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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#191

The last lines take it all!! I lovee it!! Roller coster romance😳

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Fantastic roller coaster OS for a Sunday.

Awesome buddy. I am catching on all the others. U r a fab writer.⭐️

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#193

res 😳😳

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Oh wow Lucky this was so cool and really such a different fic to read... I honestly didn't see the amusement park visit coming up 😛 but this was so much fun!

And I loved loved how you have IshRa considering each other now before deciding on things - she wouldn't speak up because she didn't want to have him cornered because of her and he didn't because he couldn't pick where she stood on this ... awwie our tom and Jerry are so considerate of each other here and they don't even realize it ... loved how Raman was frustrated with himself and her for that 😆😆 poor guy

and then the actual ride OMG... so Ishu is scared of those things - cant say I blame her LOL though like I have said this often I somewhat am like Raman so I enjoy these rides myself, but have had the experience of sharing them with someone like Ishu... but not the experience they had 🤣

I cant believe you had them kiss on a ride!!! LIKE OMGG so didn't see that coming 😲 and Raman of course had to have the picture of the moment, I rem the bit where the policeman had told him he doesn't even keep a pic of his wife when she was arrested - this one though he would keep it safe and hidden with himself at all times😉

And the end 😲 did he actually say that ? and if he did why did you have to end it there? 😭😭 Oh man I wish there is a sequel... and one which has Ishu in action 😉

Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago

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creativeFF

@creativeFF

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#194

a big round of applause. wat a unique kiss. nyc to see ishita frightend now ramans got a pic to put in his wallet.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#195

awesome one-shots...👍🏼

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#196

This was a fun OS. I liked how Raman lied to Ishita that he too was scared of roller coasters just to make her feel a little better. It was so sweet that Raman secretly ended up buying the picture of them kissing in the roller coaster. This whole OS just made me smile !!

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ishra24

@ishra24

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#197

Amazing as always!!! You are doing such a great job. Please continue. I look forward to your PM everyday.😊

I just added two lines of my own in my head.

After Raman says this, Ishita blushes and that night Raman sleeps between Ruhi and Ishita, hugging both the ladies in his life 😊😊😊

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: creativeFF
a big round of applause. wat a unique kiss. nyc to see ishita frightend now ramans got a pic to put in his wallet.

Thank YOU 😊

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: ishra24
Amazing as always!!! You are doing such a great job. Please continue. I look forward to your PM everyday.😊
I just added two lines of my own in my head.

After Raman says this, Ishita blushes and that night Raman sleeps between Ruhi and Ishita, hugging both the ladies in his life 😊😊😊

Thanks 😊

and Nice addition...😉 YOu should write too...