ISHRA's 'Suhag Raat' ~~ FF [Part 3 Updated On Page 9]. - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Just now read all the three updates at one go n i am literaly amazed😛
U r a briliant briliant writer dear👏👏.. u have written it so very beautifully...
Looking forward for next update😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Again you've given a good build up to what's ahead. Personally I don't mind if you post 18+ stuff here as I've seen it in many forums before. You've done your part by giving viewer's discretion in the beginning of the update, the rest is up to them if they want to continue or not.
If you do decide not to post it up, then you can PM me like what you've mentioned in your post.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
First maafi Shiva for the lateness.. had exams 🤓
Anyway coming to your FF... what build up!!
Such detail and also to add emotions too ..impressive
This is why I say this is your forte, so it is your duty to continue 😆
Will wait for last part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Exellent FF Dear!Pls continue soon & pm Me!& Pls can U send Me a friend request?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
OMGGG!!!!
Super hot story!!!
Loving it!!!!
Very well written!!!
Looking forward to your next update!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
omg its beautifully written & so HOT !!☺️❤️
I could really picture IshRa here😳
do continue soon 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
When are you updating the next part? :) I'm sure IshRa must be getting bored by now 😆 Ah, such desperate people we are!
Jokes apart, I can't remember if I commented earlier but i'm liking your FF a lot!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
SHEMURR?? iisuperwomanii Fan here 😃

I LOVED what you wrote and PM me please!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: ForbbidenLove

Author's Note;
This "FF-Fan Fiction" as the name states is a 'Fiction' therefore All characters appearing in this story are fictitious. Any resemblance to people living or dead is purely coincidental. This FF contains 'Mature Content' reader discretion advised due to sexual situations.

Do Take Note:
>> Pink for 'Ishita'
>> Blue for 'Raman'
>> Whatever this colour is called,LOL is for the 'Narration'

>> There is a Message at the end of this update, please don't forget to read and respond. Thank you guys so much.

Suhag Raat ~~ First Night
[Part Three - PreClimax]


Without taking his eyes off her, his hands move beneath the waistband, skimming her and moving to her behind. Raman's hands glide slowly down her backside to her thighs. Though Ishita was blushing inside-out, she couldn't look away. He lifts her foot by the heel and runs his thumbnail up her instep. The pain is there BUT Ishita can feel the movement echoed in her groin. Ishita raises herself up using her elbows to see what he was doing. Not breaking the eye contact, Raman slowly starts to run his tongue along her instep and then his teeth. She groans, wondering how does she feel this THERE.

"Ishu..." "mmm" "Ishu...", "MMM", "Oh, Ishu, what I could do to you," he whispers. "mmm" "I'm not asking you for your permission, there's no need to mmm." "mmm" "Ennoda Jhansi Ki Rani, haha My SMILE is RESERVED for you because you're the only one who can make me SMILE. Especially at a time like this." "AND apparently I'm the one who speaks a lot. RavanaKumar, that's my department can you like just focus on yours." she teases with a smirk on her face. "ACHA. It's PERSONAL now." he retorts back.

He leans down over her, grasping both of her ankles, and jerks her legs apart and crawls onto the bed between her legs. He starts by kissing the inside of her thigh, trailing kisses up her belly and his tongue dips into her navel. Ishita's skin is BURNING. She's all flushed, too HOT, too COLD and she claws the sheet beneath her. He lies down beside her and his hands trails up from her hip, to her waist, and up to her Brea*t. He gazes down a her, his expression unreadable, and gently cups her brea*t. He dips his index finger into the cup of her bra and gently yanks it down, freeing her brea*t BUT the underwire and fabric of the cup force it upward. "Let's go Baby," he murmurs.

Message: This is NOT the full update and it's the pre-climax because, I truly want to know if you guys want me to go ahead. Because I can ASSURE you, the CLIMAX is nothing like you would have ever imagined. So since this is a public forum, I would like to take into consideration about what everyone feels. If MAJORITY of you guys are OK with it. I will update the FINAL part shortly if NOT I will just PM those of you who are interested to read the last part. This way it's a WIN-WIN situation for all. So guys, please let me know what you all want?

AND why am I asking you guys this question because, few days ago I received this NONSENSICAL BRAINLESS message. This person PMed me, telling me how nicely I have wrote this FF and than told stupid things like, I am able to write something like this because I have experience and stuff... I was like, What the SHEMURR?🤔 Firstly I would like to let THAT person and whoever else has this LAME ass doubt know that, I'm STILL a VIRGIN... IN YOUR FACE BI*CH... Just because I am able to write about Sex doesn't mean that I have done that. W*F What a JOKE... I STRONGLY BELIEVE in SEX after MARRIAGE. Deep down I still hold certainTraditions & Values CLOSE to My HEART...I'm like a 70s person when it comes to such things. In fact I am opting for an Arranged Marriage, I find that more thrilling though my parents are against it.LOL Weird parents, I know... I'm 21 going on to 22 in another 3 more months so I am perfectly age wise suited to write something like that, I'm NOT underage or anything. I LOVE reading books, it's a habit My parents cultivated, when I was just 3 years old. My FAV author is Nicholas Sparks. BUT I love books in general and BOOKS are like my DRUGS thus I read ALL kinds of books EVEN boring autobiographies. Can I get a AMEN people... That sort of explains my writing skills, reading enables you to write well. I also get my inspirations from them. AND naturally I'm a CHATTER cum LETTER BOX, love talking & writing, THAT explains my LONG ass posts in the forum.LOL I accidentally deleted the person's message, I actually had typed out LONG reply[knowing me] but UNFORTUNATELY the person escaped the PM got deleted and I don't remember their username. So if you are seeing this now? I hope you KNOCK some SENSE into YOUR pea sized BRAIN. Thank you VERY much. PEACE OUT!

P.S. Hope you all enjoyed the 3rd part Pre-Climax of ISHRA's Suhag Raat. Don't forget to leave your likes and valuable comments [Criticisms] are Most Welcomed as well. 👍🏼 Love you guys.

hi dear...awsme material u have written 👏👏nd u should not be concerned over these useless messages...if u continue it here,thts gud otherwise pm me...lots of luvvv
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
This is AWESOME! I get to see indian version of Christan Grey LOL and Raman is perfect for the role. Looking forward to your next part!
omg imagine if Karan Patel reads this story!

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