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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Guys,
This is a one shot based on Ruhi making Raman and Ishita sleep on the same bed. We have always seen how Raman gets close to Ishita to show others or to solve some purpose of his. He got close to her at Holi Party and then hugged her for Ruhi. In this OS, I want to portray Ishita getting close to Raman. Hope you guys like it.

The Scene

It continues after where Ruhi asked them to hold hands and sleep on the bed.

Raman woke up in the morning with a crick in his neck. His head was at an odd angle and he was wondering why he is sleeping in this odd manner. A huge smile appeared on his face when he realized the reason why? Ruhi was sleeping half on him with her one leg and one arm on him. Her head was nestling between his arm and body. He was so happy to see Ruhi snuggled so close to him. He thought to himself, " Ruhi k saath in khushiyon k liye toh main jeeta hun."

In his happiness to see Ruhi sleeping so peacefully against him, he did not notice the full posture he is in. Only when he tried to move his other hand which was not under Ruhi he realized why his neck was at such an odd angle.

Ishita was sleeping peacefully with her head on his chest and her one hand around his waist. It seems sometime in the night Ruhi who was sleeping between them had shifted herself and rolled onto Raman's other side. Consequently, he was sandwiched between Ruhi and Ishita.

Initially, Raman got really pissed looking at Ishita as he could not even move. He thought, " yeh Jhansi ki Rani toh mujhe bistaar samjhke phel gayee. Aur kitni moti aur bhari hai. Iske weight k neeche toh dabke main mar jaunga. Neend main bhi mujhe tang karne k tareeke aate hai isse"

Both Ishita and Ruhi continued to sleep peacefully. Raman realized he has no option but to lie down till one of them wakes up. He did not want to disturb Ruhi and if he tried waking Ishita, Ruhi would also definitely get up.

He looks at Ishita again and thinks, " Neend main sote huye kitni acchi lagti hai, jaise ki koi pari ho. Iska mooh band rehta hai toh kitna sukun milta hai. Aise chup rahe toh kisi ko bhi isse pyaar ho jayen."

And then Raman instead of being angry, smiles a little and starts thinking how beautiful Ishita actually is. He was observing her and smiling to himself. Just then Ishita's phone rang. Ishita moves her hand in her sleep and picks it up in a sleepy voice.

She says, "hello, Bala jiju I'll call you back in a bit. Main soke nahi uthi ab. Bye." and she disconnects the call and keeps the phone down.

Raman, "soke nahi uthi toh ab uth jao madam."

Ishita opens her eyes and is shocked to see Raman's face so close to her. She realizes that she had been sleeping with her head on Raman's chest. She quickly gets up and blushes.

Raman, "Tum madrasi log pagal hote ho kya. Kal toh bada lecture de rahi thi. Aap mujhse distance maitain kijiye aur ab mujhe bistar samjh k phel gayee. Dimaag kharab hai kya tumhara."

Ishita is about to give a mean retort when Ruhi wakes up due to Raman's voice. She screams "Ishimaa". Ishita closes her mouth and instead says, "Good Morning Ruhi, chalo jaldi brush karne chalein."

She quickly gets off the bed. She looks up at Raman, blushes and whispers a sorry so that Ruhi does not see it. She goes out of the room with Ruhi.

Raman smirks at her and though he cannot explain it, he is actually feeling happy.

Guys let me know if you liked it.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Too good! Raman's dialogues were hilarious! "Neend mein bhi mujhe pareshaan karne ke tareeke aate hain ise".!! 😆
Mr.Raman Kumar Bhalla aur unke preconceived notions! Kuch hi dino' ki baat hai Mr.Bhalla, fir aap khud aise sona chahoge! :P
Really well written. Do write more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow yaar too good.
CVS could ve taken tips from u.
without disturbig their track they could ve taken this one in between . really loved it.
we r so influenced with RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA. The way u ve written his dialogue i can imagine karan saying them. really fantastic
we are so hopelessly romantic
pls pls continue

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great job! Raman was so sweet thinking about how Ishita looks when sleeping.
Looking forward to more stories! Please PM me when you write more 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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tat was osm...kaash aiasse hothe ..yhm par
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow . Nice OS ..Loved it
Raman's dialogues are awesome...want to see this in the show😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww this is such a beautiful OS..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much guys!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am a big fan of your os and ss! Loved it :) Thanks for the PM and keep writing n don't forget to PM! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was amazing! Loved how you captured the essence of their characters especially Raman's dialogues😊

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