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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Your story was so simple,yet heart touching. The last line was fantastic! I loved it!😆😃

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

a beautiful matured story,, but a little upset about the ending paragraph.. there cud hv been a small light moment betwen ISHRA, a cute hug or a word "Soorryy" for all that happened initially... a nd thn I LOVE U would be perfect!!! but stilll thts just my viewpoint...

othr than this, evrythnggg was sooo perfecttt!!! i loved it soo much.. i hv nt read such a story in this forum...

keep continuinggg... i wud appreciate you if u write more stories!! u r fabulous as a writer!!! Goodluck dear!!!

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

but stilll i loved ur way of ending the convo between ISHRA!!! perfect!!! :D :D

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: avni_19
but stilll i loved ur way of ending the convo between ISHRA!!! perfect!!! :D :D

Thanks dear.
I wasnt sure if I wanted to make the last part longer.

Also, the ending was correct (In my mind), because I couldnt imagine Raman or Ishita doing much more. I am blaming the scarcity of Ishra scenes in the serial for my lack of imagination 😆

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Such a perfect ending to this beautiful story...loved loved loved the mature way of handeling things...no drama..no OTT reactions...its life..and people behave like this in real life...loved Ishiita's painful confession ..her unfulfilled desires and Raman's straightforward simple and witty reply...i could totally visualize IshRa saying those lines and confessing their feelings...

AMAZING try for a 1st timer ..plz do write more..u r such a natural writer and u hv unique style of writing 👏

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

wow!

I am out of words... I need to hire Ishita's dialogue writer 😆

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Lucky

@alwaysaTVFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: AditiDoc
That was incredibly cute!!

Thank you 😊

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Sandisha Drepaul

@disha93

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Fantastic update!!!
LOved the way Raman and Ishita confessed their feelings for each other!!!
Brilliant work dear!!!! 👏

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eternalasha

@eternalasha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Wow, wow... So so well written and alive.

There wasn't a single thing I didn't like except that there wasn't another part 😃

I absolutely loved Shravan in your SS

Edited by eternalasha - 11 years ago

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

This was so beautiful and I loved two bits especially in the last part - the mango bit which was so incredible and of course the end - such a Raman thing to say - I would have simply said I love you and the reply would have been I love you too

Who needs poetry and wooing if simple words can make your heart skip a beat ☺️

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