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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow Now that was an Intense update dude!
Some very important things came through...Well Ishita was in a big turmoil in this one
I mean sure it's true that she and Raman even though married lived like strangers...so how was she supposed to tell him that his sister was having an affair. As both of them keep saying they did this for Ruhi! Well Duh...but when they do realize that it's not just Ruhi it's something more they might come to know that living like strangers isn't the solution.
But you also did a fantabulous job of portraying Ishita's feelings! I mean...no doubt in this that she is hurt and then her lashing at Raman like that...well as you said in the update when you have something bottling up inside you it comes out one day or another and...it's not pretty. But iI also think that her lashing out was a good thing cause If she had kept all those things to herself it would have been much worse, She would have been more brown from the inside that she is now hurt from the outside. Sometimes it's just good to let go! 😳 And you showed that greatly in this one!
So hats off! 😃
And when Raman said nodding your head is all your gonna do...no words..no thing...Now that was powerful. I mean I know they haven't even become friends yet but hmm...that line said something almost as if Raman wanted her to fight back and not just end it like that. Well another step towards mutuality! hehe!
And even Ishita said to herself that she would rather prefer the ravann Kumar Bhalla than this one!
So basically they both admitted that they care for each other indirectly...😉
That was awesomely portrayed again! You are a fantabulous writer as I said previously!
This was a great update 👏
Loved it...Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lourel24

it was damn good.loved it totally.finally ishita vented out her frustration.lets see wat raman has to say regarding it.plz update soon.


thanks lourel 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jojo1986

Loved it loved it update soon plz plz😊


Thanks Jojo will update the 3rd part this week - probably by friday 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvsagar

Beautiful update! This is what Ishita needs to express to Raman in YHM...If only you were on the CV team!

Can't wait for the next update!!!


Thanks luvsagar I am so glad my wish that IshRa be amicable at least, become friends is an unanimous wish, hope the Cvs are listening and I am kinda happy to not be a CV LOL I heard they barely get to live a life 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: akrj01

Wonderfully written and yes, would love to see a similar conversation between Ishita and Raman soon.😊


thank you dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hope you edit soon, would love to hear from you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsugar

Wow!!! Your Just such an amazing writer ... I absolutely enjoyed reading both the parts .Ishita was just perfect ...her words were really touching...👍🏼

⭐️ to your writing skills yaar ... I want to read more😳


Thanks a lot sweetsugar, you humble me with your opinion about my skills as a writer, thank you so much once again. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: avni_19

reaallyyy awesumm.. i loved it soo much.. the emotions are portrayed reallyy well for a moment i thought i was reading a novel... great work.. i am eagerly waiting to read the next update.. plss keepp continuing..

i am waiting for ur PM!!!


Thank you so much Avni thats really sweet of you to say you felt this was an actual novel 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my...So beautifully written😃😃
I love the way you express each emotion going through Raman and ishu's mind👏👏
Brilliant work yaar⭐️⭐️ Pls continue..PM me if possible pls😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: serendipity.

Mine.

Beautiful.
Beautiful, Beautiful, Beautiful. I really dont know what else to say. HOW do you do this so well? Yeah, the writing part! :P Its amazing, Aani, im really impressed. Your style of writing, the narration and even the dialogues is so variant and indulging, like you keep readers as engrossed, as can be, and i could literally feel myself and my facial expressions changing as i read the part... How i became irked when RAMAN was irked with himself and his life and his actions, happy and smiling when it went lighter, and emotional, as Ishita went on to speak... showing him, and herself the mirror, and the brutal harsh truth of their relationship.
Then, for the love of Ruhi, they had taken an almost hasty decision, without thinking about the future... not Ruhi's not each others... they took it for the present... of Ruhi, and now theyll realise what theyve gotten themselves into.
I love the fact that Ishita broke down, i would love to see how Raman handles and how realization hits him, and what he does next... Does he already start to try and mend their relationship?
This part was really impressive. I cannot wait for the next part. Please dont take too long 😳
hah *greedymeee!* ;)


Hey Reeno 🤗
I am so very sorry for the late reply but the weekend was crazy for me so I couldn't make the time to reply earlier 😳

Aww thats so sweet of you... I am incredibly delighted that you could get so involved in the story, the narration that Raman' emotions could find a connect with you.

And mostly it is good to know that people do echo the exact same sentiments that Ishita vocalizes in this chapter - as you correctly pointed out; IshRa decided to get married in a jiffy owing to Ruhi' custody trial. They were so preoccupied with the fear of losing her, that it occurred to neither of them that being parents entails so much more than winning a court case.

They can say they married each other for Ruhi currently as the answer to every issue that crops up - thinking this will silence the other. That since this marriage was never about love or companionship they can lead their lives as they chose to do so without involving the other - but that is far from the truth.

They cannot cut off Ruhi from their lives, and so in turn cannot eradicate the other and once Ruhi grows up she will definitely not take kindly to the animosity between her parents. Infact this would be worse for her than growing up with a non-caring mom like Shagun or a mostly busy absent single father Raman. Having two parents love her so much and yet not love each other at all; thats a special kind of hell for any child.

A fate no child deserves at all.

And Ishita had to breakdown here - not just for the melodramatic effect; but because that it was bound to happen... how can any woman not feel completely distraught by the realization that her marriage is just a farce.

Thanks once again Reeno for your sweet words, next part is by friday and once again I am so sorry for the late reply, I chose to delay yours while replying to some others though because this reply was always intended to be a lengthy one 😳

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