Fichain #2 | Last part P.44 - Page 11

You defined a woman's love and loss so eloquently in this piece.

That loud smack, which is still ringing in my ears, is such a normal reaction from a lady who was duped by her pare world!

Swetha was tied to Saikat, with little hope of diverting attention away from Veronica. Saiket is no longer a side character; he is an integral component of the plot. The plot is going like an overflowing river during the rainy season, with so much to carry forward with all the undercurrents!

Rutu, you wrote an excellent part. 👏

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

Main raste se jaa rahi, bhel Puri khaa rahi, aapne rula diya, ab main tissue kahaan se dhundu😭

😭

Originally posted by: Viswasruti

You defined a woman's love and loss so eloquently in this piece.

That loud smack, which is still ringing in my ears, is such a normal reaction from a lady who was duped by her pare world!

Swetha was tied to Saikat, with little hope of diverting attention away from Veronica. Saiket is no longer a side character; he is an integral component of the plot. The plot is going like an overflowing river during the rainy season, with so much to carry forward with all the undercurrents!

Ritu, you wrote an excellent part. 👏

Thank you for kind words, Mads 🤗

Originally posted by: la_Reine

Damn, this was so heartwrenching. Why you do this to me!😭

Sorry, ye lo tissue 😭

Amazing one Ritzz!! Loved everything!! ❤️

I would like to take the next segment of it's open 😳

Originally posted by: ExoticDisaster

Amazing one Ritzz!! Loved everything!! ❤️

I would like to take the next segment of it's open 😳

Ha ha, jokes on you, get in line🤣m here to ruin her good work🤣

Originally posted by: ExoticDisaster

Amazing one Ritzz!! Loved everything!! ❤️

I would like to take the next segment of it's open 😳

Thanks Shiri 🤗

Check the other thread also, Fichain #1 is also updated.

Originally posted by: oh_nakhrewaali

Ha ha, jokes on you, get in line🤣m here to ruin her good work🤣

Ruin? You are joking, right? 😆 I am quite certain you segment would be fantastic.

Nice job T! 👏 You tied in Parm’s scene with the present Day timeline so now there needs to be no future leap. We are at June 2023 right after Abhay-Vs divorce and this is an extension of the scene Simi wrote.

Veronica is being betrayed from all directions. Don’t blame her for losing her trust on everyone! Meanwhile Sam is in a pitiable state as well. Hope there’s a happy turn of events for these two at some point. 😒

Who’s next?

Ayyyy.. love you T. !

🤗

That slap!!! OOoffff 🔥🔥

Man there's so many betrayals, broken hearts here. Love is such a complicated mess. isiliye kehte hai pyaar vyaar sab moh maya hai 😆

Everyone is suffering. Sam, his wife(?) Hai na?

Swetha, Saikat..

Ab koi aur S naam ka character mat add karna please. I won't be able to keep up 😆

Lost her child... Oooofffff .... Did I want it? Did I not? Hmm.. over to Shibu 😆