OS#14 On precap 22 march's

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Posted: 11 years ago
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it is a rubbish , it is 4 here they have made me half mad😆 ignore mistakes

" Simi kahan ha " Toshi ji asked while crying

" she is in hotel, she has no courage to face you all " he said

" go & bring her , this is her home " Mr Bhalla said

" i will bring her myself "Raman said

" no you stay Romi will go " Mr Bhalla stopped him

" i will too go to bring Di back " Rinky said as they all left

Ishita picked up her bag

" tu kahan chali " Toshi ji said looking her in surprise

" aap aur aap ka Beta baat jana bina itna ghusa karta hain" Mr Bhalla said

Raman look at her " it is her fault , she had not trusted me "

"Trust karna wala bano pehla " Mr Bhalla scold him

"Chora na aap , galti hojati hai " Toshi ji said & asked him to take her to bedroom

"lets finish it here galti hogai , but still it is her fault " he said & walked to bedroom

" beta i will say sorry from his side , he is very depressed as Adi had insulted him , he had given all our gifts to his servant " Mr Bhalla stopped as he saw Raman coming out , Ishita look at him , he was stress out ,his smiled had vanished away , she walked to Ruhi bedroom to check her , she saw her sleeping holding the frame

"he taken out all his anger on me " she kissed Ruhi , he saw him standing at the door

"Maa is calling you " he said saw her keeping the frame on Ruhi bedside

As Ishita walked away he walked in bed room & picked up the frame " you don't like me , i accept it ,but the way you hurt Ruhi was not right , i will keep this in my office " he walk back to his room "where are you going ?" he hold her arm as he saw her going out with pillow & blanket

" Maa was saying Rinky & Romi will give their room to Simi di , i said we will give them " she said without looking at him

"hmmm " he let go her arm , she saw the frame in his hand which he kept in his cupboard ,she walked in Ruhi bedroom

" you sleep here i will sleep in lounge " she said as there was no place for her in Ruhi room .he picked up the pillow & walked out

"I guess we both will sleep there " he walked out without looking at her , at the same time Simi came , they all met with her


After hour

Ishita fixed the bed

" aap uper sojai " she sat down at the same time he sat both bang their shoulder

" sorry" he rub his head & she his ,

"you sleep up" he asked her " i am tired please sleep up" he said , she shifted to sofa , he at once laid down on floor " will you stare me whole night?" he said as he saw her sitting looking at him ,

"nahi tou " she quickly laid down , she stared at the ceiling as was scared to turn , he was twisting & turning

" i told you can't sleep on floor " she turn & look at him , he had closed his eyes tightly ,his arm was on his head , she tilted a bit to look at him , he was trying to sleep," Why Adi is hurting him?" she look at his face , his lips were visible in street light , he turn towards her ,he look at her ,she quickly closed her eyes " Pagal sojao " he said ,he saw her curling her legs as it was bit chilly , she cough ,he saw comforter at his side , he sat & picked it up " yeh lo " he throw it on her which almost covered her

" aap ko sari lagi tou " she pull down the comforter from her face & look at him

"by the way daily you take it , i sleep without it" he said & laid straight ,she turn & got stuck in comforter, as she tries to free herself , she lost her balance & fall on him as the sofa was too narrow

" Maa " he shouted , she look at him & the door ,she placed her hand on his mouth as she saw lights & shadows

"haato " he moved her hand & tries to push her who was lying on him , she look at him & moved

"they are coming " she duck in comforter covered him " shhh please " she whisper , Raman heard footsteps he look at her who was lying half on him placing her head on his chest

"papa ji yeh awaz kaise thi " Simi asked from her father , who had too came out of his bedroom .

"Pata nahi " he said & look at them " shhh they are asleep " he asked Simi to go back , Simi look at them she smiled ,she walked to Kitchen to make her daughter milk

"yeh Simi di ja kyun nahi rahi " she murmur , as she felt uneasy hearing his heart beat

" go & ask her " he murmur looking at her ,his bread brush with her face ,she pouted out her lips ,& placed her hand on her cheek, he look at her ,she quickly closed her eyes, a naughty smiled appear on his lips . he wrap his arm around her waist & turn a bit , she held her breath as he was too close to her ,she was trapped between him & sofa ,she was now keeping her head on his shoulder

" aap yeh kya kar raha" she whisper she tries to pull herself away from him

" so raha hoon, dare not wake me warna acha nahi hoga, chup kar ka sojao yahan warna phir ghirao gai mera uper" he closed his eyes ,he pull the duvet over them ,she was not getting what to do , Simmi was taking too much time

" Ufff" she closed her eyes to avoid the closeness, with in minute or 2 he started snoring ,"Raman " he didn't reply " sogai he was really tired " she exhale at the same time he curl his legs placed one on hers , she bite her lips, His proximity sent goose bumps down her body ,she closed her eyes tightly . Simi went back to bedroom, Ishita didn't realised , she was drowsy when she felt something wet on her face , she look up , it was all dark , she was not able to see , she with trembling hand touch his face , she felt tears droplet, she lean her head & look at his face " he is crying in sleep " she said to herself , cried for his pain , she gently wiped it

" ruhi & you will be with Adi soon " she didn't moved , closed her eyes



I want Romantic scene not a funny

second they should use the frame for their pic

Edited by naddiya26 - 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
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very well-written...I hope this really happens...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh wowww..nadiya dear😃😃
YOU ARE SO AMAZING..👏👏
Totally loved every bit of it😊..it was truly high on romance❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so dreamy, kab dekhne ko mileage screen par isa?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS. I hope this happens... Lovely 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww soo cute loved it nadi ur amazibg writter 👏 lovely ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it! Very nice! I hope this is how the story goes on Monday!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful 👏 even if they talked about what happened in the day before sleeping,that will be enough.
Edited by momb24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS and the line from Raman about go ask her was spot on
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Speechless...👍🏼
awesome...

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