakoof Aurat, Tum Madrasiyo ka dil aur Dimag dono kaali hai kya. Pagal tum bhi na yaar, patha nehi tumhari amma ne tumhe kya sikaya ya fur tumne college ya teenage me kya seeka. Pyar ki bhasa samjjme nehi attha hai kya. Mai samjatha hu( Stupid Women, you Madrases your mind and heart is so empty. What has your mom taught you or what did you learn in your college. You don't understand the language of love. Wait I will teach you)

Says so he moved closer to her. Grabs her by her waist holds her very tight. Ishu is breathing very hard. Then he goes on.

I was describing Sona the other day, didn't you realize that's you. Your big big eyes, long hair, little plump. I was admiring you could you realize that. And still you feel I love that nasty woman whose name also I don't prefer to hear. Did you feel my love when I gave you a thank you speech in tamil. Didn't you heart beat faster when I held you while falling in the kitchen, didn't it long for being embraced in my arms when the curtain pelmet fell. Didn't you feel the pain of my wound when I got hurt? Didn't you also not get a glimpse of how did I feel when you had been away from this house.

This is known as love, the same love that you have for me and I have for you. This is not for Ruhi ke liye. This for your Raman and Ishu ke liye. Please mujje en anko me bare pyar ko pi line do. Tumhare Baho me ullaj jane do. (Please let me drink the love filled in your eyes, let me get entangled in your hair). Everything need not be told explicitly. I can feel your love, but why could you feel mine Ishu.

Ishu is literally in tears; she slowly reciprocates to his hug and rests her head on his shoulders. He tries to see her bending down and she is hiding her face from him. He says Ishu what's there to be shy now. Iam your husband. I heard you speak to Mihika this morning. I was moved and angry also.

Ishu looks at him and asks angry?

R: Yes because you feel I still love her. Iam upset about it. Saying so he leaves her and turns around.

I: Iam sorry Raman. Please look at me na.

R: No, now you have done a mistake, you have to convince me.

I: What do you want me to do so that you will be convinced?

R: You know that Ishu, I don't leave without evening with anyone. I gave you something this morning. Iam yet to get back that.

I: What is it Raman? I didn't get you?

R: Don't act very innocent. I know you too well ok. Do you want me to shut you up like how I did the morning?

Ishitha is blushing and tries to escape from her Ravan kumar. But He is Mr Romantic Kumar today instantly turns around and holds her not letting her go.

Takes her into an embrace and looks at her. She tells him, thank you Raman for making me a complete women. You gave me the contentment of Motherhood, a family and last and the most important your love and companionship. I have been having these feeling from when I don't know but really had not mustered courage to tell you. Thanks for coming into my life and completing it.

R: Only Thanks you?

I: She smiles and tell what else do you want.

R: You feel complete now only, Iam yet to complete you. May I madam if you are done with your emotional Bhasan

I: Bhasan?

R: Hah Hah, Romance me bi tumhe Bhasan de sakthi ho. Bhashan ki Dukan, Bhasan Queen ( Your are the only one who can give lecture in Romance, Lecture shop)

They hug each other and feel happy and contented for being part of each other's life.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'm happy that Raman finally cleared everything and told Ishita that he loves her as well. Happy ending to a nice OS !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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another perfect story by u...loved readin all updates..u r undoubtedly one of my fav yhm story writers of this forum...!!

waitin for ur next story on ishra..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww... happyyy ending... awesum n amazingg update.. keep continuing. Eager to read more.. I am waiting for ur PM... thnkuu :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely story created by you, thanks for sharing it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww..so romantic and cutely ended dear😊😊 Esp loved Raman making Ishu the tubelite realize how much he loves her..😃..pls write more dear..i really loved this OS😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Read all three updates in one go !! Nicely written

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