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This serial was past paced, had good dialogues, had some pretty good scenes......
you would notice everything is in the past tense...... coz how much more of suspense do they want to build ?? looks like they will build the suspense at the cost of logic, common sense and viewer's patience.
1. Her mama goes to BBY but doesn't see the newspaper cutting, or the patients face.
2. Abha sends prasad to BBY ......
both the above are above realm of possibilities....
Then the papers arrive but naturally shelly is the one who had to see it and not anyone else.
1. She comes to BBy before these 2
2. A patient who even for a minute is not away from the oxygen mask is dragged away from it.
3. The mother does not even notice Karan's stricken look
4. She does not even know who Shelly is
5. She takes more than ( god alone knows) how long to get a glass of water
6. Karan survives without all the oxygen and monitoring machines for so long
7. Shelly whips Karan around like a rag doll ( shown in very bad taste - Rajshri's)
8. Abha stands near the window ringing the bell bu doesnt peep in ...to see Karan reaching out to her but of course she could recognise the coughing sounds that karan made!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Seriously this serial is now dragging it out and making it obnoxious.... till now it was nice to see how abha and karan always amanaged to get one up on the bad guys but this is now becoming ridiculous.
you would notice everything is in the past tense...... coz how much more of suspense do they want to build ?? looks like they will build the suspense at the cost of logic, common sense and viewer's patience.
1. Her mama goes to BBY but doesn't see the newspaper cutting, or the patients face.
2. Abha sends prasad to BBY ......
both the above are above realm of possibilities....
Then the papers arrive but naturally shelly is the one who had to see it and not anyone else.
1. She comes to BBy before these 2
2. A patient who even for a minute is not away from the oxygen mask is dragged away from it.
3. The mother does not even notice Karan's stricken look
4. She does not even know who Shelly is
5. She takes more than ( god alone knows) how long to get a glass of water
6. Karan survives without all the oxygen and monitoring machines for so long
7. Shelly whips Karan around like a rag doll ( shown in very bad taste - Rajshri's)
8. Abha stands near the window ringing the bell bu doesnt peep in ...to see Karan reaching out to her but of course she could recognise the coughing sounds that karan made!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Seriously this serial is now dragging it out and making it obnoxious.... till now it was nice to see how abha and karan always amanaged to get one up on the bad guys but this is now becoming ridiculous.
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