My First Crush - Companion Piece, Pg3 - Page 2

aww that was so cute lolz i could actually relate to it..cuz i have been there, done that!
good job!! 👏 i enjoyed reading it!

grt story.
i just luv ur style of writting.
beautifully written.
pls do write more short stories.
i havent read ur story CITD.
but i would surely read it.

luv
tina

so cute and soo true!!! everyone has a first crush and its amazing even though most first crushes are simple and ordinary they have a extraordianry affect on us because we remember them the rest of our lives. 👏 👏 👏

Woahhhhhhhhhhh............... GREAT Story!!! You know thats exactly how my first crush was...

Staring...
Jealous...
Talking...
Wishing He liked me...
Thinking he liked me...
Thinking at night...
First Thought as soon as I get up...
Staring...
Getting Over...
"He's not that Great.. Really"...

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

👏

Originally posted by: coolestme7

Woahhhhhhhhhhh............... GREAT Story!!! You
know thats exactly how my first crush was...

Staring...
Jealous...
Talking...
Wishing He liked me...
Thinking he liked me...
Thinking at night...
First Thought as soon as I get up...
Staring...
Getting Over...
"He's not that Great.. Really"...

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

👏

Aaww thank u 😃 It's based on experience so no wonder it's realistic. We
all go thru it, don't we? 😳 Sad part is, in my case, it's and on and off
thing so currently I still have a teeny tiny crush on him which surfaces
sometimes. 😳

Originally posted by: tangina r

so cute and soo true!!! everyone has a first crush and
its
amazing even though most first crushes are simple and ordinary they
have a
extraordianry affect on us because we remember them the rest of our
lives.
👏 👏 👏

Very true. My first crush was/is an idiot but still pretty unforgettable. 😳

Originally posted by: tnbedi

grt story.
i just luv ur style of writting.
beautifully written.
pls do write more short stories.
i havent read ur story CITD.
but i would surely read it.

luv
tina

Thanks so much Bedi. 😃 and do go read CITD. Just click on the link in
my siggy.

Originally posted by: -Pinky-

aww that was so cute lolz i could actually relate to
it..cuz i have been there, done that!
good job!! 👏 i enjoyed reading it!

Thanks Pinky

Originally posted by: ~Sirius*Ysh~

haan haan the nagging
comittee can cum on but not now yaar!!! after her MUN gets over... the
poor thing 😳...

but no if u think ur off the hook for CtID ur rong!!!!!!

d comittee is still on for that 😛😆

❤️Ysh❤️

Thanks YSh and I'm scared as h*ll. 😆

Originally posted by: coolniyu

🤣☺️
absolutely perfectly too cute!
*sigh* i do believe im part of the non-normal teens atleast i dont
seem to have realised if i like any1 yet 😆 [okok ysh will jump on me
now i just know it 😆]

simply love the way u wrote it!! perfect theme song: mera pehla pehla
pyaar...jo ek mahina tak raha 😆[i really should start gettin over my
bolly craze 😭]

its too funny too unique n too perfect!! i feel u wouldnt be the type to let
CiTD take a backseat at any point so i demand right now that u write
more short stories as well!

is it possible to get the nagging committee on the case? 😳

love,
niyup😳

Really? No crush? I'll have to ask Ysh about that. *evil smile* 😆

Nahh don't get over ur Bolly craxe, just go check out the Bollywood
section on FF.net Sure u'll love it. And I'm a bit Bollycrazy too. But not as
much as u! 😆

I'm trying to continue CITD now but I've hit a point of low inspiration. No
worried tho, a part should be up this weekend. And no, u can't get the
nagging committee on the case. 😆

Originally posted by: ~Sirius*Ysh~

first crush!!! gosh thats a
cute thing...

you know my first crush was whom i got over 2 months back when i
realised i liked his friendship too much to spoil it with all this crush crap
😆😆😆...

and totally cute story shasha!!!! i totally love your style and the story was
so werll worded nd written... so realistic...

great going 👏 👏 👏

❤️Ysh❤️

LOL U did a good thing. 👏 And thanks so much for ur lovely
comments. 😃

Originally posted by: shriyaroxxx

great story... im really in love wid ur writing u
know 😳
well, my first crush, umm, it was wen i was 5 yrs old 😆 it actually
lasted like 1 minute, maybe 2 😆
& today, today i have 44 crushes, all at d same time 😆 😳
but really nice 👏

Hahaha thanks Shriya. 😆

I hardly ever log in on IF, but i had to leave my comment here cause it's so well written! Such a common/simple plot, but what wonderful writing! Why don't you do more short stories? I promise I'll read then, cause I'm kinda lazy to read the long one's and more so impatitent to wait for the next part to be posted...lol

keep writing! You rock!

Originally posted by: putturani

Aaww thank u 😃 It's based on experience so no wonder it's realistic. We
all go thru it, don't we? 😳 Sad part is, in my case, it's and on and off
thing so currently I still have a teeny tiny crush on him which surfaces
sometimes. 😳

Ya... I know that happens to me too... for the past 4 yrs.. been on and off and on and off🤢

But still want to tell you again how really great it was seriously... SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!

GREAT JOB👏!!!

wow....thats so realistic...gr8 job.... 👏

It was great..I remember my first crush, god..can't belive i once liked him!..but now..my crush list is at about 10000000😊

Fantastic read!! Simple theme, and so wonderfully articulated in words!!

Makes one smile, giggle, blush, and taking them back in time, to their first ever crush!!

Kudos to ya!! Looking forward to read more from you! 😊