IshMan FF: Be Intehaan ch2 pg5 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aamina2013

hey Fiza that's was great and now I'm really looking forward to the update. please make it fast.
thanks for the pm hun 🤗

Aww Aamina dear thanks I'll update ASAP 😳😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the pm and sorry for the late reply,been busy with all the christmas partying😉 . Awesome
FF 👏 So their love story has to start all over again and Ishita won't even remember Ruhi 😭 Looking forward to the next part and your other FF as well 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really good start! A little fast paced but I like the story. Reminded me of The Vow.. heheh I look forward to reading more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great start. continue soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey.

I like the concept it's unique. I remember watching one series which was quite similar but not the same to this and the guy was played by Raman ( don't know the actors real name) it's coincidence isn't it haha! But yeah i'll love to read the next part.

This lovestory is full of pain for sure! Its cute because she'll fall for him twice! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its too good..i just read complete ...
Done :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome...i love the concept...sounds superr duperr interesting...
continue soon...

& i really hope YHM DTs put up an index of all ff/ss/os on ishman...

its really getting tough to keep a track of all d wonderful creations...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb Concept!
It would be great to see How Raman will make Ishita Remember him, their Daughter and on the top the relation they share.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is a members post only do not copy use my work without my permission

Hi guys sorry for late update been busy n I'm updating from my cell sry for any mistakes
Chapter 2

She looks at im shocked "Your my what ?... hu ... hu..husband" ishitha says
Ishitha Sweetheart yes im Raman your my wife and but he was cut off

"Bas Enough BULL SHIT! You are not my anything... and im your nothing". (at that moment Raman. felt as if some ripped his heart out and stepped on it )
he had tears in his eyes
he bent his head down and looked to hide his tears
she looked at him
"Dehko i didn't mean... im ...im sorry very sorry" she said and put her hand on his
he looked at her
"no jaan its ok don't be sorry its not your fault its difficult for you koi baat nahi " says Raman

"Thanks for understanding but listen i'm not married.. im engaged where is my fiance kahna hai woh ?And mere family were is my Amma ,Appa, Akka , jiju and mihikha? and how did i end up here? She questions

" ahh my head." she yelps in pain


"Jaan please rest dont think much the rest I promise appki har question ka answer I'll. Give par right now you need rest ."

nurse usko injection de do says the doctor
She dozes off to sleep
Raman caresses her head loving and turns to the doctor

doctor: she is fine its normal she is scared bas needs time call her family she needs people she knows near her to her you are a stranger

next day Raman had gone home to get some of ishitha's clothes and get her some food she would love and on the way he picked up her favorite flowers he had just informed his brother he knew his family and didn't want to overwhelm ishitha after his family was the typical crazy loud punjabi family but very loving .

he came back to the hospital

"Mrs. Ishitha Raman Kumar " ? he asked

she has been shifted to a normal room from the private room on the 3rd level

what why is everything ok she is fine na asks Raman

"yes just her family wanted make here shift rooms

" But why"? Asked Raman
"Mr. Raman Kumar here is the 5 lacks back you had deposited for the private room" says the receptionist .

"The bill has been changed n paid in full and from now on her other medical bills and medication will be taken care of by the Iyer Family ."

That did it
"You listen to me give every single penny back to the Iyers understood I am the patients Husband it's my right and responsibility to take care of my wife .. This second forward I will clear all the bill now n in future got that" . Yells Raman

Raman ran to the room he was so angry he was about to burst

He walks in

Ishu meri bacha open na your favorite idlli saber you love it
says her mom and feeds her

" Just a minute she won't eat that she will have protein ishitha here is some chicken corn soup "says Raman

"Haye Haye ayee Yo na na nonveg chi ishu veg hi kha thi hai" says her mother

"Dehko haan ishitha veg thi par. Past 6 yrs se nonveg she has been eating "Says Raman

" ho hi nahi sak thi ishu and nonveg " says vandana her Akka

I'm not lying this is during the type she was expecting Ruhi Ishitha herself wanted kyunki her iron was very low and baby ki liye theek nahi tha , that is why started eating she doesn't eat on Tuesday or Thursday though says Raman .


her father finally talks
Choro na usko soup pene do let her have it abhi ishu is weak Says Mr. Iyer

Just then Ramans family rushes in the room
" Oye ishitha puter Tum theek ho na ?Raman puter ek gal dhaso yeh sab ki hua ? Aur tum kaise ho yeh chot wot woh driver ka naam baatao usko tho main Worriedly asks Toshi ji

" Ma please app sab yahan kyun ayye Romi ma ko kyun lake ayye yahaan ?"

"Oye kyun ki kya matalab huh meri bahu yahaan hospital main hain aur main kaise nahi aao huh?"

" papa ma ko Handel karo na itna hyper ho re hai ."

" Toshi ji thand rak" hospital hai yeh says bhalla ji

"Exactly Ma iss liye I told mihir not tell you all par woh ... Dehko ma
Over react mat karo ... Tum sab jao ishitha needs rest "

Dehka yeh hai humari ishu ka so called pati no respect for his own mother yeh huh shaadi kar li meri beti se Kaisa larka hai yeh mannerless aur uski family ko tho dehko itna loud uff meri pyaari se ishu in sab ki saath kaise rehthi hai... Yeh shaadi uski life ki sab se badi mistake tha chi chi chi... Says mrs. Iyer

" Manner less huh? Well I'll show you just how Mannerless I can be got that and Excuse me what did you say huh Mistake ? Just for your information this was a blessing maine socha ki mere ma and family were crazy but you beat us too it this reaction is the very reason ishitha and I never told you about our wedding 6 yrs before aap sab aise hi the aur abhi aise hain ."
Says Raman

Kya? what i didnt tell you all about my shaadi why did I hide it from them Asks ishitha looking Raman

um you didnt want them there especially appki pyaari se Amma iss liye hum chh ke se shaadi kar liye only Mihika aur Mihir the for the wedding
.But jab I told my family the accepted you whole heartedly and we had a huge reception we even went to tell your family everyone accepted our shaadi
.Except your Amma in fact your Amma said ki tum uski beti nahi ho us din se uski sirf do betiyaan hai ...your Akka and Mihika .And if that wasn't enough she didn't allow your appa or anyone else to meet you . But your Appa and Mihika aur jiju chupke se use meet us kyunki your Amma was the mother from hell I mean khud ki beti ki saath chi you have any shame? Now suddenly after 6 years ishu yaad aaye says Raman

" How Dare you Talk to my mother like that ? Amma was Right Mannerless and rude ek number ki badtameez ho tum ... I don't know what happened in these 6 yrs but Jo bhi hai you have no right to talk like that to my Amma understood Mr. Raman Kumar Apologize right now say sorry to my Amma. Yells Ishitha

" I love you ishitha but I will not say sorry to my so called Monster in law got that and if you hadn't lost your memory you would have never asked me to apologize after what she did to us yeh Amma of yours was wanting and tired to seprate us pata hai ... And dehko abhi yeh hi Kare hai .. Says Raman

" Enough not another word to or about my Amma understood ..Amma you are so right how could I have hurt you all and iss insaan se shaadi chi ... I would have never married a man who is o rude and disrespectful to my family. Says ishitha.

"Well whatever you say won't change the truth my darling wife and either will my love for ever get less just because monster in law here is putting ghee aag main ." says Raman

"Bhalla ji dehka Humari bahu jitne sweet ,pyaari aur achi hai uski ma abhi bhi karvi karela ki jaise hai dehko kaise mere putra ki zindagi main pad de Kari hai chance pe dance Kare hai hai ... " says Toshi ji

" wah kya baat hai jaisa beta waise ma you are telling what not about my Ammma Nd your mother ko dehko says ishitha

" oh hello just a second mere ma accepted you and our shaadi and jab you were expecting Ruhi na your mother didn't even turn and look at you to see how you were doing mere yeh ma did and you loved her as much as you love your Amma.. Says Raman

"Dehko Ishitha jaan I never wanted to fight especially not now you our already so stressed and weak... I'm worried for you I'm sorry jaan just whenever I see your Amma everything comes back to me what all has happened .. I promise I'll try not to say a thing to your Amma waise I have no interest what so ever to dose but still or you ... The one who is my love , my jaan I'll they and control my anger just because you our my world and I love you he says and caress her head and is about to kiss her forehead when.

Ishitha pushes him away

" you may love me , I may be your jaan ,your world... But I know I don't love you I only have disgust and annoyance in my heart for such a rude man .

"ishitha you do love me and always have.and will I can prove it
yeh lo and shows the their shaadi pics and pictures of them when they were dating...

Ishitha saw the pics

"i looks so happy Amma im sure i wasnt forced i look in love "says ishitha


"jo bhi hai ishu beti ghar chalo are house "says Amma

"yeh mere biwi has doctor says normal life mera saath is her normal life
Got that and my wife will come home with us not you yells Raman

how he is talking with me dheka just look at him yell her Amma

Just then they hear Mamma

Ruhi comes running and rushes into ishitha arms.

Ishitha looks at her and caresses her face

"Ma ma kya hua ? Ouchy " asks Ruhi and holds her hand

" haan Ruhi don't worry your mom ishitha this is Ruhi our daughter he says

Ishitha looks at Raman then Ruhi

"My cutie lil doll I'm fine mera Bacha yeh tho Kuch nahi hai "
Ruhi kisses her hand that is in a sling and her forehead which is bandaged

"Thank you my Gudiya ab I will get well very soon and pain is also gone"

"Amma please im going home with Raman most important is i need to be with my daughter she needs her mother and I also need to find out more what happened in 6 yrs

"Ishu tum ghar aao Ruhi ki saath "

"No Amma muhje Raman ki saath ki jaana hoga "

She he leaves

her Appa goes after her

thank you jaan he goes to kiss forehead she moves away

Doctor comes in

She needs rest you may all vist later

Outside the room

"Mihir why did you tell Mihika she brought everyone here na " asks Raman

"No Raman I only told our family bas"

Maine mr. Iyer ko kaha tha says bhalla ji

next day they go home

she enters a small cute 4 bedroom flat

right when you eneter there is huge picture in the hall hung on the main wall
It is there wedding picture Raman lifted her in his arms n She smiling and looking at him lovingly .

Welcome home ma Ruhi runs in her arms
Raman is looking at his wife n daughter n thinks yes it's true a kid brings two people closer ...ek baar phir you will fall back in love with me and our Ruhi will help in me getting my old ishu back thinks Raman .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update. Poor raman.
I feel so sorry for him...
Hope ishu gets her memory back
Superb written! 😆

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