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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: avni_19

reallyy amazinggg!!!! lovedd itt soo much... keepp continuingg.. eager to read moreee dear!!


Thanks for loving it so much...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: madhavimanish32

really amazing keep continuingg


Thanks a lot yaar...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Next part will be posted in a day or two...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please don't kill me with your comments after reading this part. Just see it as a imaginary story... This was essential for this ss... If this part doesn't meet your expectations, i apologise for the same... Ho gayi... Ab aapke saamne part 5...

Ishita was seen flaunting herself before Raman after reaching their house.

Ishita: Deal yaad hai na? Kal ja rahe hain hum...

Raman: Kal... U serious? Next week bhi ja sakte hain na...

Ishita: Look at Adi's face... Worry is already clouding his thoughts. I want to give him a nice day before he gets back to Shagun.

Raman: Teek hai...

Raman announced the same over the dinner table. They went nearby to be on time when Shagun comes to pick up Adi. Also, even if they delay by a minute, case can be filed on charges of contempt of court. Adi had the best day ever with his family... Though momentarily Shagun was disturbing him, Ishita took utmost care to see that he enjoys well. That day seemed very short to all of them... Adi was moving with everyone... He was laughing, playing, pulling other's legs, playing pranks on others... Raman saw his old Adi back...

Still, Raman saw Adi aging lesser than Ruhi. He was particular about staying by Ishita's side. He took Ishita with him everywhere. Occasionally, he was trying hard not to cry. He was troubled about the clock striking six. Raman was feeling helpless. He was angry with himself that he couldn't save Adi from Shagun's clutches. He saw that Ishita is equally troubled regarding the same. Finally, Ishita distracted Adi's attention and came near Raman.

Ishita: Mujhe kuch ajeeb lag raha hai... Adi ko zaroor bhejna hai??? Kuch bahana nahi bana sakte?

Raman: Kuch suna maine abhi abhi... Dr.Ishita ne yeh kaha??? Tum chahti ho ki hum kuch saazish kare?

Ishita: Adi ke takleef ke aage aur kuch important nahi hai Raman. Usko zara dekho...

Raman: I know. Hum doctor certificate produce kar sakte hain. But, we can't risk it this time Ishita. Pehli baar aisa kuch... Nahi yaar...

Ishita: I can understand... Main Adi ke pass chalti hoon.

Raman: Ek zaroori phone karna hain. Uske baad join karoonga...

They returned back at 5 p.m. From that moment, Adi was completely silent... Ishu went near Adi to console him. But, before she could say something, he hugged her and started crying...

Adi: Ma... Mujhe nahi jaana... Please mamma... Mat bhejo na... Mujhe Ruhi ki tarah aapke sath rehna hai... Please...

Ishita was on verge of tears with her hands caressing Adi...

Toshi: Puttar... Itti si baat ke liye kyon ro rahe ho? Agar tumhe Shagun ke naal nahi jaana hai tho mat jao... Mein bhi dekhti hoon ki koun mere puttar ko mujhse door le jaayega...

Raman: Ma... Please... Aap Adi ko console karne ke jagah aisi react karogi tho koun sambhalega... Agar humse galti ho gayi tho Adi kabhi humare pass vapas nahi aa sakta...

Ishita: Beta... Papa teek keh rahe hain... Agar hum aapko abhi nahi bheja toh badi musibat ho jayega... Just 2 days... 48 hours... Chutki mein chala jaayega...

Ruhi who was seeing all this ran inside to get something. She came with it near Adi.

Ruhi: Adi Bhaiya... Yeh shawl Ishima ne mujhe diya jab mein dari hui thi Ashok uncle ke ghar mein... Ab aap yeh rakh lo... Aapko bilkul darr nahi hoga...

Adi took that from Ruhi and kept it close to his heart...

At 5.15... Fully intoxicated Shagun was frantically searching for her car keys...

Servant: Madam... Driver ko le jayiye... Aap kal raat se pee rahe ho... Bahut risky hai...

Shagun: Chup kar... Mere bete ko mujhse door le jana chahte ho... Tum bhi Ishita ke team mein ho na? Get lost from my sight... She thought of calling Ishu but dropped that idea on giving a single ring...

She finally started driving towards Mayur Vihar...

Ishita packed Adi's things in a small bag to ensure that its indeed a very small trip to Adi...Madavi came there with a thread in her hand for Adi...

Madavi: En kanna... Onnum azha venda... Yeh thread main bandh deti hoon... Sab kuch teek hoga...Murugan tumhara khayal rakhega...

At 5.55 p.m.

Adi: Its just 5 minutes to 6 p.m. Main neeche ja raha hoon...

Ishita: Kya matlab beta? Hum sab tumhare saath ayenge na...

Adi: Nahi ma... Please... I'll be fine...

Raman gestured Ishita to let him go... He finally hugged everyone and left Bhalla house...

Ishu was uncomfortable about something. Something was troubling her. She decided to check Adi through balcony. But, Adi saw her and asked her to go in. Defeated, she went inside to take care of Ruhi's homework.

At 6.05 p.m. , Shagun dropped in to pick Adi...

Shagun: Mera bacha... Aa jao... Aa jao...

Adi sensed something different about her behavior but just brushed it off and got into the backside seat...

At 6.25 p.m., Ishita's phone rang... She didn't feel like picking the call... Her instinct was warning her about the eeriness of that call... Finally, she gathered courage and took that call... Ruhi who was with Ishita was petrified to see Ishita that way and ran to her father... Raman who came in saw a shocked, emotionless, Ishita on the floor. But for her feeble heartbeat, it would have been difficult to believe that she's alive. Raman saw the phone on the floor which is on hold. He took that call... By that time, Bhallas gathered around Ishu. Mr.Bhalla saw Raman giving similar reactions and asked him...

Mr.Bhalla: Koun hai phone pe? Kya kaha unhone?

Raman: Adi met with an accident...

Everyone of them were in hospital within the next 15 minutes... Raman started crying over Toshi's shoulders... Everyone there were praying for Adi's well being... Ishita was still not over that shock and she was mechanically doing things told to her... Finally, doctor came out...

Doctor: I am so sorry Mr.Bhalla. It was a heavy head injury. Lots of blood was lost on the way. He's calling out for his Ma and Papa... If you could be with him in his last moments...

What a heart wrenching moment it could be for parents to see their kid letting out his last breath... Raman was not sure even if Ishita heard any of his words... He even prayed god as to why shouldn't he be Ishita... He took her hand and she followed him obediently... The sight they had to see was the worst possible in the whole world... Their son was on the hospital bed... His small hands were connected to innumerable number of wires supporting his life... His right hand fist was covered from which a small piece of her shawl was dangling holding for its dear life like their son who was holding his breath to catch a last glimpse of his parents... In between all this, they saw a faint smile in his lips on seeing them... This is the moment... Ishita couldn't control anymore... She collapsed there and Raman had to pick her up to see their son for the last time... All that could escape from his mouth was Love u Ma aur Papa... With that, he let out his last breath...

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Posted: 11 years ago
its tragic why i am reading sad news n ss today
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dark.lig8

its tragic why i am reading sad news n ss today


As i said, it is needed... I am very very sorry about it... Sadly, it is needed...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ohhh Adi is dead...
so sad...

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Posted: 11 years ago
That's was soo good
I mean yes it was a sad scene but u wrote it with soo much detail
I was at the verge of tears
Just amazing writting
I wonder why u killed adi but will look forward to the next update
Update soon
And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
It just breaks my heart with each part, but I cannot stop reading at all.
Infact I repeat reading the chapters.
Adi...😭
That last Paragraph was heart-wrenching.
[I wanted to scream, "Adi, I love you" at that moment] 🥺
You depict their emotions so wonderfully that even the reader can feel the pain. 😭
Now, I'm going to go and cry until I feel content. 🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chathu

Ohhh Adi is dead...

so sad...


I know and i'm sorry about this twist... I had to do this... This was the big bomb i was afraid of dropping... Had to do it here...

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