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Part 4

Ishitha and Raman are in the Car. Mihir had also come down. Raman had called the driver as it might be late in the night when they return back. Ruhi wanted to occupy the window side so that she can have a look at whats happening outside. Ishitha and Raman were sitting next to each other.

Mr Naughty Bhalla wanted to do some mischief with his nicely decked wife. He notices Ruhi for a while and after feeling assured that she is not observing whats happening inside the car he slowly advances his hands towards Ishitha's waist. Ah shouted Ishitha. Mihir turned around and asked Bhabi kya hua. So was Ruhi also. Ishitha felt embarrassed and said nothing, had a small tipping pain in the stomach. She assured that she is ok. Raman is fuming in anger. He muttered to himself "Isse pyar karna be jung ladne ki jiya hai Janshi ki Rani kahi ki. (To love her is also like going for a war, Janshi ki Rani)"

He had really thought of having a gr8 time in the car. He was very upset. Now Ishitha is expecting his advances and he is silent. She thought he angry and mildly touched is hand and made signs of being sorry holding her ears. By the time Raman could do anything they reached the Venue.

The arrangements were so good. It was a gorgeous party and an excellent dance floor. Raman introduces Ishitha nd Ruhi to many people. Ranveer is also there. Shagun and Ashok just arrive. They get Abhi also with them. Ruhi and Adhi go join the kids. Shagun is feeling jealous at Ishitha looking so good. Raman left no opportunity to so his intimacy to his wife. He graciously spread his hand around Ishitha's waist. She was feeling uncomfortable but wanted to give Raman his due rights and kept quiet.

Now Ashok the bad man, is eyeing Ishitha. He tells Raman, tera effect hai kya Raman there bhiwi banthe hi logo mein gloumour aha jatha hai.( Is it your effect, your wives are always glamorous)

Raman: Teri gandi nazaar and Sooch tujhe Mubarak. Meri Pathni pe nazaar utake dekneki bi himat mat karna. Warna, mujje kuch karne ki jarrurat nahi, teriliye Wohi kaphi hai. ( To hell with your bad thoughts and eyes. Don't dare to look at my wife with any bad intentions. Otherwise , I need not do anything she is only sufficient for you)

Ashok: Did you tell your so loving wife that you spent a whole night with Shagun in the pretext of taking care of Adhi in Mumbai.

Raman is getting uncomfortable as he did not tell Ishitha and turned towards Ishitha.

Ishitha : Seeing his eyes understands and instantly responds. Raman never hides anything from me. He told me so you please don't worry about us. Please excuse us. Saying so she takes him and moves away from them. Shagun and Ashok are fuming in anger.

Raman: Ishu I wanted to tell you but missed telling you. Sorry.

Ishitha: Raman, I know Adhi is your weakness. You might not have been able to control yourself when you saw him in that situation. I can understand.

Raman: Ishu how can you understand me so well.

Ishitha: But Raman I want to know one thing, did you talk to me over the phone when you were in Shagun's room. To show her.

Raman: Smiling seeing her jealousy, Pagal Kabi toh apana bimag use karo. ( Stupid use your brain at least sometime). Mane saachi tumse baat karne ke liye phone kiya tha. Tumhare booth yad aa raha tha tumhe who green dress me dekne ke baad.( I called you up to talk to you only, I count hold myself from your thoughts after I left seeing you in that dress.)

Ishitha : Blushing , Saachi

Raman: Mucchi, trying to get closer to her. Ishitha tells she needs to check on Ruhi and shys away from Raman. Raman is irked and thinks "Bewakoof iske juban kaduvi hai yeh too pattta tha liken pyar ki itini kachi hai yeh nehi patha tha. Dentist kahi ki"( Idiot, I know her tongue is so bitter but she is so boring in love I dint know).

Raman meets his friend Ranveer and introduces him to Ishitha. Ranveer tells how Raman was appreciating Ishitha. He also tells how he was talking about he leaving alcohol for Ruhi and her.

Ishitha was delighted and blushing. She wanted to do something for him. She grabbed couple of roses for a vase and took Raman in Private. Raman was wondering why she is taking him alone.

She proposes to him Punjabi handing him over the roses " main tenno pyar karda hei " , Raman is moved by her sweet gesture. However Ishitha was very shy. He thinks she is very Romantic. I only assumed to otherwise.

Raman takes the roses from her and smiling. He moves closer to her and whispers in her ears " Nanum unai Kadalikiren" ( I love you in Tamil). Goes over his knees and hands over the Roses back to her.

Ishitha is stun and looking at him with lot of love and happily accepts the roses. Ruhi comes and says , lets go home. Iam feeling sleepy. They have a naughty smile and leave the party. Raman was throughly enjoying his ride back home as Ishitha was sitting with him in the back seat. This time she was not shouting and enjoying his mischief all through the journey. They had a free hand as Ruhi had already slept the moment they got into the car. Raman slowly said to her so I think you don't need time now. Seam to be very comfortable, juti ayishe hi bol rahi the na. ( Liar, you were telling just like that right) . She gave a cute smile and brushed his hand off which was on her shoulder and leans on his chest for the rest of the journey.

Edited by NithyaLaks - 11 years ago
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Part 5:

It's late in the night. Amma is worried as the three didn't return yet. She is worried thinking if Raman is drunk and Ishitha and Ruhi are in problem. Its 11.30 Pm and they return home. Amma is little upset with Raman for getting them back so late. They go inside. That's when Mihika call Jiju Jiju.

Raman : Yes Mihika.

Mihika: Tomorrow is akka's birthday

Raman: what, I didn't know at all. It would be gr8 if we can do some celebration at 12 AM. But its only 30 mins left.

Mihika: Jiju don't worry. I have done all the arrangements wanted to know if you would join.

Raman: Thanks Mihika, Can you please keep the door open, I will sneak in when your periamma is asleep. By the way, how come did you tell me? I thought you are my biggest rival in that house.

Mihika: Jiju aap kuch bi kehate ho. (You tell something), why will I consider you as my rival. Akka tells me everything. She told me that you guys patched up and she is silent for Periamma's sake.

Raman: Yeh Janshi ki Rani ne pool kol diya.( This Jhansi ki Rani reveled the secret) muttered Raman. I always thought wrong about you, I don't know why I considered not fit for Mihir. Iam sorry Mihika.

Mihika: Jiju, Iam not upset with you. Iam upset with Mihir for this. If he really cared for me he would have spoken to you. But he didn't. I think it's my mistake that I have loved him a lot and he has not to the extend I do. That's why he has moved on with Trisha. Saying so she cries.

Raman feels bad. He saya Mihika, I don't think he likes Trisha. But I want him to open his mouth and tell me, but who Gadha muh nehi koltha. (That Donkey doesn't open his mouth).

Mihika: Jiju Please Mihir ko Waise mat kaho. Who bohot ache hai. Apke samne kuch nehi keha sakthe.( Please don't tell Like that, he is very good. But he cannot say anything against you) I don't know why.

Raman: Did you ask him anything why?

Mihika: No, I feel he has a lot of gratitude for you that's you.

Raman : Ok. I will only talk to him and understand if he is serious about your relationship.

Mihika: Ok Jiju, But I want that to come from him not as force.

Raman: Ok I will go change and come, there is hardly 10 mins left. Can you please excuse us alone if you don't mind? You can sleep with Trisha and make Ruhi sleep with her Paati.

Mihika: Oh ho Jiju so romantic. Doesn't worry I will take care of the remaining stuff, have fun.

Mihir was going to stay back in Bhalla house. He came up after the driver had parked the car, He listened to the complete conversation of Raman and Mihika.

Its 11 55 Pm, Raman enters the iyer house like a thief. Mihika signals that a;; the things are fine and goes into her room.

Ishitha is in her room reminded of the time she had spent with Raman today, the way they proposed each other. She then thinks tomorrow is her birthday and if Raman would know or not. Will he wish her. Raman enters the room. She is in her usual night robe; Mihika ad decorated the room with florescent lights saying happy birthday. He silently switched the light off, Raman slowly moved ahead and by then its 12 AM. Slowly he moved towards her and silently whispers "Happy birthday" in her ears. She turns around. She is stunned to see Raman there. She also sees the lights. Raman slowly lights up all the candles in the room. He also gets the cake for her to cut it.

Ishitha is delighted. They cut the cake together. She feeds him the cake. He feed it back to her through his mouth. She is very shy about to leave the place in shyness. He holds her. Applies some cake on her cheeks. She smiles. He rubs her cheeks on hers, Now both their cheeks are full of cake. They smile looking at each other.

Raman amma will see us. Go home, please.

Raman: Pagal , tum ethini bhenji ho yar. Har romantic moment to karab karana hotha hai tumhe. (Mad lady, you are so boring, you spoil each and evry romantic moment) Go Iam very upset.

Ishitha: Please Raman, Don't tell like that. Iam sorry. Didn't want you to be scolded by amma.

Raman: What, you are my wife. How dare she scold me? I will tell about your appa's actress Rekha story she will keep quiet.

Ishitha laughs.

Raman: Ishitha, I have a gift for you on your birthday. I hope you will not refuse it.

Ishitha: Why will I Raman, for me your love is everything, whatever you give me is best for me.

Raman: I want to give you love only Ishitha. That's my gift for you. (Raman wanted be two bodies and a single soul today, she didn't seam to understand)

Ishitha: Thanks Raman, that's sufficient for me.

Raman: Ishitha, I think you didn't get what iam trying to say, he moved ahead to her saying so and gives her a kiss on her forehead.

Ishitha now understands his intensions and smiles. She is shy but doesn't resist Raman's advances.

When is trying to kiss her and trying to get closer to her , she starts to shiver again and her body grows clod.

Raman is perplexed. Ishu what happened what happened to you

Ishu is full of tears. She says Iam scared Raman. Iam reminded of that night's incident, please mujje choddo (leave me). I think we can never be one another. Every time you try to get close to me I feel impure, having been touched by that creep.

Raman feels his blood boiling. He is not able to see her sobbing. He takes her into a hug. Please Ishu, whatever happened, Santh ho javo( Clam down). He is not able to control her. He hugs her still tighter. She is feeling little comfortable in his arms. He says, you are the most pure lady in this world. You are a gr8 mother, wife, daughter and a DIL. You must feel proud of yourself and not feel bad about anything. You have an amazing fighting sprit, you fought against that creep and ensures that the creep gets the punishment for what he has done. You have stopped him from doing injustice to women any further. Iam proud of you. You are my super women, janshi ki Rani.

Tumhe jagadna, tane marna aur gussha karna is suit kartha hai. Roona to bikul nehi. Ruhi ko bi patha hai Ishima birthday ke din koi nehi Rotha.( Fighting, taunting and getting angry only suits you. Crying doesn't suit you at all. Even Ruhi knows we must not cry on our birthday)

Ishitha is not much better and feeling a lot relived. He is smiling at Raman's comment.

Seeing her disturbed, doesn't want to do any advances and tells her to sleep and gets ready to leave.

Ishitha: Raman Will you sleep here today. I will feel good.

Raman thinks probably she needs to be comforted and agrees. He is occupying the other side of the bed. They have candles around their bed, very romantic atmosphere. He wanted to hug her and sleep but little hesitant as they have not been used to so much closeness.

Ishitha: Raman Who aap mujje Kuch gift dena chahatethey( You wanted to give me a gift) , shall we. Saying so she closes her eyes very tightly.

Raman: Ishu my darling, Rabdi kane ki liye nyotha de rahi ho. Mana kiyse kar saktha hun( You are inviting me to eat Rabdi, how can I refuse) .

Ishu: Mai tooh Karela hun na( Iam bitter Goud according to you)

Raman: Abhi Karela ho ya Rabdi ajmane se hi patha chalega na.( Now you are bitter goud or Rabdi I can tell you only after tasting) Saying so he moves towards her and they have the most memorable, awaited night togather.And now both of them feel very complete and relish the fulfillment of their relationship.

They hug each other and sleep off.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww lovely updates(part-4 n 5)..!!
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Part 6 -

Raman had set an alarm for 5 AM so that he can leave before Mrs Iyers sees him. Its morning 4.45, but since Ishitha's birthday She had woken up early and wanted to go and see her daughter first. When she reached her room, She was astonished by the sight see saw. Raman and Ishitha were sleeping like a typical husband and wife, after having made love with each other.

She quickly got out of the room and was in tears. She was unable to understand the feeling see was having at point in time. Was she happy or sad she couldn't make out? Just then Alarm rang and Raman puts it off. Ishitha is also up by the sound. She is shy and Raman is teasing her. Raman wears his dress and doesn't give Ishitha's cloths to her.

Ishitha: Raman please kapde dijeye. Puri Raat to nehi diya, abhi toh dedo. Please amma abhi kabhi bi utt sakthe hai. (Please give me my dress, You didn't give me the whole night. Amma might get up anytime.) Please.

Raman: Hamhaare yehai, please bolne ka tarika alag hai. Kiss karke Please bolthe hai.( We say please in a different way Ishitha ,we Kiss and tell)

Ishitha: Ravan Kumar, please give me, You are standing on the otherside, how can I come without any dress.

Raman: Ishu, I love seeing you nude, that's why Iam calling u to kiss me.

Ishu: Chi Raman, you are so dirty and bad. Don't give me, I will take another one from my wardrobe. Ishitha who has wrapped herself in a bedsheet moves towards her wardrobe.

Quickly he moves to her side of the bed and tries to stop her

To Kal so hua Chi tha (So what happened last night was Chi), he hugs her tightly and asks her.

Ishu struggling to get away from him and but his grip is too tight for her to get away from him

Raman kisses her asks was it dirty. Ishitha smiles and says please Raman, Amma will get up now. Please go.

Raman: Ishitha, I don't know when your amma will agree to send you home, after whatever happened between us last night I don't think I will be able to live away from you.

Ishu: Even I don't know Raman. I also feel so complete and Iam longing to be with you. Shall I speak to amma?

Raman: No Ishu, she is right in her situation. You are her daughter and your dignity was at stake in our house. I took wows to protect you, but did not in the right time that you needed.

Ishitha: But Raman you didn't supported me in front of them because you wanted that creep to tell things from his own mouth. You told me immediately the same night right.

Raman: But amma doesn't know this. She must be feeling bad for you. After she is a mother. Don't worry time is the best healer. Untill then, chori chipe milinge( We will meet unknowing to everyone). Trust me, Iam enjoying it. He smiles and gives her dress back. Plants a kiss and leaves from there. Amma was hearing all this, She hides herself when Raman comes out. Raman carefully sneaks out after assuring himself that no one has seen him.

Amma I full of tears thinking the goodness of her daughter and son in law. She feels bad that her children are sacrificing there happiness for her sake. She decides to do something.

The day is Karva Chaut day. Iyer's home is all decorated because of Ishitha's Birthday and Raman's house is decorated because of Karva Chaut. Mrs Bhall is feeling bad that its Ishitha's first year and she is not with them. Ishitha hears this and calls Raman and expresses her interest to keep the fast. Raman is so happy that his wife loves him so much. He says she will have to eat sargi, first before sunrise and tells this has to be made by MIL. He says he will bring it for her. He brings and she eats it. Raman also plans to fast today. He doesn't tell anyone.

Amma decides to talk to Toshi , Toshi comes to Iyer's place after knowing its Ishitha's birthday.

She talks to Amma with lot of guilt and Amma tells her about the last night's incident. They both are very happy that their children have realized the worth of their relationship. By then Ishitha and Raman come back home after eating Sargi in the society garden.

Amma tells Ishitha to get ready to go to her Sasural. Raman is so delighted hearing this and comes running to Iyer's house.

He is all smiling and goes to amma and thanks her. He askes her how did you forgive us?

Amma teases him saying, I don't want my son in law to come and meet his wife like a thief in the midnight.

Ishitha and Raman feel embarrassed; Raman thinks Mihika must have told her. But Amma tells him how she saw them together in the morning and heard their conversation. Ishitha and Raman are blushing and shy.

Amma offers Rasam to Raman and he refuses to take, Toshi offers Pede to Ishitha for her Birthday and she also refuses. Both mothers are giving a confused look only to learn that they are fasting for each other on Karva Chut day.

Both the mothers feel very happy and encourage them to have a loveable bond with each other for rest of life. Ishitha does her grahapravesh with Raman and Ruhi again. They feel very happy and delighted looking forward for a great life ahead. Evening the socity is having a get together for the Completing the Vrat by the ladies. Raman and Ishitha complet their fast and have a hug with Ruhi.

Mihir is found convincing Mihika to get married to her. Trishsa is also helping Mihir. Looks like he told her about his love storey and Trisha assured that she will convince Raman and wished them luck. Mihika also seam to be reconciled but just pulling his Leg.

Raman , Ishu and Ruhi are found to be taking a family picture and looking forward for a gr8 lovable life ahead.

The END
Edited by NithyaLaks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG. People you NEED to.read this..


mashallah such a talented writer you are
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amzinglyyy written...it was so so so PERFECT ...loved the chori chipe romance 😆😆😆...loved all the parts...u r a natural writer dear
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Awesome awww so cute lovely story
Edited by maaneetkimeet - 11 years ago
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omggg Nithya PERFECT PERFECT ending..!! i LOVED LOVED readin evry update of this FF...u r a wonderful writer..!! i could very well imagine evry scene..!!

plz write more on IshRa..!!

as of nw thnx so much for this beautiful ff..🤗🤗🤗
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i read all parts together i loved its heavenly romantic specially 4,5 parts last part is awesome
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i read all parts last part is awesome

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