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Posted: 18 years ago
really awesome!!! 👏
i visited this section for the first itme and i cudn't sleep without reading all the chapters...................this story is awesome............update soon cuz i am too addicted to it 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
ysh... another fan asking u to update!! hurry up and update! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hope you are having fun with your cousins Ysh! Can't wait for your next chapter. 😊 Update soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nitu07

really awesome!!! 👏
i visited this section for the first itme and i cudn't sleep without reading all the chapters...................this story is awesome............update soon cuz i am too addicted to it 😳

awwww...😳😳😳 thanks a lot... ok ok ill post part one of the next chapter cos i havent finished with it fully...

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Posted: 18 years ago

hey guys! im so sorry but that file was replaced by an older one and now i have to retype that entire chapter 😭😭😭

now itll take longer...😭

im soooo sorry 😵 😵 relly 😔😔

❤️Ysh❤️

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Posted: 18 years ago
😳 ysh!!! chalo koi baat nahi.... retype it fast & update asap.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey ysh! amazing chapter 😳 😳

So...alex n kevin are doing well with their pretence at dating! n rhea seems to be snappish! well poor her, not only is she jealous but she also has to deal with batman n robin 😆 😆

I wonder what is gonna happen if robin comes along to school...ryan going after her??? :-? aah well...if there's some ryan-alex chemistry...I won't mind 😉

Coming to david....he seems to be popping up more frequently in the fic nowadays...:-? n he's another ryan is he? Like Rhea said...girl crazy 😆 😆

Will bertha make an appearance and will anything happen b/w dave n hilly in d near future?? :-?

N when will these elections kick start?? in the next century??:-w
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: xMarauderx

Hey ysh! amazing chapter 😳 😳

halshuuuuuuuuuu u cammmmeeeeeee 🤗🤗🤗

So...alex n kevin are doing well with their pretence at dating! n rhea seems to be snappish! well poor her, not only is she jealous but she also has to deal with batman n robin 😆 😆

batman... nw yea ill make ryan d batman... nd dont talk bout robin to me shez gonna be the worlds most hated charector i tell u!!!!!

I wonder what is gonna happen if robin comes along to school...ryan going after her??? :-? aah well...if there's some ryan-alex chemistry...I won't mind 😉

yes yes of course... but i just hope im not overdoing it u knw... so im lying low on dem for a while...

Coming to david....he seems to be popping up more frequently in the fic nowadays...:-? n he's another ryan is he? Like Rhea said...girl crazy 😆 😆

yea a LOT lyk ryan.. but a little MORE girl crazy dan him 😉

Will bertha make an appearance and will anything happen b/w dave n hilly in d near future?? :-?

sure! bertha is gonna be a totaly clinger on david u knw 😆😆

N when will these elections kick start?? in the next century??:-w

e su! im taking the story slowly cos i have no plans for it... this is my FIRST write-wht-pops-in-ur-mind story... nd i was planning on d campaigning starting in the nxt chappy ... i wrote it also damn d file thingie...[:X]

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Posted: 18 years ago
update plz!!! 😃
cant wait 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

okok i just typed out part 10a... cos the other i still have to remember what i wrote :-< but very well here

PART 10a

David was still standing at the doorway to the bathroom, unable to register what had just happened. He had seen his sister doing the laundry, his sister had a smile on the face, something that was very rare since his father had passed away and Bertha had called! He groaned loudly at the last turn of events. She was one person he never wanted to see EVER! Whatever could she want now? But right now he was more curious about his sister.

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Alex was humming the tune of Shakira's 'Hips Don't Lie' as the song filtered to her from the computer speakers. She had never felt so light before… at least not since her father had remarried… And after so long, it felt nice to be liked by somebody for who you were… sure her brother liked her, but she could tell he didn't like most of the things she did… it had made her feel like he was putting up with her…

But he was not like that… no he wasn't… he had liked her even before she had looked hot and all…

She was disturbed from her reverie by a curt knock on her door. She looked up startled, to see that she had hardly done any of her homework. She sighed. She would have to call Hilly and ask her to dictate the answers over the phone. Again. She looked in the direction of the door, not bothering to move her hair from her eyes and lazily muttered a 'come in'.

"Hey squirt…" She scrunched her eyes and peered through her hair, hoping David saw her expression. He had stopped calling her squirt when… uhmm… a long time ago.

"What?" she drawled lazily.

"Dunno… just wanted to have a talk.. a heart to heart brother sister talk with you…" he said, walking in what he attempted to be a casual style, with his hands in his pocket.

"Do you want me to scare Bertha off?" she asked, not at all fooled by her brother's, er, attempts at casualness.

"No… all though it will be useful…" he added thoughtfully, "No!" he said, remembering the real reason he came over, "I actually… uhmm…"

"Seriously David, speak slower!" she said sarcastically, "I have homework to do you know!" and at this David's eyes popped open and he thought he felt a little dizzy. Alex? Worried about homework? Man had it been a tiring day! He was hearing voices… Alex probably sensed his confusion and started to laugh.

"Like you'd believe that!" she said, "tell me what's up!"

"Well… I…" suddenly the phone rang and Alex picked up the extension in her room.

"Hello?... Kevin…" and David's sharp ears caught the tone. It wasn't the tone she used with Kevin normally. This one sounded different, a very subtle difference that would have been hard to spot. Her generally matter-of-fact, sarcastic tone had a slight bashful side to it… David raised an eyebrow as he turned his head away from Alex.

"You were saying, David?" David turned back to face Alex, who had finished talking. His shrewd eyes noticed the faint flush of her cheeks.

"Nothing…" he muttered, "nothing…" He had gotten his answer. Not bothering to acknowledge Alex's look of slight puzzlement, he closed the door behind him. Outside, he leaned against the wall with a very cocky look on his face, his eyebrow raised once again.

"Kevin Taylor…" he muttered, dragging the name as he said it, "and Alex… hmmm…" and muttering to himself as he walked away, "Gotta have a talk with Kevin, and FAST!"

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reply plz 😳

❤️Ysh❤️

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