SS FAMILY BOND UPDATED PAGE 16 PART 7~~ Last Part - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i am sorry guyzzz...😔

i have no idea abt wht is pm and how can i add u in pm list...


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: divya17.8

lovely update...

Nice selection of songs in the game...
Toshiji was hilarious...🤣🤣
Nd like Mrs. Iyer me too imagining IshRa dancing on Raabta...

thnx a lot...

very sweet of u!!!😊😊

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Originally posted by: simples28

Plzzz update soon meguuu😊😊

Waiting eagerly😃

ofcourse dear i have started writing and will update it soon!!!

Thnx...😊😊😊

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Guyzzz i have updated part 3. Plzz leave your valuable comments.. They are really motivating...😊😊😊

(The whole family climbs down the bus. There were already two people standing in front of the gate.)

Radha: Arrey papaji aapne jaldi jaldi mein bataya ke tayari karane ka vakt hi nahi mila...

Papaji: Koi baat nahi puttar. Aa mein tuzhe sabse milata hu. Yeh sab humare samdhi jii hai aur voh ishita hai apne raman ki patni. (pointing towards iyers and ishita.) Aur iyer saab ye radha hai aur yeh bholu hai. Yeh khayaal rakhte hai humare ghar ka, Aur yeh apna shlok kahi dikhai nahi de raha hai?

Bholu: Woh aap toh jante hai na pappaji shlok bhaiya ko kaam aya nahi ke chal padhe...

Simmi: Ae bholu sab baatein bahar hi karega ki humein andar bhi bulayega???

Radha: Ha didiji aayena.. yeh bholu bhi na...

(Everybody enters and see a very huge and beautiful house. It is very clean and has a lot of family photos of everybody including that of raman when he was very innocent.)

Radha: Pappaji aap lok fresh ho jaiyye mein phir naashta lagati hu..

Toshiji: Haan bholu puttar mehmano ko kamra dikhade...

Bholu: Ji mummyji...

(bholu gives them directions and the iyers follow it. While climbing the stair case...)

Vandu: Dekha mihika... They are so rude!!!

Mihika: Kya hua akka?

Vandu: Yeh log abhi bhi hume mehmaan consider karte hai... not a family...

Mihika: Leave it akka... its their loss.. varna humare jaise well cultured family unhe kaha milegi????😉

(vandu laughs and nods. Romi keeps on looking at mihika as she is climbing the floor and simmi notices that.)

Simmi: Oy romi... oy romi...

(she continuously keeps shouting but romi is lost in mihika's thoughts and later gains his consious)

Romi: haan haa di.. kuch bola aapne???

Simmi: Oye romi... dusri madras laneki planning kar raha hai kya?😲

Romi: nahi di... aisi koi baat nahi hai..

Simmi: Accha hai, hogi to bhi apne dimaag se nikaal de...

(Simmi leaves from there smiling.)

Romi: (smiles wickedly) oye pappe isko dimaag se nahi nikaal sakte... sorry yaar... yeh madrasan toh ghar mein hi aayegi.

Radha: Ishita bhabhi yeh raman bhai ka kamra hai. Aap fresh ho jao...

(Radha is about to leave.)

Ishita: Suno, raman kaha hai?

Radha: Ishita bhabhi woh raman bhai niche nahi hai.. yahi kahi honge...

Ishita: thik hai...

(Ishita was very tired she took a towel and went in the wash room and as she opened the door)

Ishita: Aaa

(She came out of the door running and by this time raman was on the door.)

Raman: Aee Jhansi ki rani chilla kyun rahi ho?

Ishita: Woh waha woh...Aaa... (Still screaming and pointing towards washroom...)

Raman: Badi Jhansi ki rani hai!!!! Ek cockroach ko dekhkar dar gayi hogi... hahaha😆

(Raman goes in the washroom there was no noise initially and suddenly...)

Raman: Aaa... (even he comes shouting and climbs on the bed where ishita is still standing and scared.)

Ishita: Kya hua??? Tum bhi dar gaye na???

Raman : Paagal aurat... woh koi chotasa cockroach nahi hai... woh toh ek badasaaa ... Aaa!!!

(They both are scared when they see a small rat coming slowly out of the washroom and they both scream louder and ruhi comes.)

Ruhi: Mumma papa aaplok aise chilla kyun rahe ho? Aap koi game khel rahe ho kya? Land and Water?

Ishu: Ruhi jao yaha se beta... Yaha par ek chuha hai aur tumhaare papa ko daar lag raha hai...

Raman Wat??? Tum bhi daar rahi ho...

Ruhi: (laughs) Ishima aur papa daar rahe hai...(She goes shouting so and calls every one.)

(In the meanwhile before everybody could come, the rat climbed the bed and due to that raman jumped on the sofa-chair and even ishita jumped on the same sofa-chair with the help of raman as there is only one sofa-chair in the room By this time the whole family is there in front of ishra's room and laughing...)

Raman: Abbey romi... Iss chuhe ko hata...

Romi: Haan bhai.. (still laughing)😆😆

(Romi takes the rat out and everybody have a hearty laugh seeing ishra on the same chair. As soon as the rat is taken out raman jumps down the chair making ishita also jumping along with him.)

Ishu: hush...

Bala: Yeh accha bahana hai romance ka.. hai na vandu? Even we shld try this...

Vandu: Inki nayi shaadi hui hai... suit karta hai... inhe...!!! (trying to stop laughing but jst cant stop..)😆

(Radha shouts from the hall)

Radha: Pappaji nashta ready hai...

Pappaji: Ha chalo sab lok...

Simmi: Aur bhai ab koi chuha aya na toh bhagke niche aajaiye... hahaha... 😆😆😆 aap dono... (still laughing and teasing)😉

(everybody is gone...)

Ishita: Wah! Mr. Raman Kumar Bhalla, ceo of the year... ek chuhe se darta hai...

Raman: CEO hoo koi pest control vala nahi aur tum badi Jhansi ki rani banti ho tum bhi daar gayi thi...Aur upar se tum toh khudko doctor kehti ho na aur tumko toh yeh chuhe kaatna vaatna hota hai na... toh tum kaise daar gayi???

Ishita: Oh excuse me, mein dentist hu daton ki doctor, janwaron ki doctor nahi... (whispers to herself) janwaron ki doctor hoti to tumhara illaj nahi kar deti ab tak...

Raman: Kya? Kya kaha tumne?

Ishita: Kuch nahi!!!

Simmi: Bhai bhabhi jaldi aao...(shouting from dinning table)

Vandu: Phirse chuha toh nahi aagaya na??? (laughing and shouting.)

Ishita: Tum ko yaha rehna hai toh raho mein niche ja rahi hu... (and leaves.)

Raman: (to himself) achi baat hai jab chahiye tab doctor ban jati hai aur jab chahiye tab dentist ban jaati hai... Inn aurton ko koi samaj sakta hai kya???

On dinning table...

(ishita and raman enters and both places their hand on the same chair and mihika notices this and gives a whooping cough...)

Ishita: (slowly) pehle mein aayi thi toh pehle main baithungi aap waha bathiye...

Raman: Ishita!!!

Ishu: Dekhiye plz don't create a scene.

Toshiji: Arrey tum dono ek kursi pakad ke kyun khade ho? Sangeet kursi khelni hai kya?😉

Rinki: Haan shuruwat to bedroom se ho gayi hai.. kyun bhai? (everybody laughs)

Papaji: Raman dusri chair leke baith ja...

(Ishita sits on the chair and the next moment finds raman seated besides her.)

Ishita: (slowly) maine kaha than a muzhse paanga mat lo...

Raman: Ya whatever...

Ruhi: Wow!!! Aaj hum lok full day khelenge...

Shravan: Yey!!!!

(Everybody finishes their breakfast and goes in the garden in the front of the house...)

Ishu: Ruhi... yey sab kya hai?

Ruhi: Ishima yey toh cricket ka saman hai... hum sab lok aaj cricket khelenge...

Mihika: Wow maaja aayega!!!

Romi: Chaal ye mihika ji aap meri team mein.

Ruhi: No chachu... team aise nahi hogi... maine aur shravan ne iss bowl mein sabke naam likhe hai aura ab hum 2 captains karenge aur phir dono captains ek ek naam nikalenge aur phir team banjayegi...

Amma and Toshiji: (together) captain banega kaun?

Shravan: Aap dono...

Toshiji: Chaal thik hai phir...

Amma: Mereko bhi koi problem nahi hai...

They start pulling chits... Almost all the chits are pulled out only two remaining that too of Mr. Iyer and Mr. Bhalla. Both were wishing to have their respective husbands in their team. It was toshiji's time to pull a chit.

Toshiji: (After pulling the chit) O ji Bhalla ji.!!!! (Madhavi becomes happy as she thinks iyer will be in her team) aap mere dushman ho gaye...

Papaji: Kya?

Toshiji: Aap uss madrasan ki team mein ho kyunki is chitte mein samdhi ji ka naam aya hai...

(This made both the captains unhappy.)

Now in TOSHI'S LOADED team consisted of: Mr. Iyer, Vandu. Mihir. Ishita. Rinki and ruhi

And in AMMA'S IDLIS team consisted of: Mr. Bhalla, Bala, Raman, Mihika, Romi, simmi and shravan

Amma's idli batted first...

They started off well but soon bala went for 13 and Romi for 12 and similarly the whole team was collapsing, they were 78 for 4 when it was raman and mihika playing and giving their team a good score.

Toshiji: Arrey yeh mihika toh mare hi ja rahi hai... Aise toh hum haar jaayenge!!!

Ishu: Mihir, tum bowling karo shayad kuch karishma ho jaye...

Toshiji: Haan mihir puttar ja...

Now mihir is bowling and mihika on strike raman on non striker's end and ishita before boundary line...

Mihir bowls his first ball and mihika hit an absolutely beautiful six...

Raman: Come on mihika we can do it..

Romi: Mihika ji ek dum mast hai...

(everybody looks at romi in shock...)

Romi; Shot mast hai (trying to explain himself)

Mihika gives a wicked smile to mihir and mihir gives a cute smie in return...

Same happened with the second ball.

Mihir bowled his third ball and mihika struck it hard and the ball was in the air and ishita below the ball. Ishita slowly moving behind with the ball and what!!! She actually lost her balance and was about to fall, so she shut her eyes tightly and minutes later she opened them and she found that someone was holding her, he was a handsome guy with a very sweet smile, he made her get up and everybody in amma's idli team were dancing as mihika's catch was drop but to everyone's astonishment the catch was not dropped it was with the unknown guy..

Papaji: Ishita puttar tu thik toh hai na.??

Ishu: Ji pappaji...

Toshiji: Arrey shlok... mera puttar!!!

Shlok: Paire pauna mamiji...

Papaji hugs shlok and introduces to every one .

Papaji: Yeh shlok hai.. meri behen ka beta... Abhi abhi mba complete kiya hai aur kaam ke silsile mein yahi rehta hai... Aur shlok yeh sab humare samdhi hai raman ke sasural wale...

Ruhi: Chalo game continue karo...

Romi: Jaiye mihika ji apki batting baki hai...

Mihir: Batting baki hai kya? Out ho gayi hai woh...

Mihika: Out kaise? Akkane catch chod diya tha...

Mihir: Haan par shlok ne toh pakda tha na...

Romi: Oye par shlok tumhare team mein nahi hain...

Mihir: Abhi se hai...

Mihika: Muze out nahi kar sake toh ab cheating karoge...

Ishu: Suno meri baat... Tumhare team mein 8 lok hai aur humare mein 7 toh batting mein problem hogi toh shlok ko humari team mein rehne do...

Mihika realizes her defeat and she moves back and comes in the last batsman shravan...

After mihir's over...

Toshiji:Ab kise bheje? Ishita tum bowling kar logi kya? Raman ko out karna itna asan nahi hai...

Ishu: Aap muzhpar vishwas kijiye...

Ishu takes the ball and everybody curious on what will happen...

Ishu bowls her first ball and ... Yes raman is bowled!!!

Vandu: Kya hua aapke manje hua khiladi ka? Pehele hi ball pe out???

Vaise humare ishu ne aapke raman ki wicket already le li thi...Raman?😉

Raman does not says anything and just moves...😳

Now amma's idli was all out on 148 and toshiji's loaded required 149 to win. They took a 5 minutes drink break. Everybody was having fun but shlok was continuously looking at ishu and raman noticed it... Shlok went near ishu...

Shlok: Aap? Aap kon hai? Jaroor bhabhi ki behen hogi...

Ishu: Nahi woh...

Raman suddenly comes there and puts his hands on ishita's shoulder and says

Raman: Bhabhi ki behen nahi teri bhabhi hai... Yaani meri patni..

Ishu just gives a sweet smile and shlok bits his tongue...

Shlok: sorry woh muzhe laga.. sorry haan ishita ji...

Shlok leaves from there

Raman: Abbey ishitaji nahi bhabhi bol bhabhi...

The next innings begin... after a few over toshiji's loaded were 89 for 5 when ishu and shlok were on the crease... they were having a good tuning..

Shlok: (after completing a dangerous run) ishitaji aapki aur meri co-ordination bahot acchi hai...

Ishita nodded... Raman saw this and was very jealous and due to this, on the next ball shlok was bowled.. It was mihir who came next... Romi bowled to mihir and he pulled it high and thus mihika caught it.. Romi imagined mihir leaving out from his and mihika's life similarly but soon comes to reality. Ruhi comes next... The mother daughter pair have a good partnership.

Now it's the last over, ruhi is on strike and ishu on non striker's end and the team needs 12 runs to win. Raman is bowling. First ball goes dot. On the second ball ruhi takes a quick one . Now ishu's team needs 11 of 4 balls.

For the 3rd ball ishu hits a four. For the 4th ball ishu takes a quick double. For the 5th ball ishu hits the ball and while taking the second run ruhi falls and ishita and raman both comes running towards ruhi and

Ruhi: Jao mumma hum haar jayenge...

Ishu realizes she would become run out if she did not run fast. Raman realized he was in the opposite team. With a heavy heart she took her bat and ran to the striker's end and saved from a run out. Actually ishu didn't save herself it was raman who didn't throw the ball on time.

Romi: Aaj bhai ko kya ho gaya woh kabhi aisa nahi karte unki timing toh awesome hai.

Mihika: Kyunki aaj field pe tumhare bhai ki puri family iss liye timing miss ho gayi...

Now 3 runs were needed of last ball and ishu knew ruhi cannot run, Raman bowled and ishu pulled it so hard that the ball went directly to the boundary leading toshiji's team to a victory. Ruhi hugged her mother and raman adored their love.

Everybody was enjoying their victoryand the opposite team was enjoying their family member's victory and shlok came near ishu

Shlok: ishitaji aap bahot acchha cricket khelti hai...

Ishu: Thank you!!!!

Shlok leaved and raman came...

Raman: Kya bol raha tha woh...

Ishu: Kuch nahi, yahi ki mein acchha cricket khelti hu...

Ishu shrugged her shoulders and left the place leaving raman alone with his jealousy...

Raman: yeh shlok ka baccha bhi na!!! (Raman nods his head!!! But he was actually very jealous.)

Edited by 13MEGHA05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'm the 1st one to reply...😊
Again an awesome update...👏
Raman feeling jealous...
IshRa scenes...👍🏼
Plz update next part soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Please edit your subject..Part 3 on Page 5..not page 4..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome awesome awesome! Loved the update...n part 4 jaldi hun! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was absolutely brilliant megha dear👏👏..Seriously I hope the Cvs are reading this😊..Even your dialogues are so realistic😃..Its perfectly tailored for those characters😊..Such a lovely update😃..I totally loved it❤️..Specifically all that I have pointed below😳

Raman: "CEO hoo koi pest control vala nahi"..omg ROFL🤣🤣

Ishu: "janwaron ki doctor hoti to tumhara illaj nahi kar deti ab tak"...ROFL🤣🤣

It was indeed very nice to see a jealous and possessive Raman😳😳

Raman suddenly comes there and puts his hands on ishita's shoulder and says
Raman: Bhabhi ki behen nahi teri bhabhi hai... Yaani meri patni..

Shlok: (after completing a dangerous run) ishitaji aapki aur meri co-ordination bahot acchi hai...Raman saw this and was very jealous and due to this, on the next ball shlok was bowled

Please continue and update soon😃..I am eagerly waiting for your next update..
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Nice OS... Will wait for next part...
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Originally posted by: JPJ83

Please edit your subject..Part 3 on Page 5..not page 4..😊

Thnx... I did so😊

Sorry for the wrong subject...😊😊😊

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