SS FAMILY BOND UPDATED PAGE 16 PART 7~~ Last Part

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                                            Part 1 - Pg. 1

                               Part 2 -  Pg.2

                               Part 3 - Pg.5

                               Part 4 - Pg. 8

                               Part 5 - Pg. 9

                               Part 6 - Pg. 13

                              Part 7 - Pg. 16

GUYS THIS IS MY FIRST EVER TRY OF WRITING A STORY. HOPE U ALL LIKE IT. If any mistake plz ignore it... 

Its 8:30 in the morning. Raman working on his laptop sitting on the bed. Ishita is sleeping on the couch. Ruhi enters... 

Goodmorning papa, ishima kaha he? she notices ishita on the couch and runs towards her. Good morning mumma... Aap yaha couch par kyu soyi hai? Papa aapko bed par sone nahi dete?  Main abhi dadu ko complain karti hu... (She is about to run. Raman tells ishita to stop her.)

Ishita:  No princess ruko... Vo muzhe couch pasand he na isliye main yaha so rahi hu... Tum itni subhe subhe yaha kya kar rahi ho?

Ruhi: mumma subhe ke 8.30 baj rahe hai...

Ishu: Kya? (She picks up her mobile and checks the time.) Ayyo 8.30 baj bhi gaye. Kitna late hogaya?

Raman: (in slow voice) aur raat bhar zagadti raho aur kya hoga????

Ishu: Kya aapne kuch kaha?

Raman: Main? Nahi maine kuch nahi kaha. Vaise bhi shaadi ke baad mein kuch bolta hu? 

Ishu: Aha! Itne bhole mat baniye? Maine suna... Main zhagda karti hu? Hamesha aap shuruwat karte hai.

Raman: Ab kon shurwat kar raha hai.

Ishu: Pehle... (Ruhi interrupted)

Ruhi: Mumma, papa Please zagdo mat. Mein ek imp baat karne ayi hu...

Ishu Sorry beta. Dekha apne aapki vajhese ruhi ko hume batana pad raha hai...

Raman: Arrey...

(Ishu signals him to keep quiet. Raman gives her a "I will like to kill her" look.)

Ishu: Bolo ruhi...

Ruhi: Thank god meri baari aa gayi! (she hugs ishita and ishita almost puzzled)

Ishu: Kya hua?

Ruhi: Mumma HAPPY FAMILY DAY' (She runs towards raman and does the same thing.)

Ishu: Family day?

Ruhi: (while returning from bed to the couch) Arrey ishima aap bhul gayi parents day mein bataya toh tha family day ke bare mein. (she shows her diary to ishu. Raman showed that he didn't look or hear the convo between ishu and ruhi but he was listening them carefully.)

Ishu: (after reading the diary) oh toh aapko ek din apne family ke saath spend karna hai aur uss pe essay likhna hai jo aapka project haoga. Wow that's a good project topic. Ruhi tum bahar jao mein bas 10 minute mein ready hokar aati hu...

At the dining table...

Ruhi: Ishima aagaye... Ishima aao aap yaha betho...

Ishu : Woh papaji mujhe aapse ek baat karni hai.. (she tells about the family day and the project)

Papaji: O koi gal nahi puttar hum log manayenge na family day. Panchgani mein humara farm house hai wahi jaeyenge hum lok. Hum lok bahot masti karenge. Aur vaise bhi aaj Friday hai aur humari ruhi ko chutti hai aur Saturday Sunday ko toh chutti hoti hi hai. Ishita puttar tu manage kar legi na chutti lena..

Ruhi: Thank you dadu..

(Ishu gives a positive nod and ruhi starts shouting in excitement wen raman enters and she shuts her mouth.)

Ishu: Kya hua ruhi tum achanak se chup kyun hogayi?

Ruhi: Ishima sab lok ajayenge par... (she points towards raman) Papa ko chutti kaise milegi?

Ishu:  Don't worry mein kuch karti hu.

In the room

Ishu:  Aapko pata hai kya hum sablok aaj panchgani ja rahe hai.

Raman : Wow cool. Njoy karo tum sab lok. Utni hi ghar mein shanti hogi.

Ishu: Wat do u mean aap nahi aa rahe hai?

Raman: No... Meri important meeting hai aaj mein nahi aa sakta.

Ishu: Meeting? Aap ruhi ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte?

Ishu: Meeting 3 mahine pehle fix hui thi ab main mukar nahi sakta. A promise is a promise.

(ishu giving a wicked smile slowly goes behind and picks up raman's phone, raman still busy with his lapop.)

Ishu: Vaise aapki kiske saath meeting hai?

Raman: (still looking in his laptop) Kyun?

Ishu: Bas aisehi puch rahi hu?

Ramna: (unknown of the coming trouble) Mr. Mehra.

(Ishu dials a no. from raman's phone)

Ishu: Hello, is this Mr. mehra.

(Raman almost shocked)

Raman : Arrey tum yeh kya kar rahi ho?

(Ishu signals him to keep quiet)

Ishu: Ya mr. mehra mein mrs. Raman kumar bhalla bol rahi hu. Actually who meri husband ki tabyet kharab ho gayi hai. Who agar aaj ki meeting cancel kar ke Tuesday ko rakhenge toh chalega kya. 

         Thts so sweet of you. Nahi meine unhi ko kaha tha call karne ke liye par who apna promise nahi todna chahte the so ab mein unki patni hu  toh apne pati ki fikar toh lagi rehte hai na. Thank you so much for understanding. Woh aapko phone karenge thodi der mein. Ya sure bye...

         Get well soon mr. raman kumar bhalla. Aapka phone.

(Raman was already pleading ishita to keep the phone with his hands joined and face so innocent.)

Raman: (Angry and completely shocked) Ishita ye sab kya tha...???

Ishu: Mein aapko sidhe sidhe pucha tha aapne jawab nahi diya. Jab ghee sidhe ungli se nahi nikalta toh ungli tedhi karni padti hai. Bas wahi kiya. Aur maine jo bhi kiya sirf ruhi ke liye kiya. Aab behes band kijiye aur apna bag pack kijiye.

(ishita leaves the room giving a wicked smile. Raman still shocked on what happened.)

Raman: Kis bala se shaadi ki maine. Isse acchha toh shaadi hi na karta. Chal bete raman tune apne hi pair pe kulhadi maari he ab bhugat...

(He simply packs the bag like an obedient husband.)

Edited by 13MEGHA05 - 9 years ago

awww😳😳 Such a cute lil story..😃 very well written dear👏👏

Haha love it! It's so cute! 

wow its so lovely...pls updt holiday in panchagani tooo

thnx guys ur comments means a lot to me... thnx for appreciation...😊

awsome...plz write next part too...

GUYZ I HAVE UPDATED THIS PART BUT NOT FULLY. PLZ LEAVE UR VALUABLE COMMENT IF I SHLD CONTINUE OR THIS IS ENOUGH. I HOPE U ALL ENJOY THIS ONE...

A medium sized bus was waiting in the compound of the family. 

Pappaji: Arrey ishita puttar agayi tum. Ruhi kaha hai?

Ishu: Woh pappaji ruhi raman ki help kar rahi hai packing mein. Bas atey hi honge.

Pappaji: Puttar bas tu hi raman ko mana sakti hai.

(raman and ruhi comes together. Ruhi has a small animal shaped fluffy bag and raman has quite a big suitcase.)

Ishu: (whispers to raman) hum waha ghar basane nahi ja rahe waha bhi apne office ka saman toh nahi le ja rahe hai aap.

Raman: tumhe isse matlab mein kuch bhi karu... {leaves from there.}

Ishu: had hai, bhalai ka toh jamana hi nahi raha...

Iyer family comes with bags...

Ishu: Appa Amma aap log bhi kahi ja rahe hai???

Iyers smile at each others...

Appa: Ishu hum log tumhare saath panchgani chal rahe hai.

Ishu: (totally surprised) What??? Saach amma...

Amma: Ha ishu... tumhara papaji ne request kiya toh hum log refuse nahi kar sake...

Ishu: Oh! Wow ab toh aur bhi maza aayegi... Vandu akka jiju aap bhi wow... I am so excited.

 Vandu: Maine amma ko bola hum log nahi ayenge par ye shravan... itna ziddi ho gaya hai na ye ke iske zidd ke aage ghutne takene pade...

Ishu: Koi baat nai akka maza ayega.

Vandu: Tumhare in laws...

Ishu: They are cool akka!!!

(Ruhi comes running)

Ruhi: Ishima.. paati bhi humare saath ayegi.. wow. (Looking at shravan confusingly and ishita notices that.)

Ishu: Ruhi aao main tumhe kissese milati hu, (she holds ruhi's hands and brings her in front of shravan) Ruhi yeh shravan hai aur shravan yeh ruhi hai tum dono brother aur sister ho samaz gaye dono.

Shravan: Mumma yeh meri sister hain?

Bala: Kal hi tum ro rahe they na ke tumhe ek choti sister chahiye dekho mil gayi...

Shravan: Yeh humare saath rahegi?

Vandu: No beta yeh ishita maasi ke saath rahegi, voh unki beti hai na. Par abhi kuch dino ke liye vo humare saath rahegi.

(Romi calls out everyone to get in the bus. Shravan and ruhi hold hands and run towards the bus.)

In the bus...

Ruhi: Ishima mein aur shravan aur mutth ek saath beithenge...

Ishu: okay beta.

(ishita sits alone on a seat. Mihir is seated one seat behind her. Raman enters and sees ishita sitting alone and nods his head.)

Raman: (in his mind)Agar iss Jhansi je rani ke paas gaya toh use lagega ki mein use bhaav de raha hu. Kya karu? (sees mihir) ah mihir!!

(He is about to go to mihir's seat when...)

Pappaji: arrey raman puttar waha kaha ja rahe ho? Ishita waha bethi hai. Dekho akelihi bethi hai jao uske paas.

Raman : woh papa mein mihir ke saath beth jaunga that's fine...

Bala: Arey ab kyun Sharma rahe ho shaadi h gayi hai tumhari ab apne patni ke saath beth sakte ho. Koi kuch nahi bolega...

(Raman and ishita look at each other and everybody laughs at them. Mihika enters.Romi was seated alone in the opposite row in front of mihir's seat. She has two options and is confused. Suddenly rinki comes and sits besides romi now she has no option but to sit beside mihir. She is happy in heart and even mihir is happy but romy was jealous... Bus starts...)

Mihika: mein tumhare baju mein baithi hu iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki meine tumhe maaf kiya. So be in your limits.

Mihir simply and innocently nods.

After sometime...

Rinki: Kya pappaji bore ho raha hai...

Mihika: Actually mere pass ek idea hai kyun na hum rapid fire khele?

Toshiji:  ra-api-id phire yeh kya hota hai?

Mihika: Arrey auntyji hum ek gaana gayenge usse ek word chun kar aapko dusra gaana gaana hai.

Amma: Koi bhi word?

Mihika:  Haan peri amma koi bhi word.

Simi: Thik hai phir bhallas vs iyers ho jaye...

Vandu: Ho jaye... Ishu humari team mein.

Simi: Bhul gayi kya who bhi abhi ek bhalla hai?

Vandu:  Yaad hai. Par phir tumhari team mein 7 log ho jayenge(including mihir) aur humari team mein paanch.toh mukabla barabari ka hona chahiye na?

Simmi: Oh chal thik hai... lelo tumhari ishita ko par shuru hum karenge manjoor?

Vandu: Manjoor... Start.

Simmi: Oh ji mummyji aap shuru karo in madrasiyon ko harana hai aaj toh...

Toshiji: dum maro dum mith jaye gum... PIYO SUBHA SHYAM oh sorry!!!😛... kya tha woh simmi?

(Everybody almost shocked. Simmi signalled toshiji to keep quiet. )

Simmi:  O ji  mummyji bolo subha shyam...

Toshiji: Haan wahi... Hare Krishna hare ram...

Vandu: Aaj na chodenge tumhe DUM DUMA DUM...

Simmi: Aaa dekhe zara kisme kitna hai DUM...

                Jam ke rakhna kadam mere sathiyaaa...😈

Bala: SAATHIYAAA yeh tune kya kiya...

                Maine kiya tera intezaar itna karona muzhe pyaar...❤️

(Vandu and bala dance and then vandu feels shy giving the fierce atmosphere a break.)

Romi: (continuously looking at mihika and mihir notices it.)

 Intaha ho gayi INTAZAAR ki

aayi na kuch khabar meri yaar ki😎

Mihika:(emotionally looking at mihir and mihir speechless) YAARA dil mein kabse hai tu...

                Jabse mein hu tabse hai tu... khayi meine rab ki kasam yaara rab se pehle hai tu...😭(Mihika in tears ishu notices and looks at her heartless husband who couldn't see their love.)

Mihir:  Tujh mein RAB dikhta hai yaara mein kya karoon...

                Sajde sar jhookta hai yaara mein kya karoon.. (looking at mihika and placing his hands on hers and she hastily removed her hand and rubed her tears...)💔

(In the meanwhile everybody finishes singing now only ishu & raman remaining.)

Mihika: Akka gao varna hum haar jayenge...

Romi: Tik tik 6 tik tik 7

Raman: Yeh kya gayegi.. Haar gaye yeh lok...

Romi: Tik tik9 tik...

Ishu: Kehte hai khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye

tera milna hai uss rab ka ishara mano...  TUZKO BANAYA mere jaise hi kisi ke liye...

                Kuch toh hai tuzhase rabta... (Looking at raman initially and later at ruhi.)

(Amma imagines ishu and raman dancing.)

Mihika: Jiju agar ab aapne nahi gaaya toh aap haar jayenge... soch lo...

Mihika tik tik 1 tik tik 2

Rinki: Bhai gao na...

Mihika: Tik tik 7 tik tik 8 tik

Raman:Kabhi Kabhi Mere Dil Me, Khayal Aata Hai
  Ke Jaise TUZKO BANAYA Gaya Hai Mere Liye
  Tu Ab Se Pahle Sitaro Me Bas Rahi Thi Kahi
 Tujhe Zami Pe Bulaya Gaya Hai Mere Liye
 

Rinki: oh ho!!! Bhai ek dum perfect gaana gaaya hai...

Fully dedicated to bhabhi.

(Raman did not say anything just looks down.)😳

Bala: Dekho toh kitna Sharma raha hai.

Vandu: Haan, Punjabi bhi sharmate hai!!!!

Simmi: oy chup kar woh toh bhai ka kuch saman kho gaya hai na bas wahi dhund raha hai.

Mihika: bilkul, jiju ka dil kho gaya hai... hahaha...

(they keep on fighting for sometime.)

Raman: (whispers) yeh gaana sirf ruhi ke liye tha!!!

Ishu: Maine aapse kuch nahi poocha.Aab jab aapne bata hi diya hai toh meri bhi sun lijiye maine bhi yeh gaana sirf ruhi ke liye gaya...

Ruhi; Arrey koi meri baat toh suno muzhe bhi gaana hai...

Pappaji: Haan toh gaana beta.

Ruhi: mein koi bhi gaana gaoo?

Raman: Roohi tumhe jo ata hai who gao.

Ruhi: Muzhe maaf karna om sai ram tuzhse pehle lungi mummy daddy ka naam (saying so she hugs raman and ishita and both have teary eyes.The whole family witnesses a beautiful family moment. Romi immediately captures a photo.)

Pappaji: Hey waheguru mere raman ke parivaar ko aise hi khush rakhna. (and closes his eyes when a tear falls down.)

(After some time.)

Driver: Oh pappaji aapka farm house aagaya!!!

(Everybody looks out and iyers amazed to see such a beautiful farm house.)

  Edited by 13MEGHA05 - 10 years ago

Superb..😊continue soon...Panchgani mein aagayaa..Ab aayega mazaa..😆

Nice story!!! Superb update!!!!! 😊

Awww dear...such a lovely update..😃😃