Os IshRa (Ishita & Raman) - Gunja Sa hai koi Iktara!! - Page 4

Originally posted by: Ketaki19

best di... loved it

Thanks Ketu.. glad you read it and liked it :D

Originally posted by: re123

res

Heyya Re. oky I m waiting fr ur comment (im)patientley 😛 😉

Originally posted by: loveabletwinz

<font color="#0066ff">NAMYYY!!!</font>

<font color="#0066ff">we LOVED reading your OS! It was so relate-able and we could totally imagine this back and forth banter between Ishita and Raman.</font>

<font color="#0066ff">The way you describe the tension and argument between Raman and Ishita was perfect!!! The anger and hurt was so palpable through the lines.</font>

<font color="#0066ff">Some of my favorite lines you wrote ---</font>

<font color="#00cc33">"Heard Adi's' name from her mouth, Raman's throat ached with the need to roar"</font>

<font color="#00cc33">"Pain wrestled with anger as he continued"</font>

<font color="#00cc33">"He saw shattering tenderness in her eyes.. She noticed dark anger mingled with pain in his gaze"</font><font color="#0066ff"> --- OH this line was awesome!!! love the contrast of emotions you show in these two.</font>

<font color="#0066ff">loved the scene where you wrote about Raman calling Ishita "Ishu" and how he calls Aditya "Adi". That was such a perfect comparison because it allowed Ishita to see how hurt Raman was :(</font>

<font color="#00cc33">"She fought the urge to wipe tears from his face, to pat his chest where it ached, to soothe his pain."</font><font color="#0066ff"> - AHH! This is beautiful!! love this line! I am sorry, we are suckers for little details, and the lines you write are so beautiful, and filled with so much angst that it makes us ache for Raman here!! You actually, honestly, had us in tears...these lines are so tender, and so beautiful, but the force to you to really feel the kind of emotions Raman is going through! SO beautiful!!</font>

<font color="#0066ff">Awww the end was fantastic!!!!!!! Raman, helpless, but hopefull that Ishita wouldn't leave him!!</font><font color="#0066ff">LOVED your OS!! Please do write more often on ISHRA. we aresorry for picking out all the little lines...we really do love details in a story and you did them so well!</font>

Aahaa AneJan The super Twinie' You made my day with your deliciously detailed (Colourful) comment!! I absolutely loved your detailed comment.. You need to take back Sorry' that you used more than once.. Thanks for your deliciously detailed comments.. I am sucker for long detailed comments.. Believe it serves an inspiration to me to write more..

I had a great time writing it.. Glad you enjoyed reading it.. I feel CVs need to justify Raman's dreaded behavior with Ishita in the last week.. Rama is a complex character and his emotions runs deep..Whereas Ishita is professional & responsible & admirable woman.. And I feel Raman needs to acknowledge these qualities.. I feel it's a high time for Raman to apologize to Ishita for his dreaded Behavior.. And I also want Ishita to understand the real reason behind his arrogant & rude behavior... She needs to see how his ex wife & his ex boss have butchered his self respect.. More than one occasion.. Shagun's betrayal has shattered the delicate heart of this man.. Ishita needs to know about all this.. She needs to understand the betrayal that he has faced, the wound that he has got.. are still fresh and aren't healed.. Ashok- Shagun aren't letting him forget or forgive the humiliation he has suffered in the past.. Ishita needs to delve into and comprehend the pain he is harboring inside from so long..

So elated to know you managed to get to very depth which I truly meant to convey.. It feels good to know that I succeeded in that aspect.. Thos dialogues are my favs too..Thanks fr touching' comment .. All I want to say is I ll always wait to read your long detailed comment for every future update I may come up.. Thanks for your encouragement..

Originally posted by: Silsha

Wow baby,, its wonderful OS!!!
grt job..😃
KEEP WRTNG!!!😳
Btw nami darling, u hve never said tat u r a amazing wrtr..😳😳

Oye hoye SS jee, thanks a ton for the appreciation... Glad you liked it.. Btw I ever said that I write stories because you never asked 😉 😛 😆.. Thanks again buddy for reading it and appreciating!! 😳

Originally posted by: 13MEGHA05

Very beautifully written...

Thanks a ton Dear..

Originally posted by: lourel24

it was just beautiful.loved the line"I don't want to like you but I do. And.. and I am not gonna tell you that I really like you. "it was really touching.

Thanks for the appreciation.. Glad you loved the line you quoted.. Your appreciation means a lot.. :D

Originally posted by: -Shwetha-

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<i><font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#330099">Nami, wow...I dun know
how to express in words...such a beautiful OS...👏Awesomely written ...👍🏼.</font>

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<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#330099">Love is a mesmerizing
feeling, where the feelings cannot be explained, but felt...The hidden love
feelings have been beautifully captured by you in the OS...😳😳while reading , I feet
like iam seeing it...😳😳</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#330099"> So In a Geetha ma style...stupendo fantabulosuly fantastic
OS...👏👏👍🏼</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#330099">Keep writing more...😳😳</font>

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HeY Shwetziii, First let me give you a tight Hug 🤗 for your constant support & encouragement.. Loved the subtle emotions you mentioned in your post.. Quite profound.. So happy you took out time from work and commented.. It means a lot.. Glad you enjoyed reading it.. Will surely try to write more !!

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

lovely :)

Thanks!! Glad you liked it..

Originally posted by: uamaz

Absolutetly fabulous, please do continue to write in this forum. 👏

Thanks for your kind words and appreciation. I am really addicted to this show now and no matter how busy I am, I make a point to stalk CC of this Forum where I've met some wonderful people.. Thanks again!!

Originally posted by: AJIKUMAR

👏awesome OS

Thanks for the appreciation :)