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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
wow...nice teaser...

nads when are you goin to update UNTAGGLED
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
Awesome teaser!
Do continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
wow... ruhi with ishi and raman...
now shagun came...

hope they sort out everything...


thanks for the pm...

loved the teaser too... raman took everything on him..

pls cont soon..

and do pm me when u update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
chap4 and 5 were really fantastic.
Gosh! Shagun!
Hate that.
Ishu kissed Raman! Yayy
IshRaHi together! Yahooo
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Awesome update di
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Awesome teaser :) Plz update it soon ... I wonder kw why Raman is beating Ashok?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
hey just read all the parts...!!
superb updates,,,!!!
gosh raman ishita are too sweet...!!! can't get enough of them
and that sneezing part..!! gosh...!!!
love how they meet with ruhi and got custody of ruhi for weekends...!!
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shagun started shouting as she saw Ruhi coming out of their bedroom "see i told you they have Ruhi" she tries to come near but Mihir came in between " get a side , my washman told me Raman took her " she grab Ruhi arm

"Mama" she tightly hug Ishita

"Where is Raman?" she asked Ishita

"you talk to me " she frees Ruhi arm & pass her to Simi

" see i don't want to fight with you , Raman brought her here so he is the culprit "she tries to go in bedroom

"excuse me that is my bedroom & i don't like outsiders & secondly we both are one, you say what whatever you wanted to say him" Ishita hold the handle,she look at Ishita from head to toe

"Ashok call them " she look at him & said

" who" Ishita asked

" Raman had kidnapped Ruhi ,& we have filed a case " she smirk

" Mr Ashok wait a second " Ishita gave Shagun the paper "see he had taken permission from The court that we can keep Ruhi on weekends " she smiled

Mr Bhalla look at Ishita , she explain him everything . Shagun look at Ashok who had a cunning smile on his face "kya " Ashok smiled & came forward

"these are fake papers " he said without looking at it

"how can you say that ?" Mihir asked

" as i trapped your genius Raman, i hired a lawyer & made these fake papers " he ask the policemen to go head ,everyone look at each other .

"Raman come out , i have planned a wedding gift for you " he cunningly laughed

Ishita look around "it was i who brought Ruhi here , you can arrest me " she asked the Police

"You " Ashok became confused

"chala " she walked out without looking back

"she is telling lies she is protecting her husband" Ashok tries to convince police but Ishita herself seated in police van, Ishita family too walk out , Simi tries to explain them

"Romi go wake Raman " Mrs Bhalla shouted

"Mihir take care of him " Ishita called him & said

"bhabi he will not leave anyone of us " he ran back upstairs to wake him ,but Ishita was gone

" he can't get bail as it is weekend ,what he did for me i can sacrifice for him" she shyly smiled


At home in Raman bedroom everyone was standing & shouting & crying , he was dizzy & was not getting what they all were saying ,he look around everyone was there except Ishita "shut up everyone" he placed his hands on his ear " where is Ruhi & Ishita ?" he shouted

Mr Bhalla come ahead " Police took them" Mihir quickly told him everything

" What" he jump out of bed " why you guys didnot woke me ?" he shouted & ran out ,he saw Ishita mom sitting in his home dining room crying, he walked to her & kneel down in front of her & hold her both hands" i will come back with her , it is my promise " he quickly stand & ran out , he drives as fast as he could to the police station. through out the time he had flashback oh the morning incident , he again & again hit the steering wheel




As they lock up Ishita Shagun walked to her " why you saved him?" she asked her

she didnot replied & turn her face other side , she saw Raman coming in he ran straight to her cupped her face behind bars ,he shakes his head & caress her face" i will get you out " he whisper

" you can't meet her " Police inspector asked his men to move him ,Raman walked & pull Ashok arm before he could react he gave him a tight punch right on his nose

"Ashok" Shagun tries to grab him as he fell on ground

"you coward " he grab him from his collar , blood was running down his nose

"Mihir stop him " Ishita shouted from back, Raman jolt Ashok & turn back & look at Ishita

"it was my fault not my wife" he was about to hit when Mihir & Romi pull him back , at the same time other policemen came forward & all attacked on him

"stop it " Ishita tries to open & scream ,Raman was on floor , Romi & Mihir came in between to protect him ,& help him to get up he look at crying Ishita a smile appear on his face


"see he had hurt me" Ashok was on his feet " i want to file case against him "he asked officer

"yes put charges on me & free my wife" Raman said to the while wiping his blood

"mr this is police station & you can't order us , put him too behind bars " the officer order

"let my wife go" Raman shouted but they didn't listen & lock him with Ishita

"what was that?" she attacked him like a tigress ,but freezes as she saw his blood " choot lagi " she gently wipe his chin with her finger " i thought you will handle it sensibly " she try to ease his pain by blowing her breath on his wound

"i am not getting how those papers are fake? " he look at her who had placed her hand on his forehead

"Raman"she tried to go near bar he grab her arm

" we both will go out together , dare not try to create a scene" he said seriously he shiver badly


"Raman we can't get bail before monday" Mihir said sadly

" you go home & take care of everyone we are fine here" Raman said without looking at Ishita

Mihir look in the cell there was a broken bench ,& a mud pot."hello you can't meet them " the constable came close to them , as Mihir turn back to go Ishita call him

"Mihir please bring his warm clothes blankets & medicine he is burning like anything" she whisper ,he look at Raman whose face was turning red

"Ishita i wish you had listened me , with him you will only have such adventure " Shagun cunning smiled , she didn't reply she walk back to Raman who had sat on floor ,she gave him water ,he drank it "trust me i" she wanted to say but he placed his finger on her lips

" i promise your Amma i will come back with you, we both very well know it is weekend & court is closed ,we can't get bail before monday" he stop as he saw a lady constable

"madam get up " he tried to grab Ishita arm

"hey dare not touch her " Raman came in between

"this is men cell " she pointed at other criminal who enter the cell & stared at Ishita from head to toe,she hide herself behind Raman ." you go from here " he whisper while blocking his view

"Raman" she whisper

"Please before i lose my temper "he clenched his fist as the guy came close to them ,Ishita quickly walk out . She passed the officer desk where Ashok was filling case

"see he is drunk " he pointed at Raman

"excuse me he is not drunk , he is having fever that is the reason his eyes are red " she angrily said

"fever" he had a laughter

" you can call Dr & have his check up , he had 103 in morning " she wrapped her arm around her chest,Shagun look at her "please officer i have a request , he is sick if you allow him to stay with me " officer look at Raman who was sitting holding his head

"this is jail Ishita " Shagun smiled

" you are forgetting Shagun i am DR before his wife " she shakes her head & look at Romi & Mihir who had come back with their stuff ,she walk away

" we tried to call the lawyer , but the cell is switched off " Mihir said

" I trust Raman it is Ashok trick , he has trapped us " Ishita whisper as the police lady locked her in other cell

"bhabi this medicine you asked me to bring" Romi asked her

"yes but he has to take something before that ,in empty stomach he can't have "she became worried tries to see him

"he will not listen us " Mihir said helplessly

"at night i forced him to have milk " she said "Please request them to shift him here " she whisper took their stuff from them " i will take care of him" she look around in dark cold room

Shagun listened their conversation "they are so close or she is just pretending" she wonder " officer let them stay together ,Ashok they are newly married don't be so mean"she winked at Ashok who at first became angry but then gave smile cunningly

The officer look at Raman who was coughing badly , "OK" he agrees & asked his man to shift Raman .

"chalo or you too want to stay here " Ashok asked Shagun ,who had walk to a corner to see their reunion

" 1 minute i will join you outside " she asked him to


" hero bana ka shoq ha,wear this ,it is so cold here " Ishita gave him his jacket who had seated next to her on mat ,she covered him with blanket " have this " she tries to feed him sandwich

"kahan ka hero , i let down my daughter " he said in weak voice & took a bite .he placed his head on her shoulder falling himself free on her

" you didn't meri Ruhi ka strong papa we are proud of you " she check his forehead ,he look at her they had a eyelock ,she shyly look away as his gaze made her nervous ,he slide down & placed his head on her knee

"bus "he grab her hand as she covered him with blanket

" kal subha ka khaya hai " she put a small piece in his mouth ,she poke his cheek asking him to chew



"Shagun" Ashok pull her arm

"they are in love " she whisper Ashok look in direction where she was look ,Raman was lying in Ishita lap his eyes was closed , she was running her fingers in his hair ,Mihir kneeling down near bar talking to her

"All your fault , why you didn't let them stay in different cell" he got irritated

"I will ask officer to put them in different cell " she fumed after seeing them



To be cont

Edited by naddiya26 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
loved it update soon👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely...
ashok made them as fake papers and put ishi in jail... but our hero came with her to jail..

and now shagun is jealous to see them togther...

wow... pls cont soon...

thanxx for the pm..

happy valentine day...

and ya dont forget to pm me next time...

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