A few years from now (SS) - COMPLETE - Page 5

That was nice.I really loved how Ruhi and Shravan bond has grown into this beautiful friendhip you portrayed.Also,I loved Ishitha and Shravan Chitti-nephew jodi.They are so adorable!
Shravan is a mini-Bala for your mini-Ishitha,that's what i felt after reading how he tackled ruhi.
I would've loved it more if the end was a wee bit longer,cause it felt abrupt.But I guess your point was right in a sense cause Raman is a man of actions and taunts,not declarations of love.His declaration of his love was perfect to his character.Just wanted to see Ishu's reaction to his confession and a proper closure to this story.
But no problem.You could write a follow-up SS on this!😉

Loved this one!Would love to read more as brilliant ones as this.😊

Originally posted by: vidya29

That was nice.I really loved how Ruhi and Shravan bond has grown into this beautiful friendhip you portrayed.Also,I loved Ishitha and Shravan Chitti-nephew jodi.They are so adorable!
Shravan is a mini-Bala for your mini-Ishitha,that's what i felt after reading how he tackled ruhi.
I would've loved it more if the end was a wee bit longer,cause it felt abrupt.But I guess your point was right in a sense cause Raman is a man of actions and taunts,not declarations of love.His declaration of his love was perfect to his character.Just wanted to see Ishu's reaction to his confession and a proper closure to this story.
But no problem.You could write a follow-up SS on this!😉

Loved this one!Would love to read more as brilliant ones as this.😊

Hey thanks!

I wrote a different ending, with a bit more romance, but that sounded way cheesier, and I couldnt imagine Raman or Ishita saying/doing those things 😆

Gorgeous, absolutely gorgeous 👏 i have read it twice. With the way the show is going we might have to wait for ruhi to become teenager before we get a confession from either of them 😳

Originally posted by: uamaz

Gorgeous, absolutely gorgeous 👏 i have read it twice. With the way the show is going we might have to wait for ruhi to become teenager before we get a confession from either of them 😳

thanks😊

So true... we need some IshRa romance sooon...😆

OMG totally amazing. Loved the ending! Looking forward to more SSs from you 😊

What a beautifully written story, and I loved reading every moment of it. Thank you so much for sharing it with us, and thank you for the PMs as well. 😊

ruhi turned out to be really beautiful person.I loved shravan n ruhi.wat to say abut ishra?they were as always awesome n raman's last dailogue was cherry onthe top
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Wow this whole short story was BRILLIANT! You write so well.. and I love how you made the bond between Ruhi and Shravan even stronger this was so realistic! And the ending was fab! totally spot on! I hope that's how they confess their love on the show as well :) You need to write more stuff! I'll be waiting eagerly to read more from you! :D

Seriously who are you? I had tears in my eyes. It was the best SS I have ever read. Damn good. Felt like I was watching a movie and the end just brought a smile to my face.

This was so beautiful... Raman and Ishita in there characters . Ishita can't keep anything inside just speak out about her feelings and still ready to accept the fact that time has come to let his love free and Raman as a usual witty perfect in one liners said it all in his one line . 👏👏