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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

superb.U kept characters true to their role.Raman way of saying to come back was so like him.ishita can't keep her dentist instinct away even for a moment.

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modernfamily

@modernfamily

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

OK first of all the THE SONG. It is cut out for Raman Kumar Bhalla. The dialogues perfectly suited him. Loved the way he was teasing her.😊

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vidya29

@vidya29

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

God,That's brilliance! It was so damn cute,I couldn't stop smiling.It's now etched on my face and I'd be going out and washing clothes with that gleeful smile.If I get weird looks from friends,I am blaming you!😛

Absolutely well written.My favorite part was there conversation.Your Raman is adorable.Bas!

Actually,the entire thing was awesome.⭐️
This was your best,every little detail was so cute.
Thanks for bringing a smile on my face.I needed it.😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

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Lucky you took me seriously 😛😆😆 from sweet to sour in one OS- what a turn about 🤣 Haila 😲 you had mentioned about rectifying the situation soon but I didn't expect it to be this soon 😆 😆

sakkar se neem 🤣 - just as bitter if not more than the dreaded Karela (don't judge me I hate that vegetable!😆 )

this was so amazingly well written hats off to you for bringing back RKB with a bang and how, LMAO his caustic sense of humor is what makes me like him - if he turns saccharine sweet I would be so lost as to who is this guy so thanks for getting Raavan Kumar back 🤗 😆😆😆

And LMAO at RKB fearing Vandu 😲 🤣🤣 - never saw that coming I would die if they do have this on the show sometime and Bala oh that man is such a sweetheart if I had a sister I would want a jiju just like him! 😛 He is adorable and he figured out Raavan is scared of his wife too 🤣 🤣that is one smart man I tell ya, not to mention he has the heart of a lion to be able to marry Vandu - not a lot of men can take being the husband of a hellcat 😆😆 it takes a REAL man to accept a strong woman 😎

Plus :P Raman so knows her now 😆😆 smart, shrewd man he knew he won the war when she accepted his deal and was ready to be back - that was the tough part for him... now its her burden to keep quiet and keep her word 🤣

and the quote in the end - I have heard a lot of praise for North and South - I HAVE to pick up this book and fast! 🤓

Once again a fab read Lucky amazingly written my friend 😃

Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

omggg THE KARELA COUPLE..🤣🤣🤣...awesome lucky...n am glad tere story mein poor Raman babu ko chain mila as doctorni finally agreed to go with him on her so called Terms & Conditions..😆..

awesome OS..njoyed readin it..!! n thnx for the pm

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

That was fab! The whole exchange in the coffee shop was so sweet and really realistic. I love that song old fav!

Also the quote from North and South- it's one of my favourite books have read it so many times. My favourite quote is " one minute we talk of the colour of fruit, the next of love" it's one that actually always reminds me of yhm.

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: happenstance
That was fab! The whole exchange in the coffee shop was so sweet and really realistic. I love that song old fav!

Also the quote from North and South- it's one of my favourite books have read it so many times. My favourite quote is " one minute we talk of the colour of fruit, the next of love" it's one that actually always reminds me of yhm.

Thnx

U watched the BBC miniseries???

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BombayTroll

@BombayTroll

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Another good one

Keep writing

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Megher_Palok

@Megher_Palok

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Read d last 4 parts at one go ...SUPERB OUTSTANDING BRILLIANT...!! That's all I can say ...

Lucky ... what a marvelous writer you're .

& perfect song choice for every part.