OS: Zoor ka Jatka Part 3 - Page 4

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My OS on the current track
Part 1 - Below
Part 2- Page 3
Part 3 - Page 4
Part 1:
Ishitha is determined to get Mihir and Mihika united. We get to see a new by called Vibu entering the Iyer household and is being introduced as Mihika's fianc . Mihir is shocked and heart broken. So is Mihika, though she said she will move on but she was not prepared for one more relationship immediately. Raman also seams to be angry. Ishitha leaves after introducing Mihika to the guy so that they can have a detailed talk.

When Ishu enters their room, Raman pulls her in and closes the door. He confronts her for creating problems in Mihir's engagement in spite of the fact that he warned her.

Ishitha answers him back now, saying I didn't create any issue with Mihir's engagement. But wanted her sister also to settle down and leaves. Raman is very shocked to see her behavior and feeling bad for Mihir.

Mihir comes home when Ishitha is leaving to her paternal house. Mihir looks at her and doesn't say anything. Ishitha feels he is hurt. Mhir goes to meet Raman. They discuss for some time and leave to meet Tandon at ishitha's Place.

Vibu has left and Ishitha is enquiring about the guy to Mihika. Mihika is crying and says she cannot forget Mihir and not ready for this relationship. Ishitha asks her to explain saying she said she would move on and a marriage is good bond where people can move on from their past easily.

Now Mihika is left with no words without crying. Ishitha trys to tell her that Vibu is a very good guy, tamil Brahmin so she need not adjust in a Punjabi household with their non Veg smell and loud and rude behavior. She also tells that he may also take her aboard when he travels. She also tell he is very tall and handsome unlike Mihir.

Apparently all these conversation is being heard by Raman and Mihir who are standing outside the door( They came to meet tandon)

Now that was the limit. Now Mihika cannot take any more. She says Mihir is not like any Punjabi. He is very soft guy. That's why he doesn't say anything to jiju . Akka is it easy to forget your past. Your first love. You were in love with Subbu from the age of 15 years. Where you able to forget him. Even today you love him... that's why you don't have any relationship with jiju.

She stopped after saying that, she spilled out an important secret of her sister's l;ife which her parents didn't know.

Ishitha is looking at Mihika with a look of what have you said. Now Mr and Mrs Iyer are visibly upset and ask Ishu to explain. Now Ishu tells them that their relationship was only for Ruhi. They had decided this before their wedding only.

Saying so she says but and cries. Now Mihika is supporting her sister and Mrs Iyer is asking what is it she wanted to say. But it's not true that she still loves Subbu. She knows pretty well that Subbu is married to another women and she would not do such a thing even in her dreams.

Ishu adds saying she started of with a hearted in their relationship only for Ruhi. But she never realized when she became the DIL of the house, Bhabhi to her husband's sibllings. And at last she is also feeling that she is Raman's wife and long for his love. But Raman was always clear and all that he did for her was for Ruhi and not for love. She says that only held her from telling any of her feelings to him. I always feel pain of detachment when is away. I feel concerned when he gets hurt and I feel good when he compliments me. I feel jealous when he is with Shagun or any other women. All these are because of the love I have for Raman. I truly love him. But I cannot blame Raman for this because he was clear about his stands when we got married about the fact that I will always be Ruhi's mom and not his wife. Ishitha is full of tears and wipes her tears off.

She moves up to Mihika and tells her, my marriage didn't work because Raman didn't love me. But Vibu loves you; slowly you will also start loving him. Please get married to him. He is very good guy and will always keep you happy. Though Mihika is not fully convinced she assures Ishitha that she will think over this relationship.

Mihir who is listening to this is startled that Mihika also wants to move on and the very thought of losing Mihika is making him pained and feels as though ground below his leg is leaving way. Tears roll down his eyes. Raman notices it. He is pleasantly surprised by Ishu's feelings for him and also sad for Mihir, as he now realizes that Mihir is totally in love with Mihika on not anyone else.

Let me know if this has to be continued

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Breathtaking awesome'❤️ waiting for the nxt part! Update soon
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omg awesome 1st part...plz continue soon
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amazingly well written 😊
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Though I get a little irritated with the Mihir Mihika drama, this OS sounds nice with Raman finding out that Ishita does indeed have feelings for him. Do continue soon !!
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continue please..

by the way you r my favorite writer so talented mashallah
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Nice story line, love to read further
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Iam Back again with Part 2

Part 2 :

Mihir is very upset about the developments and Raman talks to him. He questions him

R: abbe tuu kyui etha feel hoo raha hai. Woh madrasin see abhi bi Pyar kartha hai kya. ( Why are u feeling so bad, are you in love with her_

M: Raman woh mai mai

R: Wow mai kya? Abhi bhi tujme bolne ki himmat nehi hai kya. Bewakoof, mane soccha agar mai tumhare shadi ki baat karunga tab tuu mujje sach batayega. Liken tu to sabse badda nikamma hai( Now also you dont have guts to tell me, i thought if I initiate your marriage talks at least you will tell me. You are such an idiot)

Raman asks him to go and talk to Mihika. Mihir & Raman go in and find Ishitha first. They say they want to talk to Mihika and Ishu asks why. Raman tells her

R: Are yar har chij me CBI enquiry karna jarruri hai kya, Pyar karthe hai ek dusre se, tumhe kya problem hai( You have to interrogate in everything or what, they love each other what's your problem)

I: Love, from when, till yesterday he was doing only what you wanted him to do, Now what happened suddenly.

Raman is irritated and signals Mihir to go and meet Mihika. Ishita is resisting and Raman drags her inside the room. Ishita is angry. Raman tries to explain her something but is in her Jhansi ki Rani mode. Raman is not able to control her talk and remembers what she spoke in the morning and moves towards her and pulls her from her waist and kisses her lips passionately.

Now Ishitha calms down and not looking at Raman. She is looking down. Raman is surprised that she is not saying anything like what she told when he proposed to her on the rainy day.

R: So Mrs Bhalla here is it, Trisha already has a boy friend. I wanted your Dever to open his mouth and tell me that he wants to marry Mihika, but he didn't. All that I was trying was to get him tell this. And you ppl are so foolish. You finalized Mihika's wedding with someone else. How can Mihir bear yar.

I: She is surprised, she tells but Mihika was most hurt in all this. That's why we wanted to kindle jealousy in Mihir so that he can open up. The guy who came is not the groom even Mihika doesn't know our plan. I guess it worked. She is smiling

R: Toh majra yeh hai, I am happy finally Mihir opened up. Those two make a gr8 Pair like us.

I: Like us? very puzzled. She slowly musters strength and asks him. Woh aap kya kar rahe the jab mai bol rahi thi? ( What wre you doing when I was talking)

R: You don't know, That's known as kiss, Subbu never gave you? Shagun had given me a lot. In the last seven years this is my first one though. He wants to tease her.

I: She is very upset because she heard Shagun and Raman feels he might have done all this with her boy friend, she tells I have never crossed my limits. This was the first one ever in my life. But why did you have to do it. See Raman I feel very bad when you do this.

Raman moves closer again towards her and she stops talking feeling frightened that he may do the same thing again

R: Why did you stop I was waiting for another opportunity. Why did you spoil it yaar. I promise you, I gave the first one. You deserve many more and will ensure that you get it.

Ishitha is getting nervous and Raman continues to move towards her. Ishitha hits the wall and unable to move now as Raman is blocking both the sides with his hand. He hugs her now and is about to kiss her. Ishitha closes her eyes and then we see Mihir and Mihika opening the door to say they have reconciled. All of them feel embarrassed seeing Raman and Ishitha's state.

Raman leaves Ishu now and Ishu opens her eyes with a feeling of disappointment. She sees Mihir and Mihika and feels embarrassed. Then Raman says Mihir and he will leave to the office now. Mihir and Mihika leave the room and as Raman leaves the room gets back to Ishu and tells I saw your disappointment don't worry will compensate it soon. He smirks and leaves. Ishu hits her head and says stupid Isu you expressed your desire to this Ravan kumar. he found it. But why was he behaving like that. She was flabbergasted.

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Awww...so cute and romantic❤️..pls write more😃
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