ISHRA's 'Suhag Raat' ~~ FF [Part 3 Updated On Page 9].

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Neema

@neemalst

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

uff , ISHRA. they were too hot.

😳 am blushing ear to ear

its too hot. wow

ram n naughty conversation.

and the way raman style.. is awesome.

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Author's Note;

This "FF-Fan Fiction" as the name states is a 'Fiction' therefore All characters appearing in this story are fictitious. Any resemblance to people living or dead is purely coincidental. This FF contains 'Mature Content' reader discretion advised due to sexual situations.

Do Take Note:

>> Pink for 'Ishita'

>> Blue for 'Raman'

>> Whatever this colour is called,LOL is for the 'Narration'

>> There is a Message at the end of this update, please don't forget to read and respond. Thank you guys so much.

Suhag Raat ~~ First Night

[Part Three - PreClimax]

Without taking his eyes off her, his hands move beneath the waistband, skimming her and moving to her behind. Raman's hands glide slowly down her backside to her thighs. Though Ishita was blushing inside-out, she couldn't look away. He lifts her foot by the heel and runs his thumbnail up her instep. The pain is there BUT Ishita can feel the movement echoed in her groin. Ishita raises herself up using her elbows to see what he was doing. Not breaking the eye contact, Raman slowly starts to run his tongue along her instep and then his teeth. She groans, wondering how does she feel this THERE.

"Ishu..." "mmm" "Ishu...", "MMM", "Oh, Ishu, what I could do to you," he whispers. "mmm" "I'm not asking you for your permission, there's no need to mmm." "mmm" "Ennoda Jhansi Ki Rani, haha My SMILE is RESERVED for you because you're the only one who can make me SMILE. Especially at a time like this." "AND apparently I'm the one who speaks a lot. RavanaKumar, that's my department can you like just focus on yours." she teases with a smirk on her face. "ACHA. It's PERSONAL now." he retorts back.

He leans down over her, grasping both of her ankles, and jerks her legs apart and crawls onto the bed between her legs. He starts by kissing the inside of her thigh, trailing kisses up her belly and his tongue dips into her navel. Ishita's skin is BURNING. She's all flushed, too HOT, too COLD and she claws the sheet beneath her. He lies down beside her and his hands trails up from her hip, to her waist, and up to her Brea*t. He gazes down a her, his expression unreadable, and gently cups her brea*t. He dips his index finger into the cup of her bra and gently yanks it down, freeing her brea*t BUT the underwire and fabric of the cup force it upward. "Let's go Baby," he murmurs.

Message: This is NOT the full update and it's the pre-climax because, I truly want to know if you guys want me to go ahead. Because I can ASSURE you, the CLIMAX is nothing like you would have ever imagined. So since this is a public forum, I would like to take into consideration about what everyone feels. If MAJORITY of you guys are OK with it. I will update the FINAL part shortly if NOT I will just PM those of you who are interested to read the last part. This way it's a WIN-WIN situation for all. So guys, please let me know what you all want?

AND why am I asking you guys this question because, few days ago I received this NONSENSICAL BRAINLESS message. This person PMed me, telling me how nicely I have wrote this FF and than told stupid things like, I am able to write something like this because I have experience and stuff... I was like, What the SHEMURR?🤔 Firstly I would like to let THAT person and whoever else has this LAME ass doubt know that, I'm STILL a VIRGIN... IN YOUR FACE BI*CH... Just because I am able to write about Sex doesn't mean that I have done that. W*F What a JOKE... I STRONGLY BELIEVE in SEX after MARRIAGE. Deep down I still hold certainTraditions & Values CLOSE to My HEART...I'm like a 70s person when it comes to such things. In fact I am opting for an Arranged Marriage, I find that more thrilling though my parents are against it.LOL Weird parents, I know... I'm 21 going on to 22 in another 3 more months so I am perfectly age wise suited to write something like that, I'm NOT underage or anything. I LOVE reading books, it's a habit My parents cultivated, when I was just 3 years old. My FAV author is Nicholas Sparks. BUT I love books in general and BOOKS are like my DRUGS thus I read ALL kinds of books EVEN boring autobiographies. Can I get a AMEN people... That sort of explains my writing skills, reading enables you to write well. I also get my inspirations from them. AND naturally I'm a CHATTER cum LETTER BOX, love talking & writing, THAT explains my LONG ass posts in the forum.LOL I accidentally deleted the person's message, I actually had typed out LONG reply[knowing me] but UNFORTUNATELY the person escaped the PM got deleted and I don't remember their username. So if you are seeing this now? I hope you KNOCK some SENSE into YOUR pea sized BRAIN. Thank you VERY much. PEACE OUT!

P.S. Hope you all enjoyed the 3rd part Pre-Climax of ISHRA's Suhag Raat. Don't forget to leave your likes and valuable comments [Criticisms] are Most Welcomed as well. 👍🏼 Love you guys.

Edited by ForbbidenLove - 11 years ago

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Neema

@neemalst

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Awesome .. i came first.. yupiee..

well coming to the update.

Boss that was hot.

uff what is this pre climax and climax in 2 parts

HMM,

to the message. U write fabulous.

i'd say it is much difficult to imagine and write.

I'd like to read climax. am 18+ so i'd love to read.

don't mind people who discourage. see those who love to read romance of ISRA> like me.

Edited by neemalst - 11 years ago

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

omfggg shivu...HOW DO U DO IT woman?😲😲😆😆☺️☺️☺️...

i ws ONLY n ONLY lik this thru out readin this update->☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

i literally felt lik i'm shamelessly seein their "it" video of IshRa..😆😆😆...hw much detail...uff hot hot very passionate update...!!

i cant evn imagine hw will i be with climax update..i guess tht day i willb LITERALLY SILENT..😆😆..

btw let tht person go to hell...😡😡...hw dare she talk to u lik this?n wht a brainless logic...agar aise hai toh tv pe jo actors karte hai WOH BHI TOH REAL honi chahiye as per her "logic"..😆😆

u post ur update man...ONLY if MODS of this forum say dnt..then only u hv to pay attention..or else u dnt need to giv a damn abt nyone..

PROUD OF U MY BGD...🤗🤗🤗

Edited by Nikki_Titli - 11 years ago

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Meera

@MeeraHK

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

shivoo pl strat soon..

we need this for this complete week as tonic..

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Soul_Stirrer

@Soul_Stirrer

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Well dear, So FIFTY SHADES OF RAMAN 😉 the part is almost similar to fifty shades track but love it. And of course our ISHU IS A DOMINANT 😆

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: neemalst
Awesome .. i came first.. yupiee..

well coming to the update.

Boss that was hot.
uff what is this pre climax and climax in 2 parts
HMM,

to the message. U write fabulous.
i'd say it is much difficult to imagine and write.
I'd like to read climax. am 18+ so i'd love to read.

don't mind people who discourage. see those who love to read romance of ISRA> like me.

Thank you so much... I'm glad you liked it.😊

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli
omfggg shivu...HOW DO U DO IT woman?☺️...

i ws ONLY n ONLY lik this thru out readin this update->☺️

i literally felt lik i'm shamelessly seein their "it" video of IshRa..😆😆😆...hw much detail...uff hot hot very passionate update...!!

i cant evn imagine hw will i be with climax update..i guess tht day i willb LITERALLY SILENT..😆😆..

btw let tht person go to hell...😡😡...hw dare she talk to u lik this?n wht a brainless logic...agar aise hai toh tv pe jo actors karte hai WOH BHI TOH REAL honi chahiye as per her "logic"..😆😆

u post ur update man...ONLY if MODS of this forum say dnt..then only u hv to pay attention..or else u dnt need to giv a damn abt nyone..

PROUD OF U MY BGD...🤗🤗🤗

Awww, Nikki thank you so much darling.🤗 🤗 🤗 HAHAHAHAHAHA, DO IT, LOL it cracked me up... EXACTLY, I really wanted to thappad her face... She better thank her stars she escaped my long ass reply to her... My reply itself would have been a thappad on her face... OK... so it's ONLY the mods I need to worry about, that means I shall just ignore such BRAINLESS Messages in the future... BGDs now&forever...❤️

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Shivapakiam ~ [Shiva]

@ForbbidenLove

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: ishra496
Well dear, So FIFTY SHADES OF RAMAN 😉 the part is almost similar to fifty shades track but love it. And of course our ISHU IS A DOMINANT 😆

Please TELL me you LOVE Christian Grey☺️, pretty please...😳 HAHAHAHHAHA...😉 I read that like 2 years ago AND Oh Boy Christian Grey NEVER left my mind since then...☺️ Christian sort of reminds me a little of Raman when it comes to being DOMINANT...HAHAHAHHAHA & Yes my inspiration does come from there BUT as for Raman it's not 50 it's 100 SHADES OF RAMAN🤣 AND like you said ISHU is a DOMINANT one too. Which takes the story to a whole NEW LEVEL.😉

Edited by ForbbidenLove - 11 years ago