SS FAMILY BOND UPDATED PAGE 16 PART 7~~ Last Part - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

117

Views

102.5k

Users

32

Likes

558

Frequent Posters

13MEGHA05 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: simples28

That was absolutely brilliant megha dear👏👏..Seriously I hope the Cvs are reading this😊..Even your dialogues are so realistic😃..Its perfectly tailored for those characters😊..Such a lovely update😃..I totally loved it❤️..Specifically all that I have pointed below😳

Raman: "CEO hoo koi pest control vala nahi"..omg ROFL🤣🤣

Ishu: "janwaron ki doctor hoti to tumhara illaj nahi kar deti ab tak"...ROFL🤣🤣

It was indeed very nice to see a jealous and possessive Raman😳😳

Raman suddenly comes there and puts his hands on ishita's shoulder and says
Raman: Bhabhi ki behen nahi teri bhabhi hai... Yaani meri patni..

Shlok: (after completing a dangerous run) ishitaji aapki aur meri co-ordination bahot acchi hai...Raman saw this and was very jealous and due to this, on the next ball shlok was bowled

Please continue and update soon😃..I am eagerly waiting for your next update..

so sweet of u... thnx... 😊😊

disha93 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Awesome update!!! Love the jealous Raman !!!
Edited by disha93 - 11 years ago
13MEGHA05 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: divya17.8

I'm the 1st one to reply...😊

Again an awesome update...👏
Raman feeling jealous...
IshRa scenes...👍🏼
Plz update next part soon...


Thnxx a lot!!! I wil surely update it soon!!!😊😊😊

13MEGHA05 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: -Raz-

waaahhh i loved it

thnx...😊😊

divya17.8 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Waiting for the update..
Plzz update soon...
13MEGHA05 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: divya17.8

Waiting for the update..

Plzz update soon...

i will update soon...

sorry for being late...

13MEGHA05 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Guyz i have updated part 4. Guyzzz plz leave your valuable comments to tell me whether you liked it or no.😊

Sorry for updating it late. Actually i had already written it but i dont know some how it got deleted, so i had to write it again.😔 Hope you enjoy reading this one...😊

Everybody seated at the dinning table, ruhi was sitting beside toshiji, mihika romie and rinki sitting in a row, on the opposite side mihir raman ishita and shlok sitting respectively...

Papaji: Oye radha jaldi la puttar... sab ke pet mein chuhe daud rahe hai...

Radha:Ji layi papaji. Bas ek minute...

Radha brings on food.

Toshiji: Radha, aaj kya kya bana hai khane mein?

Radha: Woh mummyji, butter chicken, roti aur prawns biryani.

Amma: Aur?

Radha: Bas itna hi bana hai... puri sham khel kud mein beet gayi na, toh zyaada kuch bana nahi paye...

Amma: What? Par hum yeh sab nahi kha sakte.😲

Vandu: Yes we are pure vegetarians!

Bholu: sorry didiji pata nahi tha hum ko. Agli baar se yaad rakhenge.😕

Mihika: But ab kya karenge?

Ishu: no problem mihika, mein kuch jaldi se bana deti hu.😊

Papaji: Koi nahi beta... tu ruk. Bholu tu ja puttar aur kuch jaldi se bana de...

Toshiji was serving for herself...

Papaji: (looking at toshi) tab tak hum sab lok intejaar karenge.

Toshiji puts down the spoon.

Toshiji: (whispers to simmi) yeh madrasi chain se khane bhi nahi dete.🤓

Amma hears it and looks at appa and makes face. Appa sees it and signals amma to keep calm.

Radha: ji papaji hum dono ja ke jaldi se bana dete hai.

Ishu: No problem papaji, muzhe acchha lagega yeh sab karna.😃

Toshiji: Bhallaji woh jana chahti hai toh jane dijiye na use. Aap kyun tok rahe hai. Ek toh itni bhuk lagi. Ja ishita tu jaldi se jake banade woh tumhara dosa idli job hi hai!!!

Bhallaji feels embaraced on toshiji's word, but he keeps quiet.😕

Ishu: Ji, mein jaldi ati hu.

Ishu leaves.

Appa: Bhalla sahab aap lok shuru kijiye plz... ishu ati hi hogi.

Papaji: Nahi iyer saab.. koi baat nahi... hum rukte hai.

Vandu: Haan uncle aap lok seriously start kijiye ishu aajayegi jaldi hi.

Papaji: par..

Simmi: Papaji woh lok itna bol rahe hai toh shuru karo.

Saying so simmi and toshiji starts eating.

Toshiji: Haan ab rahat ayi kitna achha khana bana hai...😃

Slowly everybody start having their food.

Vandu: (to mihika) how uncivilized...😲

Mihika just gives a nod.

Shlok: Waise kuch bhi bolo aaj maza bohot aya... Aur ishitaji kya khelti hai...

Raman: (in sweet anger!)Sirf do ghante mein pata chala ishitaji kya khelti hai???😈

Shlok: Kuch logonka janane ke liye do minute bhi kaafi hai aur main toh phir bhi pure do ghante ishitaji ke team mein tha... Sahi keh raha hun na mamaji?😉

Papaji: Haan shlok puttar sahi hai... Devar bhabhi ki tuning bahot ache se jam gayi hai.. Kyun raman?

Raman: Papaji Dever Bhabhi... Hahaha.. Yeh toh ishita ko ishitaji kehta hai!!! (in a complaining tone.)

Toshiji: Haan shlok puttar who teri bhabhi hai abhi...

Raman: (in his mind) ab bol beta!!!😈

Shlok: Arey mamiji ishitaji ko bhabhi bulaunga toh phir bahot restricted ho jayega na yeh rishta.. Aur devar bhabhi dost bhi toh ho sakte hai... Kyun Mamaji?😃

Papaji: Haan bhai aur ishita bhabhi ho ya ishitaji humari ishita toh wahi rahegi na...

Simmi: Aur who sha-kesh-per ne bhi toh kaha tha what's in name???

Vandu: Its Shakespeare...

Simmi: haan wahi... Meri bhavnao ko samaz.. (whispers to toshi) yaha par bhi lecture dena shuru kar diya.

Toshiji: Main toh sochti hu uske pati aur bte ka kya hota hoga woh toh 24 ghante iske saath rehte hai.. hahaha😆

Simmi: Hahaha...😆

After 10 min. ishita comes...

Ishu: Amma khana ready hai. Woh jaldijaldi mein main sirf curd rice hi bana saki.

Appa: Koi baat nahi ishu. Humare liye utna hi kaafi hai.

Everybody serves themselves.

Mihika: Akka aapne jiju ko taste karne ke liye nahi diya. Dijiye na.

Ishu nods and is about to serve it in raman's plate when he catches her hand

Raman: Muzhe nahi chahiye. Mere liye yeh biryani hi thik hai.

Ishu feels sad but does not say anything.😒 She serves herself a little and is about to sit.

Shlok: ishitaji rukiye. If you don't mind muzhe bhi thodasa milega kya?

Toshiji: Oye shlok tu kabse yeh madrasi khana khane laga?

Shlok: woh mamiji, prawns biryani toh yeh radha humesha banati hai, ab ishitaji ke hathon ka kab khane milega kya pata?

Ishu serves him too. Shlok tastes it.

Shlok: Wah! Wah ishitaji kya baat hai!!!

Aap ke hathon mein toh jaadu hai. Yeh kitna tasty hai. Raman bhaiyya aap bahot lucky hai. Mein raman bhaiyya ke jagah par hota na toh abhi ishitaji ka haath chum leta itna tasty hai.😉

Raman: Par tu meri jagah par nahi hai. Toh jis jagah pe hai usi jagah per reh.😉

Shlok: Sorry ha raman bhai. Just bol raha tha. Main thodi na sach mein aisa kuch kar sakta hu.😉

Everybody laughs...😆😆

Ruhi: Aap nahi kar sakte toh kya main hu na.

She gets up from her chair and kisses ishita's hands... Ishita tightly hugs her and thanks her.

Ruhi: Ishima aap world ki best cook ho...😊

Everybody smiles.

After dinner,

Shlok: Ishita ji aap, woh jo aapne aaj kiya tha na...

Ishita: Curd rice...

Shlok: Haan wahi. Aap uski recipe de dijiye ga ha radha ko. Woh amazing tha!!!

Ishu: I feel so nice ki aapko itna achha laga (she notices raman standing there) varna kuch logoke gale se achha khana niche utarta hi nahi.

Shlok: kitne badnasib hai woh log!!!

Raman interferes.

Raman: Shlok tu kal subhe office jayega na? Woh kaam se chutti nahi leni chahiye. Work comes first. Kyun ishita?

Ishita: ji absolutely...

Shlok: Haan bhai work comes first par mere liye family too comes first. Aur waha Mumbai mein toh aap pure family ke saath rehte ho par muzhe toh sirf aise hi kuch din milte hai. Toh kal no chutti. Mein full day aap logoke saath bitaunga. Aur waise bhi maine already pura kam kar liya hai..😊

Ishu: Bahot achi baat kahi apne.. Family comes first.. Chalo acha hai apko family ki value toh pata hai... Varna.. (looks at raman)😈

Shlok: Chaliye ishitaji raman bhaiyya goodnight... Juch bhi chahiye toh mera karma yahi hai...

Ishu: Tank you!!!😊

He leaves ...

Raman: kya pura din yeh humare saath. (in his mind) pura din ishita ke piche...hmmm🤔

While moving to their room...

Ishita: Aap toh kabhi meri tarif nahi karte ab jab koi aur kar raha hai toh use toh kamsekam karne do... Aapko usse bhi problem hai kya...???😳

Raman: woh tumko tarif lagti hai?

Ishita: Dekhne wale ka nazariya imp hota hai. Aap toh...

She smirks and leaves.

Raman: Yeh ladki pagal hai kya?

In IshRa's bedroom...

Ishu chages her saree and raman is sitting on the sofa chair thinking something.

Ishu: (a bit loudly)ayyo...

Raman: (startled ) ab kya hua?

Ishu: Aapne apne charo taraf nazar ghumayi hai kya?

Raman sees everywhere...

Raman: Toh?

Ishu: Murugan! Yaha par sirf ek hi bed hai aur koi sofa bhi nahi. Toh ab kaha soyenge...

Raman: Haan ab kya hoga... tumhara ? (gives a wicked smile)😈

Ishu: aap

Raman: kya?

Ishu: kaha soyenge aap?😳

She says so and raman who is already standing realizes that ishu is going to run towards the bed. So both of them look towards each other and start running towards the bed. Ishu comes first but slips due to the mattress and even raman slips due to the same reason. So ishu is on the bed and raman on her. 😳😳They both have an eye lock.

Raman: woh... (about to get up but again slips.☺️ Ishu helps him to get up. There was an awkward silence.)

Ishu: Mein pehle pohchi. Toh bed mera. (trying to break the silence.)

Raman: Ae Jhansi ki rani iss bar tumhari manmani nahi chalegi.

Ishu: jaise humesha meri hi chalti hai...

She nods take the bed sheet and lies on the bed.

Raman: Arey!!

Ishu: Aap ko guard banna hai toh shoauk se baniye par darwaje ke bahar jane se pehle lights jaroor off kijiye ga...😉

Raman: Kya life hai meri... CEO ho ke bhi sone ki jagah nahi a mere hi bedroom mein muzhi ko!!!😭

Raman helplessly moves and switches off the light and goes towards the sofa chair and sits there... Now only one light is on that too a table-lamp which is beside the sofa-chair.

Few minutes later...

Ishu notices raman restless. And thinks what can be done and an idea strikes her.😊

Ishu: Suniye...

Raman: (irritated)boliye...

Ishu: Mere paas ek idea hai...

Raman: Tum bed se uth rahi ho... (in a happy tone)😃

Ishu: Aap kisiki puri baat sun kyun nahi lete... If you want aap yaha aake so sakte hai...

Raman: What? Ek bed pe... tumhare saath kabhi nahi!😲

Ishu: Yeh bed bada hai. Yeh side aapki aur yeh meri. (She divides the bed into two part with the help of a cushion.)

Raman: Tumhare saath ek bed par sone se achha mein raat bhar jaagta rahu..

Ishu: As you wish.. Sirf aapke convenience ke liye maine bola...

Raman: Aha! Kitni fikra karti ho tum meri...

Ishu: fine.. Aapko jo karna hai woh kijiye!

Ishu gets irritated and sleeps on the bed looking at the opposite direction.

Ishu: (to herself) Hadd hai... Bhalai ka toh jamana hi nahi raha.. mein toh unki bhalayi ke liye bol rahi thi na... Aur sirf soneke liye hi bol rahi thi.. Aur kuch thodi na bola maine...RAVANKUMAR...😡

After few hours raman was still restless he looks at ishu...

Raman: kitne aaram se so rahi hai.. Aur bol rahi thi mere bhalayi ke liye bol rahi he..

Ek bar aur try nahi kar sakti thi kya.. Mein thodi na na bolne wala tha...Jhansi ki rani kahi ki... Waise toh har baat mein jabardasti karti hai... Par ab...ab mein kya karu???

He gets up, drinks water and recollects what ishita had said...She said aapko jo karna hai woh karo...

Raman: (to himself) aapko jo karna hai woh karo... wah! Iska matlab mein kuch bhi kar sakta hu... Abhi chupke se yaha so jaunga aur yeh Jhansi ki rani uthne se pehle bed se uth jaunga aur us chair pe jake beth jaunga. Aur fir din bhar acting karunga peeth dard ki.. Isi bahane kal rat bina koi natak bed pe sone milega...Wah raman kumar bhall wah kya dimaag paya hai!

He says so and checks whether ishu is absolutely asleep.

Raman: Hush!!! 😃

He quietly sleeps besides ishita but faces the opposite direction. As soon as he sleeps, ishita turns and smiles...😊

Ishu: Inn punjabiyon ka ego bhi na...

After some time ishu puts the bed sheet on raman and sleeps with a very cute smile...😊

In the morning...

Raman ishita are under the same bedsheet and facing towards each other. Raman had placed his hand on ishita's hand by mistakenly... Ishu gets up and notices raman's hand and she delicately removes his hand and is about to get up when raman again catches her hand and this time quite tightly... ishu turns behind.😳😳

Raman: Sab ki tarah tum muzhe chod ke toh nahi jaogi na?

Ishu is almost shocked at his words. She moves near him and whispers in his ears.😳

Ishu: Kabhi nahi...(in her mind) sirf ruhi ke liye...

Ishu then frees her hand and leaves the room smilingly...😊

Edited by 13MEGHA05 - 11 years ago
itsme_aish thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#38
I was waiting for this😃😃 will read and post my comments meghu😊😊
itsme_aish thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#39
ROFL..epic dialogue:🤣🤣🤣🤣

Simmi: Aur who sha-kesh-per ne bhi toh kaha tha what's in name???
Vandu: Its Shakespeare...

Aaah pangs of jealosy in Raman:😃😉

Shlok: Wah! Wah ishitaji kya baat hai!!!
Aap ke hathon mein toh jaadu hai. Yeh kitna tasty hai. Raman bhaiyya aap bahot lucky hai. Mein raman bhaiyya ke jagah par hota na toh abhi ishitaji ka haath chum leta itna tasty hai.
Raman: Par tu meri jagah par nahi hai. Toh jis jagah pe hai usi jagah per reh.

how Romantic the eyelock❤️..Wah wah meghu..

Arrey wah meghu..you are awesomee yaarr😃😃...seriously you should become a dialogue writer for the show👏👏..such perfect dialogues and such an amzing story👍🏼..pls update more..love reading your stories😃

13MEGHA05 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: simples28

ROFL..epic dialogue:🤣

Simmi: Aur who sha-kesh-per ne bhi toh kaha tha what's in name???
Vandu: Its Shakespeare...

Aaah pangs of jealosy in Raman:😃😉

Shlok: Wah! Wah ishitaji kya baat hai!!!
Aap ke hathon mein toh jaadu hai. Yeh kitna tasty hai. Raman bhaiyya aap bahot lucky hai. Mein raman bhaiyya ke jagah par hota na toh abhi ishitaji ka haath chum leta itna tasty hai.
Raman: Par tu meri jagah par nahi hai. Toh jis jagah pe hai usi jagah per reh.

how Romantic the eyelock❤️..Wah wah meghu..

Arrey wah meghu..you are awesomee yaarr😃😃...seriously you should become a dialogue writer for the show👏👏..such perfect dialogues and such an amzing story👍🏼..pls update more..love reading your stories😃

hey thanks a lot... I have started writing next part.. This time i will update it soon...😊😊

Edited by 13MEGHA05 - 11 years ago

Related Topics

Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: Manan_Pani_fan

7 months ago

Karan Patel and Divyanka Tripathi BOTH NOT part of Sony TV show

Exclusive:; Harshad Chopda and Shivangi Joshi likely to play leads The Sony TV show produced by Balaji Telefilms has seen major developments...

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein Thumbnail

Posted by: thefarfetcher

1 years ago

FF: Submerse (AUTHOR'S NOTE on Page 3)

There's something bittersweet about finding a fandom when it seems dead and buried, but that's how things seem to have worked out this time. I...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".