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Posted: 8 years ago
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And Noah Built his Arc

Conifer Avani, the Amber National Park's chief officer, walked into the near-destroyed mansion.

The all-marble structure that had refuged many a fine men, savaged by the cyclone Qayamat just a week prior to our setting, resembled leftovers from the plate of some haughty heir.

The Day of Judgement was almost there!

A couple of dignitaries seated around a rickety excuse for a table, nodded at Avani who promptly presented his curriculum vitae. "So, you are the man?" the plumper of the two, Mr. Pink raised his eyebrows. "I've read the conditions, Sir, and I agree." The other, Mr. Checkers, answered, "And why should we agree to employ you?"

"It's this or death, sir."

Mr. Pink leant over to Mr. Checkers and whispered something.

"Fine," said he, "We'll give you the chance sonny."

"What's my job, then, sir?"

"You will drive the Noah's Arc, Mr. Avani." He nodded. "You will be escorted to a spaceship that has been bestowed with exceptional powers that shall keep it in the Earth's hemisphere till the end of Apocalypse. Post which, you will descend upon any piece of land that is visible and...start afresh."

"And what of you, Sir?" Avani blurted out.

Mr. Pink smiled. Conifer could tell even in the dim light, that the smile was very odd. He said, "We'll die in each other's arms, sonny." Checkers bowed courteously.

Conifer could neither believe his eyes nor his ears. He stood there dumbstruck for a good few minutes. Then coughing, Mr. Pink said, "You may join your wife Virescent on board."

-'-'-

Water, water everywhere
Not a drop to drink.


-'-'-

At last water receded; and a tawny scratch of land emerged.

"D'you think it's safe to land?" Virescent looked tentatively from her husband to the raging ocean beneath them. She had been a vivacious young lady. Though their recent adventures had robbed her of most of her innate beauty, a faint glow remained as the forerunner of their child.

Avani nodded grimly. He had taken on this challenge purely because he dreaded death.

Then it hit him.

They were completely alone in a planet that had once been home.

"It's still home," Virescent tried to reassure him, though it sounded more like she was comforting herself than him because the barren stretches that were diving in and out of the seas didn't seem remotely welcoming. "Come on," she said, "If we don't and now, we'll crash. Probably into the sea."
Yes! Delay death, he thought.

Virescent said, as though reading his mind, "Come on. At least we get to choose how we die. Together?"

He jerked his head, "Together.".

-'-'-

Wondering if they died? Of course they did, but not till a hundred and a dozen years.
After their son Mizzle was born, they had a few more who then produced a good few grandchildren and their line continued.

As an Agricultural Consultant, Virescent had already mastered the art of feeding her family, enhanced by Conifer's adventurous instincts, they soon got the knack of hunting. Together, they started a new progeny.

"Because of them, we exist." finished Esther the II, the teacher at Conifer School of History and Culture. "

-'-'-

Well yes, that's the first story of the progeny of the advanced humans, copied for word from the 'Ancient Book of Progeny'.

The lovely, evergreen tale of love and dedication that survived the Great Deluge.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res :)
Lovely start 😳
Edited by Cluny13 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Whoa. This was different, very very different Pro!
An interesting read, I must say. Simple yet deep, it was also very cute!😆
The choice of names was quite ingenious.

This reminded me of 2012, a calmer version of the disastrous movie.

Keep writing! XD

Muah.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful OS Radhika
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#5
Wow that was a different and unique story.
Loved it so much.
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Lovely os Pro! Once I see a message regarding stories from you, I come with a mindset that whatever the plot it's going to be brilliant! And you never fail to amaze me.
Enjoyed reading the os, love the improvisation.
Whatever the genre, you have a beautiful way with words which makes interesting to read your writings.
Continue writing more,
Sam
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome start
it's just so different from any story
just well written
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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A very very different concept, but I loved how you improvised it worth your own beautiful flow of words! ❤️
Loved It. 👏⭐️

Thanks For Pm.
Edited by MohabbatGirl.x - 8 years ago
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Amazing OS Proteeti⭐️
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Beautifully written👏
loved itt😳

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